[Report This]Date: June 27 2020 9:01 PM Title: On the Plate
Love the conclusion! Eagerly await whatever comes next from your writing in any of your stories! Did you plan on continuing bonded? I left a idea review on it awhile ago
Author's Response: Thanks for enjoying the story! For now, there is a planned part 2 for Bonded. Don’t know when it’ll be out but it is planned and I did read your comment, swear I wrote something back but I guess not. Might tune that idea a little bit since it’s a good idea! Anyways, thanks!
[Report This]Date: October 21 2019 4:01 AM Title: Revelations
Oh, that was a pretty story so far. I can't wait to see Alex really enjoying being inside her cousin's belly... maybe forever?
Author's Response:
That might be the case! I'm currently writing the fifth and possibly last chapter very soon, just need to figure out how I'm going to end it. It'll hopfully be out before the end of the year. Hope to see you then.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2019 4:41 PM Title: On the Plate
Oooh another fantastic chapter!!! Great work!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the kind words!
[Report This]Date: September 18 2019 4:20 PM Title: On the Plate
Oh yea, this is sweet. Would make a great next story if she made Alex indestructible and made her travel threw her whole system and Alex loving it. Make her a gut and butt slut
[Report This]Date: September 18 2019 4:20 PM Title: On the Plate
Oh yea, this is sweet. Would make a great next story if she made Alex indestructible and made her travel threw her whole system and Alex loving it. Make her a gut and butt slut
Author's Response:
Maybe for the later few chapters, that could happen! I might do a 'full tour' near the end but I'm not too into the 'exiting' of the body so don't fully expect that in full but I'll do my best to add it!
[Report This]Date: September 15 2019 9:45 AM Title: On the Plate
Love the story so far! I hope you continue to add on to it! Great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words! I do plan on doing three to four more chapters in between my other stories so it might take a bit to update but I'll do my best to get it up as soon as I can!
[Report This]Date: September 01 2019 1:08 PM Title: On the Plate
I loved the newest chapter! I still hope for a scene where Alex is talking with her mother or someone as Ellie snatchers her. Than Alex could be like at least I was talking with so and so so they’ll know something happened to me than despair as Ellie shows her powers and could be like have you seen Alex, and they are like Alex who? Alex could get horrified as she realizes that Ellie could make people forget she exists or something? Sorry for rambling just an idea Toxen!
Author's Response:
I am planning on doing thatjust to show Ellie's power. I do love that idea so much. Great idea zbh!
[Report This]Date: July 01 2019 3:02 AM Title: On the Plate
Great Toxen! Maybe have Her talking to her mom when she’s shrunken and have her realize that her mom didn’t notice even as she was talking to her? Realizing her cousins powers are that godly?
Author's Response:
I love that idea and I might add that in another chapter, I really want to explore how powerful Ellie's powers go with Alex. Not just with shrinking or making 'pocket universes' with the flick of a wrist.
Date: March 29 2019 8:08 AM Title: On the Plate
Great stuff. Love the concept, and I can't wait to see what the next chapter incorporates
[Report This]Date: March 28 2019 10:32 AM Title: The Reunion
This is a pretty awesome story so far, and very well written. I can't wait to see where you take it :D
[Report This]Date: March 27 2019 6:54 PM Title: The Reunion
Elle's truly kind to her cous.
[Report This]Date: March 27 2019 5:49 PM Title: The Reunion
I like the patch your story is beginning to go in... Lets see if Ellie's cousin someday will remember that she is actually responsible por being repeatedly eaten now... And if she'll start to like again...
[Report This]Date: February 24 2019 6:56 AM Title: On the Plate
Really nice story! I just read it about three times, and it's really good! For sure, it's now one of my favs!
Author's Response: Thank you! There might be more later down the line I just need to figure out where exactly to take the story. Hope to see you then!
Date: February 15 2019 8:29 PM Title: On the Plate
Any chance of another chapter at least to see if Alex makes it out of this alive?
Author's Response: I’m not ruling a second chapter and beyond out. I did make the ending ambiguous on purpose so it could happen :)
[Report This]Date: February 15 2019 12:16 AM Title: On the Plate
I'd love to see more of this one day.