Reviews For Library Lunch
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Reviewer: Justin-Bailey Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2024 6:26 PM Title: Library Lunch

Just commenting to say that I read and enjoyed this! I liked the detailed descriptions of shrinking and mouthplay.

Reviewer: Sheograth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2019 7:48 PM Title: Library Lunch

Nicely done with this one! I enjoyed how Li got more dangerously playful as he got smaller and smaller.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  That's kind of Li's MO.  I've been wanting to do one where the man is tiny at the start and see what kind of fun she has then, but I have such a huge backlog already.

Reviewer: kyary Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2019 9:50 AM Title: Library Lunch

Thank you for writing another story with Li! And welcome back!



Author's Response:

You're welcome!  When I have time, I'd like to write more stories with Li, but I feel like at some point I should write fewer one-offs and more chapters for my ongoing stories.

Reviewer: HuzToru Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 10 2019 2:34 AM Title: Library Lunch

I really enjoy short vore stories. More so when the main protagonist is cruel gts. In any case, I like dynamics between the two. I found Li's role really awesome for this situatuon. I wouldn't mind being a victim. Keep up the good stuff.

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2019 11:32 AM Title: Library Lunch

Great story! I like the main girl, would enjoy seeing more of her. Especially her keeping tinies around for a while, in her shoe or in her pants or something throughout the day .



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm trying to use Li more often but she's more of an impulsive girl, doesn't really like keeping her food around for too long.

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2019 11:32 AM Title: Library Lunch

Great story! I like the main girl, would enjoy seeing more of her. Especially her keeping tinies around for a while, in her shoe or in her pants or something throughout the day .

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