Date: March 07 2020 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 1...Sagittarius pt. 1
Woah, what a ride. That was truly majestic.
I must admit that even considering the occasional giant male content, which isn't my cup of tea, i still consider you my favourite writer on the site.
So up next we'll see a series about Faith's adventures?
Author's Response:
Probably so :)
Date: January 20 2020 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 19...Play nice with your new friends Pt. 2
That escalated quickly. The first strike against humanity has begun. Interesting that borrowers and Mogwai have to work together. Can they put aside their differences?
Date: December 26 2019 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 17...The Devil You Know
Good chapter. Glad he was able to save Banshen. The highlight of this was their flight on the pigeon. That was a humorous image.
Date: November 06 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 15...Silent Night Pt.2
Sorry I haven't posted a review in a while. These long chapters take a while to catch up on. I loved the scene of Alyssa and the tiny kids. Super cute. The so-called Utopia with the shrunken humans was kind of horrifying. Always a catch in a supposed paradise. I didn't quite understand why Hope went from not wanting to hurt anyone to being straight up evil at the end. Is that place corrupting her?
Author's Response:
Welcome back :) it's indeed corrupting her. Since that fateful summer, Keith has been holding her back when it comes to using her powers. The only time we see them used is for busy work which is part of her frustration. The other part is simply being a teenager. She got a taste of revelry by killing those Thai child slavers and that's where it began. The feeling of a tiny life at your mercy. What is happening now is the glory of being worshipped and doted on. What one has to remember is Hope is still learning emotional context so this new feeling is very intoxicating. Even eating Theo's father was sussed out by the fact she didn't like how he treated his son. Still... now that's she's got a taste of what being a goddess feels like. Only time will tell how far she might fall.
Date: July 28 2019 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 10...Attrition Pt. 2
Your descriptions of Hikari's spine being healed were quite visceral and made me cringe a bit. But it was all worth it for her turning into a giant Oni and having a Kaiju battle. Nice. Poor Fiona though.
Mirror World Susan is so evil! She must die, forthwith! Get her, regular Susan!
Author's Response:
Yeah. Hikari came out to be a bad ass and it won't be the last time we see her new transformation powers. I wrote the chapter as a way to show the main bad guy was a threat so serious that Keith and Susan were nowhere near strong enough to take on... yet. As for Fiona, I really hated killing her off but it served a few purposes. One, it showed all to real for them the stakes of losing. Far better than a few random "knew for a few days" characters. And second, I needed to show that as cocky and confident Keith is, deep down he really has issues. Issues that will be brought to light in a big way brutally in the next chapter.
Date: July 13 2019 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 9...Susan's Inspiration Pt.2
Wow, Susan is scary when her power takes over. I really feared for that kid she was holding. And speaking of scary, Mirror World Susan is back. That can't be good. Poor Hikari.
Date: June 12 2019 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 8...Scorpio Pt.2
I was definitely not expecting Scorpio to be her father. Nice plot twist.
"They're a bunch of fucking cannibals," she says, shortly after swallowing one of them alive. Hypocrite much, Susan? Her behavior in this chapter was pretty disturbing at times. I assume that was the drug affecting her. Not sure why she didn't try to cough up the little girl's mother once she realized what she had done.
Author's Response:
Almost all of her actions were due to the drug. Dautra is a real thing and the effects are exactly what as in the story. In fact, India is really having a outbreak of users right now. When she broke free of her bonds, normally she would just run for it but her added aggression won over. The fact she didn't puke up the mother showed that even when she had a brief moment of regaining control, her normal thought process was compromised. It was only her training that kept her from going full rampage.
Date: May 03 2019 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 6...Capricorn Pt. 2
The relationship between Susan and Ruby is adorable. And Susan got to practice her maternal instincts with Candice a bit as well. Pretty exciting chapter. I loved the part where she had to swallow Candice to protect her from the explosion. Quite a trust exercise but they didn't have much of a choice.
Date: April 13 2019 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 5...Virgo Pt. 2
Wow, Elizabeth Bathory. I was not expecting that. Another nice reference to history and folklore. The cult plotline was interesting. It's nice to see how the world is adjusting to borrowers being integrated into society - even if it's not always in a positive way.
Date: April 03 2019 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 4...Plans Revealed Pt.2
My goodness, Keith will sleep with any and everyone.
Interesting outcome how the time travel cost the other Susan's life. Even if she hadn't been wounded, her whole timeline was erased. Magic often comes with a price.
I hope the time travel saved all those kids too. Because, yeesh, that part was horrific.
Author's Response:
Well, borrowers don't believe in complete monogamy even though they do believe in marriage. As for Keith, he does take it kinda far. And yes, the kids are fine. With Cancer dying before the big fight, none of the events came to pass.
Date: March 23 2019 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 3...Gemini pt.2
Amazing your writing skills have just been getting better and better for you to mix a good story and macrophilla like you is a gift a gift that you bless us with when you update chpaters i just cant get enough of your writing
Author's Response:
Thanks. Flattery will get you EVERYWHERE 😏
Date: March 05 2019 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 2...Leo Pt. 2
Good chapter. This felt very James Bond-like with the casino setting and the sinister organization with an acronym for a name. Lucy certainly got what was coming to her after killing that poor borrower.
Author's Response:
Hehe...i did base this chapter on Casino Royale and ZODIAC on Bond's SPECTRE. When I thought up the concept, it occurred to me that there had to be humans out there with extensive magical knowledge that THORN doesn't know about. If that was true then why hasn't that knowledge spread rapidly in that age of the internet? The answer was someone else was suppressing it. Someone with a bigger reach than THORN.
Thanks for reading and commenting 😊
Date: February 16 2019 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1...Sagittarius pt. 2
A spin-off of The Tiny People Hunter! Cool! Nice to see this universe again. This was a fun little spy thriller (though not as exciting fetish-wise to be honest. Ah, well). I get a kick out of borrowers, mogwai, gremlins, and the Bow of Artemis being name dropped in an espionage take.
Author's Response:
Yeah... this chapter was more about setup and recap more than anything else. I promise the next one will be kinkier😏