Date: October 22 2019 2:17 AM Title: Back to normal?
That's my favorite chapter of them all... liked to insertion scene. Also, the description of your caracthers's good. It make me feel as if I'm in place, watching everything happen before me.
Date: June 15 2019 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is a wonderful story. I hope you plan to continue soon. :-)
Date: May 25 2019 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great additions! I like how you’ve set him up to disobey. I sense his punishment is going to stink. Literally. I hope the stink from Beth’s feet so overwhelm him that it makes him involuntarily orgasm. Lol. You’re doing a great job. Hell, seeing him used as a sex toy will be fun, too!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! I wanted an escape attempt but also wanted to convey the idea that Beth is always in control and John doesn't really have a hope of outsmarting her. I'll be updating in a few days, but real life stuff is getting in the way for the moment. Thanks for the reviews!
Date: May 24 2019 11:23 PM Title: There goes Nothing
First of all, I love how Michelle treats her husband! Also, for the record, I’d love a story about the 6-inch guy and Christine, especially her daughter’s mindset in allowing her mother to put her boyfriend under her feet like that to make him better for her. (Maybe chapters 1-3 of “My High School Crush” by dilbertaco would be some inspiration? Minus the weird religious aspect, that is...)
Anyways, what I really wanted to talk about was that all throughout this story, I get this really awesome vibe that Beth, while clearly being dominant(but in a sexy, teasing, playful way), also genuinely loves John in an almost romantic way! It’s like he’s her man! (And John is starting to see her as his one and only, like when he daydreams about her putting lipstick on “just for him”)
The only reason that it doesn’t seem like it is because Beth(and Michelle as seen with how she treats her husband) simply sees being a tiny pet as the role of men. She still wants John as almost a partner, but just through the lense of being his complete and utter owner and mistress who can do with him whatever she pleases... and he’ll love it.
Those are just my thoughts! I could be wrong, but I LOVE it!!! Very excited to see this going forward! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
There's a story of the 6-inch guy in the works, though my plan would be that he is taken without his girlfriend's knowledge. Not sure how it's going to look yet, it's only an idea so far.
The idea that he's her man is what I was going for. She generally doesn't like men and sees them as inferior but she loves John and wants him to have enjoy being her pet. In her mind, it's the best position a man could hope for and she wants him to see that too.
Thank you very much for your comprehensive reviews, I really appreciate it.
Date: May 24 2019 11:10 PM Title: Here Goes Nothing
It’s so hot how Beth stops to playfully scrunch her toes on his little body and send him over the edge!
Also, the fact that since Michelle is John’s stepmother, making him and Beth not blood-related doesn’t hurt! I actually like it better that way!
Author's Response:
Yeah I wanted to make sure that he and Beth weren't blood-related. With very few exceptions in stories here, I'm not a huge fan of that. I only wanted her to be in a position where she would feel genuine love for him in a somewhat maternal sense and put him in a position of unconditional love for her. Making him her nephew (though technically unrelated) seemed like the best option
Date: May 24 2019 11:06 PM Title: Life of a pet
I love how John says:
“I did like when she wore lipstick, though. Maybe some time she might put some on just for me?”
He’s talking about her like she’s his romantic partner, yet still acknowledging that it’s a pet-owner relationship. The fact that he does his utmost to please her, gets upset when she doesn’t acknowledge his efforts, but then has his heart warmed as she blows him a kiss and thanks him while shoving him in her boot and sliding her foot in on top of him.
And speaking of Beth, that’s another example of her seeing the relationship in almost the exact same way. So sweet! Almost a perfect type of giantess-tiny relationship if you ask me!
Author's Response:
I was trying to get across how he is slowly starting to accept and even enjoy his position, despite trying to cling on to his humanity. Thanks for all the reviews!
Date: May 24 2019 11:01 PM Title: Along for the Ride
I know if I was John, I would have kissed her toes in that shoe!
I love how she genuinely loves him as her little man, unable to contain herself in saying how cute he is to her and constantly kissing his tiny little body, even if it’s through a glass jar! I also love how she gently pet him with her toe when she saw him exhausted from her run. So sweet!
Such a refreshing change from the either completely domineering cruel giantess or the totally non-teasing purely gentle giantess that we usually see!
Great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! I wanted to get across the idea that she does love him, she just loves him as her pet.
Date: May 24 2019 10:54 PM Title: Back to normal?
I wrote a rather short review of this chapter before that didn’t do it justice.
I absolutely ADORE how Beth talks to him about his fate. When a giantess talks to her man about what is going to happen to him, and how permanent it will be, how there’s no escape and how helpless he is to her, it’s like the ultimate form of macrophilia dirty talk to me! And the fact that she actually demonstrates it to him by grabbing and scrunching her toes around the LEGO man and enunciating how John will be in that same position to her soon, and forever... it’s just so mind blowing how well you captured that pure sensuality in your writing!!! Well done!
I also love inshoe stuff, and I love toeplay, so the fact that she emphasizes my favorite inshoe position, curled up under her toes, made me very satisfied!
