Date: April 15 2024 6:39 AM Title: Introduction
Greatest potential of all stories, hope we can see a continuation
[Report This]Date: March 11 2020 3:40 PM Title: Introduction
Words cannot express how happy I am to see this revived. PLEASE CONTINUE!
Author's Response:
Haha awesome!
Date: March 11 2020 3:12 PM Title: Introduction
Amazing story ! Loving it, and it has amazing potential to make the life of the protagnonist a living hell for a huge amount of time ! You never know what he has signed hehe.
Author's Response:
Now imagine what the consequences could be for breaking the terms of the contact ;)
Date: July 19 2019 10:19 PM Title: Introduction
If you guys are wondering the end of the story will have the MC gets shrunk forever. Like every one of FT's stories. Or at least the ones he decides to finish
Author's Response:
Thanks for your support!
Date: June 26 2019 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Begin the experiment
This story needs a continuation so bad! Just two chapters and I feel is the best thing involving feet/footwear I've ever read.
Date: April 20 2019 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Begin the experiment
Really great story. It moves at a nice pace and the story line is exciting. I can't wait to read more.
My only criticism, not to be nit picky, are the spelling errors. For instance "but the volatile molecules that contribute to the foot odor collecting in the chamber are 'now' able to pass..." rather than what I think you may have meant "...are 'not' able to pass..." which completely changes what is happening.
Otherwise top notch writing.
Date: April 19 2019 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: Begin the experiment
Great story so far! I can't wait for the conclusion. I hope he didn't sign anything that might make his new position in life perminant ;)
[Report This]Date: April 19 2019 12:57 AM Title: Introduction
This has a great start so far. Great description of the smells, sights & sounds. Keep at it!
Date: April 18 2019 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: Begin the experiment
omg its amazing! please keep going with it your detail is so lifelike i cant wait to read more
Date: April 18 2019 7:51 AM Title: Introduction
I know that's probably soon to ask this, but.. Will he get smaller? In the story description it says "Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)" but maybe you're thinking about passing this limit? o:
[Report This]Date: April 17 2019 9:08 PM Title: Introduction
Can I trade spots with Markus? I wanna be in this test! Also did you decide magic or sci fi for the other project? I’m really excited about that one !!
[Report This]Date: April 17 2019 6:48 AM Title: Introduction
I can't wait to see what's coming!
Date: April 15 2019 2:52 PM Title: Introduction
This is looking very promising so far! I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this!
Date: April 12 2019 12:24 AM Title: Introduction
Is this going to be based on that DA post you made a while back? If so, I like where this is going! ;)
Author's Response:
Not sure I remember which post haha. But maybe I'll write something based on the ones I remember
Date: April 11 2019 3:33 AM Title: Introduction
Ooooo, exciting start!
Honestly, whilst I think that you excel at the juicy action stuff more than most writers, worldbuilding would certainly do a lot to ground the story and make it feel 'real'. Regardless, I believe you'll deliver some great ideas as always whicher direction you decide to take the story in.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Will keep the action level high for sure, but like you said the extra exposition will make it click
Date: April 10 2019 8:42 PM Title: Introduction
Really really enjoying this so far. World building, scientific justification, and story telling through things like letters are all things I love, and things I’m doing in the story I’m working on right now. I see some really fun similarities between the two.
Really looking forward to seeing more here.
Author's Response:
Aha! I knew I'd seen something like this I just couldn't remember where. I'm a fan of your story, and it definitely inspired some aspects of this story with a twist on motives, etc.
[Report This]Date: April 10 2019 6:14 PM Title: Introduction
World building is fine! We know the payoff will be amazing with your stories!!! Great to see you active FT! P.s. I can’t wait to see what story you are working on inspired by duck’s hypnosis tale of the tiny :)!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah that story I'm still trying to decide whether it should be sci-fi or magical