[Report This]Date: August 26 2020 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Between a Rock and a Hard Place
Well done, Northgate. It could have used a little more description during the sexy parts, but overall the storyline is quite intreging.
Date: February 13 2020 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Fantasy House
The best thing i've read in a while. Great job. I hope to see more soon. =)
Date: February 04 2020 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Punishment Time
Wax play was the greatness I didn't know I was missing from micro fiction. Thank you and please remember that this is a lot of fun to read. If you want to do more wax play (or other more niche fetishes) I will enjoy every second of it
[Report This]Date: April 16 2019 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Possible Escape
Kaylee just casually captures him and leaves him there... crap! I thought that he could trust her. Oh well, he'll have to knock over that vase before he drowns.
When Vickie returns, he's gonna be in for it, if he doesn't do some serious kissing up. I like to see her force him to trim her bush. Maybe, do a little leg shaving, too. She could make him a little razor with a broken shaver and make him her little landscaper...
Last chapter was kinda short... I liked it, though, I like the way Kaylee picked him up and carried him - easily - casually capturing him after all the work he had to do to escape from Vicky's bedroom.
Looking forward to the next chapter! ;)
[Report This]Date: April 09 2019 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Fantasy House
Love it so far. Keep it going!
Date: April 07 2019 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 7 - A Pledge
Really like the situation that you've created here. The suspense (and the fear) constantly building at just the right pace. You're writing seems familar... a bit like one of my favorite authors. Thomthumb. I could easily visualize the sight of Vicky's enormous feet. Although, I'm not into that, I still found it quite interesting - given the circumstances - the domination factor worked very well.
I don't want to see her kill him. However, the constant teasing is something that drives the suspense. She could, (Vicky) continue the thrilling bits to the point of madness... which I think that she has in mind, reguardless of what he says or does in response to this gentle torture, she's loving every minute of it... the way she bound him to her desk top. The helplessness he suffers at her control is so fascinating.
I would like to see her force him to put lotion all over her entire body while she lies naked on the floor - completely ignoring him - and maybe, occasionally threaten to squash him.
Keep it up- I like where this is going!
Date: February 18 2019 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Fantasy House
Its really great to see you writing again. I eagerly await more goodness.
Author's Response:
Great to be posting here again. I decided I need to share more of my crazy ideas. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: February 18 2019 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Fantasy House
Whoa! Suddenly, I feel like the lead singer for that 1960's group, The Animals.
"There is a house in Nowheresville
They call 'The Shrunken Son...' "
Seriously, though, this is a great opener. Very intriguing!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'll keep it going about once a week which seems to be a good pace for me. Loved the song parody.