Keep up the fantastic work! SO excited to see where this goes!
Author's Response:
I love the idea of talking to the man and explaining his fate too, I think it shows a confidence in her position of power over him.
Date: May 24 2019 10:46 PM Title: Choices
I absolutely love how Beth mixes being dominant and taking his whole life away like it’s nothing with genuine affection for her new pet.
Author's Response:
That's what I was trying to do so I'm glad you liked it!
Date: May 24 2019 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well, this story wastes no time getting off to a great start! Right out the gate I could tell this would be hot! ;)
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Great to hear, thanks very much!
Date: May 19 2019 10:48 AM Title: Life of a pet
I have just found your story and I would like to say I like it very much.
In general I like the concept of a mature dominant giantess woman and a young shrunken man.
But what makes this story different is that Johnny has submissive desires. That irresistible need to helplessly serve a sadistic dominant woman. Of course it does not mean he will like all things she will do to him. In fact the most of them certainly not and he will be genuinely fearful and suffer pain, humiliation and unfairness. But as a true submissive he receives an overwhelming mental pleasure from seeing she gets a great pleasure from his misery.
I am really curious how their D/s relationship will evolve.
I am curious if she introduces rules, rituals and punishments. Maybe she will enforce a strict orgasm control so that he will be constantly horny and in the submissive mood always searching ways to please her?
Really looking forward for next chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for the review! The need to serve her and the attempt not to cave to it is what I'm going for here. I'm not sure yet about introducing strict rules. Of course there'll be some but things like orgasm control probably won't be included much here. I have another story planned for once I finish this in which that aspect will feature heavily though.
Date: May 18 2019 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice addition! Please don’t lose interest in this story. There is so much that Beth can and should do to him sexually and everything else. You have a lot of people who appreciate the time and dedication you’ve already shown this wonderful story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the compliment! I'm definitely going to finish this story and have a rough plan made out, I just don't know exactly how to do it yet. He will get smaller though and everything will become more overwhelming for him. I've just added 2 more chapters so let me know what you think!
Date: May 17 2019 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this, especially the use of her Nylons, hope there are more. Love to have him under her hose covered feet. Anyhow great story keep it up and look foreword wto reading more! Let the imagination lose!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll bring in nylons further down the line but probably in about 2 chapters. Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: May 11 2019 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for the compliment about my old story. Much appreciated. Great to hear that you have a chapter that deals with the soul-destroying stink of Beth’s feet. But Duck is right- this is your story and I know it’ll continue being great no matter what. I’ve just always liked the contrast of a beautiful woman who’s feet can smell. This is especially so for a super tiny person. I’m not into male giants but a guy named Smutmegzillo on Devianart wrote a story called Smaller than Ever that has stuck with me. A guy is increasingly shrunk and scrunched under a friend’s toes. The descriptions of what the stink and heat do to him as he keeps dwindling is so overwhelming and degrading. It’s like he was being chewed up and ripped apart by smell alone. I’d love to see Beth shrink him down to like that and see what the smell does to him as she just chills. Lol. Keep up the great work. And check out that story for possible inspiration.
Date: May 10 2019 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just got around to catching up with this story, glad you've provided frequent updates!
Stop worrying about ruining the story man, you're doing a great job. Looking forward to the next chapter :)
(I also like the suggestion that Jay made, love stinky stuff. However if that's not the direction you want to go in, don't force it. Just write the story that you want to write and I'm sure it'll turn out to be fantastic.)
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot, I didn't expect such a positive response so it was pretty shocking to me and didn't want to disappoint. Thanks for the advice though, I'll have a chapter like Jay suggested coming up but I'm not sure when yet
Date: May 10 2019 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this so far. Excellent writing and you really portray Beth as playfully dominant. I know a Beth that I imagine being tiny and at the feet of. I’d love for him really tiny at one point and scrunched deeply under the toe crevices of one of her feet. Really just pound her stink into him while she sits and relaxes. Let him be nearly chewed up by the stink as a way of kind of breaking him. I think Beth needs to love him but also just soil and sully him in her odor as a way of showing ownership of him.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much, your story 'A Son's Demise' is one of my favourite stories on here so I'm delighted you like mine! I have a chapter like that in mind but it probably won't be the main focus of the story. Hope you enjoy it anyway!
Date: May 09 2019 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is amazing, I love the variety as it keeps things interesting. keep it going!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much!
Date: May 08 2019 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy shit
Please, please, please, please, please keep this going. I haven't felt the need to log into my account in so long but this story alone made me want to, just so I could tell you I'm LOVING this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It's my first time writing so it's hard for me to tell if it's any good without feedback, I really appreciate that and I'm glad you're enjoying it, I'll be adding another chapter in the next few days
Date: May 07 2019 12:18 AM Title: Back to normal?
This is great so far! I love the inshoe stuff and I’m a big fan of toe play! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much!
Date: May 05 2019 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story,hope to see aunt wearing him in her shoes!
Author's Response:
Thank you! There will be some of that but I don't know how much exactly. I still don't know where to take it from here yet