Date: May 21 2021 7:29 AM Title: And so it begins (Slight Shrinking)
Am loving this story and would be happy to see a continuation or even similar stories.
Date: August 12 2019 7:13 PM Title: And so it begins (Slight Shrinking)
A wonderful story! And it's a good idea that you think you are a puppy when you transform into the puppy! When will you update this story?
Date: May 29 2019 4:42 PM Title: See Spot Play (TF/Puppy)
As much as it would be great for James to remain Spot, him returning to being an ant living between her toes, only this time retaining his human mind along with his ant instincts and senses would be pretty hot too.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2019 12:52 PM Title: And so it begins (Slight Shrinking)
Caught up now and this story is fantastic. Can't wait to read more.
Date: May 19 2019 5:41 PM Title: And so it begins (Slight Shrinking)
Am still really enjoying it. I do hope he is indeed turned back from the puppy lol. It also makes me wonder if she actually fully intends to make it permanent, or if it's A+ teasing between this and the ant jar, where she's planning to change him back, but willing to roll with it for a while. I'm curious to see where it goes.
And the idea that she can't look at him the same again is intriguing. I'm imagining a scenario where they make an ownership deal. Like, he becomes whatever she wants at any given time for however long, etc a shrunken plaything, a puppy, clothing, toe ring, whatever, and in exchange she occasionally indulges his desires, and will always promise to change him back at least once in a while.
Regardless of where you go I'm curious to read more
Date: May 18 2019 12:17 AM Title: See Spot Play (TF/Puppy)
Hopefully the misunderstanding will never be rectified and James will remain Spot; though I have a sneaky suspicion Spot, oops, James will be spending some time as a leather skirt {then hopefully back as Spot, only this time voluntarily and remembering-accepting everything}.
This is a terrific story.
Date: May 15 2019 4:26 AM Title: And so it begins (Slight Shrinking)
You're doing a fantastic job. Love it!
[Report This]Date: May 14 2019 1:47 PM Title: And so it begins (Slight Shrinking)
I'm only on the 4th chapter but I wanted to chime in as someone who is into transformation, when it's done right. In this story, the TF is definitely done right, but there could be a little more of it. (The shrinking is amazing as well though!) I love the way Laurie easily discovers and uses his most deeply held secrets and desires. Really well done from what I've read so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! And there isnt any more TF uet but there will be more to come soon. I recognize this is a giantess site so I want to make sure to do a good amount of sizeplay
Date: May 10 2019 12:28 PM Title: The End of a Fun Day (F/m 1 Inch)
This story has really been fantastic so far. TF is something that it seems many authors struggle to pull off well (especially animal/insect TF) but when done correctly it gives you the freedom to work with vastly more creative scenarios than size change alone can offer. I also have to say that I absolutely love the "malleability" aspect you included with the size change as I think it's something that's criminally underutilized in stories like these. You are definitely a talented writer who knows what makes these kinds of stories appealing, and I will be eagerly awaiting this one's continuation. Please keep up the good work. I'm very interested to see how you handle inanimate/body part TF, which it seems we'll be heading into shortly.
[Report This]Date: May 09 2019 9:36 PM Title: The Weight Of The World (F/m One Inch)
Awesome !
[Report This]Date: May 09 2019 7:36 AM Title: And so it begins (Slight Shrinking)
Absolutely loving this so far - the helplessness, the casual power, his being ignored and forgotten about, casually discarded and treated like dirt... Can't wait for more. On a personal note I'd be interested in seeing him spend some time as dirt stuck to her combat boots, and/or spending more time as dirt between her toes or under her nails etc.
Date: May 08 2019 9:40 PM Title: And so it begins (Slight Shrinking)
Transformation into animal/insect is not something I’m interested in but to each their own, and you did a good job writing it as well as the other parts which I did enjoy. I’m excited for the focus on the two’s relationship.
Since you asked someone else for ideas, I think a fantastic way to explore unaware transform interactions would be to have James transformed into a pair of underwear that Crissy wears. It would be even better if Laurie was aware and found it funny, like if Jame’s face was centered over the back of the underwear and Crissy was fixing a wedgie, and Crissy might be confused as to why Laurie is laughing...maybe days go by before Laurie is able to retrieve the underwear from Crissy’s dirty clothes hamper. It could all be for the sake of being playful, or it could be done by Laurie because it makes her feel powerful. Just some ideas. Looking forward to seeing what you have in mind.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review! And as for your idea, keep tuned! I have something very close to this planned for a future chapter down the line, and I think you might enjoy it.
Date: May 08 2019 2:06 PM Title: And so it begins (Slight Shrinking)
I'm not usually a transformation fan, but this is great. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I have a lot planned so I'm going to try to add a few chapters a week starting out.
Date: May 08 2019 1:20 PM Title: And so it begins (Slight Shrinking)
I'm quite enjoying this. I'm starting to enjoy transformation, I used to dislike it. I like the interplay between the two friends a lot. Hope to see you continue this
Author's Response:
Thanks for the input! Glad you're enjoying it so far. The next few chapters will be shrinking so definitely hope you enjoy! If you're starting to enjoy transformation, is there any kind you may be interested in seeing?
Date: May 08 2019 10:10 AM Title: And so it begins (Slight Shrinking)
Transformation isn't my thing yet I must say this story is very enjoyable, well written and promising. Can't wait how's the interaction between the two characters going to develop. (Personally I wouldn't introduce new characters too soon, I love those stories where the intimacy between to friends is gradually twisted)
Keep going!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the input! I realize TF is a smaller niche than shrinking, but figured I would try a story that combines both to really give the feeling of "belonging" to her. I've got an entire arch planned out on how their friendship will change and developed. As for introducing new characters, I agree that doing stuff with new characters too soon isnt the best idea. Currently I'm just adding some in there for future use when the story naturally calls for it. There will be some interaction (unaware) with Crissy in the next chapter, but only briefly as more of a test. Other than that, the majority of the next several chapters will focus on James and Laurie.