[Report This]Date: December 16 2014 12:02 AM Title: Digging Deeper
Hey I really liked this story and would love to see more chapters. I love how he is constantly being grabbed back and forth among the giant girls. Hope you get back to this some day!
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 8:35 AM Title: Digging Deeper
Are Glen and his friends sadistically shrinking girls who would normally snub them? Or, are they masochistically letting themselves be shrunken-for-hire? The mystery only deepens.
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 8:32 AM Title: Hot Pursuit
Suspense suitably prolonged. Bravo!
P.S.---WELCOME BACK! :-)
[Report This]Date: July 30 2014 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: The attack
Hell of a story revival. Five years for a new chapter. It's a cute story, hopefully you'll keep it up.
Date: June 16 2009 4:31 PM Title: Out to lunch
Hey, you brought the cliff hanger back!
I like how naive Brittany is. She couldn't imagine why someone would want to steal Bobby and make him their toy. That means the thought never even crossed her mind. That level of innocence is seldom seen in a giantess/shrinking story.
The rapport being built between Bobby and Brittany is pretty nice, too. They aren't "getting to know each other", but they are definetly getting closer. Being able to read how Brittany's presence is affecting Bobby through the first person perspective reinforces this sentiment.
Nice twist at the end of the chapter. I certainly wasn't expecting to see Glen quite so soon. I wonder what our heroic trio is going to do if they catch him and his friends.
[Report This]Date: June 15 2009 1:18 PM Title: Out to lunch
So all those other competitors for "ownership" of Bobby were Brittany's fellow cheerleaders? Never saw that coming!
And, that goes double for the cliff-hanger with Glen. Fabulous!
Date: June 10 2009 4:20 PM Title: Finding Brittany
I like how you continue to get a lot of characters involved in the story. Not only that, but each of them has their own niche which demands special attention from the reader. This helps to suck the reader in whilst still allowing the story to progress at break neck speeds. Very well done.
That was pretty slick how Bobby took advantage of Candy being in conversation. That must have been pretty frustrating for her, knowing that her little toy was escaping but not being able to do anything about it. Great scene.
Megan surprised me in the last chapter with her offer to help, then surprised me again with her general behavior in this one. Now, nothing she does will surprise me, as I've labeled her an A1 nut job. In any case, I'm hoping to see more from her, if for no other reason than to figure out what's up with her.
It's good to see Bobby and Brittany reunited. I also like how it's guilt, rather than love that makes her so determined to help him. He's had a crush on her all this time, and she doesn't even know his number. It's nice to see you stay with your initial premise, seeing as how she hasn't really had that much time to get to know him.
I do believe this is the first chapter in the story not to leave us on a desperate cliff hanger. You're losing your edge.
[Report This]Date: June 09 2009 8:20 PM Title: Finding Brittany
I'm very glad Brittany and Bobby were re-united. For one thing, there's no way Kathy could have absconded with him, with her softball uniform being so skin-tight. And, more importantly? Megan's temperamental determination to help Bobby w/o re-uniting him and Brittany could indicate that SHE'S THE ONE WHO GAVE GLEN THE SHRINK RAY.
"As I've told you before, Watson. Once you eliminate the possible, whatever remains--however improbable--must be THE TRUTH!"
[Report This]Date: June 07 2009 7:06 PM Title: The game continues
An unexpected ally? NICE ONE!
Date: June 06 2009 10:36 PM Title: Run for my life!
It's great to see this story going again.
I really enjoy the pacing of this story. The readers are thrown right into the fray, and just keep getting hit by one development after another. It produces the feeling that I'm going along with the ride, rather than processing what's happening. Lots of fun. I like the scenarios you set up, too.
None of these girls know how to conceal a tiny, which makes a lot of sense given the odds that any of them has ever done such a thing before. Continuing with that theme, it was cool to read about Bobby's less than comfortable accomodations in Brittany's purse. Despite her caring for Bobby, her ignorance of what he is going through causes him to suffer a bit. It also shows Bobby is a class act, since he didn't bring that up when he had the chance.
The first person perspective builds suspense exceptionally well throughout the story so far. I cringe everytime somebody sees Bobby, and his interactions (and attempts to avoid interactions) with giants (Brittany being the exception, of course) adds tension to the appropriate scenes. Bobby's descriptions of both actions and appearances are unique and interesting as well.
Candy finding Bobby was probably the worst possible outcome for him based on what little we know of the girls who hunted for him. She seems just a tad bit off. Oh well, I'm sure he'll be able to console himself with the knowledge that we, the readers, will be most entertained by what is to come.
This is an exciting and fun story. Please keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: June 06 2009 10:23 AM Title: Run for my life!
This piece of Candy is definitely NOT sweet!*
*Sorry, dude. I just couldn't resist it. ;-D
Author's Response: hey, i dont blame you
[Report This]Date: June 05 2009 10:03 AM Title: Secret's Out
*Kneels and prays like Gregorian monk.*
Let Brittany be the one. Let Brittany be the one. Let Brittany be the one.
[Report This]Date: June 05 2009 8:19 AM Title: The trouble begins
And, now, the "fun" begins! *Insert image of mad scientist, playfully rubbing hands together, here*
I just hope Brittany and Christina are only _pretending_ to buy Natalie's story at face-value.
[Report This]Date: June 04 2009 3:30 PM Title: Figuring things out
Hmmmm! Could Christina have been the one Glen was talking to? I guess only the prompt posting of the next riveting chapter will answer that question.
;-)
[Report This]Date: June 03 2009 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: The attack
hope the story keeps progressing, it already is turning out great. keep it up.:-)maybe you could add some barefoot stuff as well, just throwing that out there
Date: November 08 2007 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: The attack
Somehow, some way, I just know Brittany's going to lose custody of him (if only temporarily). Like, maybe, to some cheerleaders?
Maybe chapter 2 will prove me right.
;-)
[Report This]Date: November 06 2007 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: The attack
Pretty good and basic... I am looking forward to what happens next.