Date: May 02 2019 6:07 PM Title: Singularity
This is a good ending for this. Satisfactory explanation to what's happening in Privileged Protest. Something the Goddesses don't mention and I hope privileged protest covers is what happens to the powers that have been stripped from Arianna, Fiona, and Ella. Do they need new hosts or can they be restored to the originals?
Anyway, Good work.
Date: April 14 2019 1:31 PM Title: Shrinking | Theia
Oh no! Where'd you go TitanTheia? I've been enjoying this story for both the smut and plot. PM me whenever you get a chance :)
Date: April 09 2019 10:01 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses
I love this universe so much! Thank you for continuing it!
Date: April 08 2019 12:14 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses
Oof what are some characters u know that I could request
Date: April 07 2019 7:33 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses
Would like Hannah to start to move Sarah a bit. Think Hannah, Thiea and Victoria should be a group over time, with Hannah and Victoria working together (Vicky wanting to protect all life a sacred, Hannah thinking mortals are 'cute' pets to start and slowly vauling them more as she is exposed to Vicky, Thiea and Ari).
Jeff should be Sarah's sin-eater (Hannah's as well), being a mere mortal he won't pretend to know more then they do (he can't), but he will always give them his honest prespective and that regardless of what they do to him he loves them with all his heart and soul. That in his understanding he will always put them first and endure what he must to help his wife and daughter. Sarah, and at times Hannah may abuse him, torture him, even kill him from time to time, but he endures and not only serves them but works to his best ablity to make sure they are well. Sarah keeps bringing him back because of this and her goddess mode begins to love him just as much as her 'mortal' form. Basically Sarah's 'Kenny' morallity pet.
Hannah though like her mother will never be as abusive to her father, and will help him more then hurt him. She looks in wonder how in some ways a snack size piece of meat can be so noble and driven to put her and her mother first. That and he brought her into this universe as well. This and her interactions with other goddesses with empathy toward mortals affects her as she moves toward them faster and with greater effect then her mother does.
Just my two cents. gppd chapter...
Author's Response: Well, to be honest, if we already are spending our personal two cents, I find it surprising how many of PoGU's reviews call for several Goddesses to form a little self-help clique, that use each other and mortal 'morality pets' to establish some Order of Good. Don't get me wrong, there is something nice about growing a character for so long they reach a different alignment, but why does it have to be in this strictly therapeutical way of "good goddess teaches bad goddess how to be good, while mortal love interest (or similar) helps turn them around"? I mean in Sarah's case this was suggested with almost any mortal she interacted with, ranging from Rich to Jeff. Like JFT and I said a couple of times already now, the shift to goodness is coming (with the time dilation event of chapter 14 that was even sped up slightly for Sarah), but I'd like it to be more gradual, naturalistic, and most importantly of their own volition. Still, thank you for sharing your two cents, and I hope you didn't mind me sharing mine.
Date: April 07 2019 12:44 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses
Can I request u make a giantess kefla with a nano size cabba
Author's Response: Hey there; we'd definitely be happy to work with some nano sized scenarios, however I don't think we're able to work these two specific characters into this story that easily. Plus, I don't think either JFT nor I know what these two are like, personality-wise I mean, and so I don't think we could write them believably. Still, thank you for your suggestion.
Date: April 06 2019 10:16 PM Title: Sensitive | Cassi, Sarah
I like the idea of Sarah wanting to play mortal for a bit and having a daughter and a husband. But, actions have consequences. So, i think it would be cool if something happens to the universe because of this and Sarah and Hannah have to fix it due to being the Goddesses out of time. Maybe they can each gain a new aspect upon successfully keeping the universe from imploding or exploding or something bad...ing.
Don't know how much ahead of Chapter 14 has been written, but what's the plan for Victoria? Maybe She tries to fight, fails since divine power is finite, and its explained to her that she was intended to be the Goddess of Balance or something. And she and Hannah explore their new demi-goddess status together.
Author's Response:
Hey there, Panzerhunter, thank you for your review! We really do appreciate it! Now, about the consequences you mentioned; you'll be happy to know that as soon as JFT showed me the draft of 'Hannah's chapter', I also thought that this ought to be followed up by some consequences! I've already put them into chapter 15 (which should hopefully go out soon-ish), but I'm afraid they won't be quite as all-encompassing as something bad happening to the entire universe, but I still hope that they're bad enough that Sarah (and Hannah) are forced to deal with it in a manner that leads to some character growth.
And there is also (at least) one chapter written that looks back at what Victoria was doing before and after the tournament, which would/should end with a drastic choice laid out at the end. However, the outcome of that decision has yet to be determined by JFT, so we'll have to see what happens to her and/or if she'll get to bond with Hannah.
[Report This]Date: April 06 2019 7:05 PM Title: Searing | All Goddesses
This chapter really made me second-guess Fiona and Alyssa. I gotta agree with Theia.... I'm all for violence and senseless vore, but these chicks aren't acting like goddesses.... They're a bit to juvenile with their treatments to the mortals. Don't get me wrong, I loved how Alyssa would mass vore and even snort mortals, but now I'm conflicted, lol. I'm eager to see how her relationship with the other godesses evolves.
Author's Response:
They are letting themselves go a bit, aren't they. It's probably something that comes along with infinite power, no sense of responsibility, and a slight sprinkle of boredom. The fact that they both like each other a lot probably doesn't help, since they're just spiralling each other out of control further. Something terrible would need to happen to both to rein that back in. >:)
Anyway, thank you for your review. As usual these are extremely motivating!
[Report This]Date: April 06 2019 7:01 PM Title: Swallowed | Sarah
Nice! I almost feel like this chapter was written for me :) I love all aspects of vore, and especially this scenario -- the details from inside the stomach are so much fun. I love your story and get so happy every update I see!
Author's Response:
And yes, I have to admit that this was written with you in mind; so I can't describe how delighted I am that you enjoyed it. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: April 05 2019 7:12 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses
Looks like there was a 'Winner'...
Arianna is looking rough, but in enduring what she agreed to endure she is moving Sarah and Cessi toward her and Thiea is providing the extra push.
Fi and Alyassa maybe there own worst enemies, they keep pushing and pushing, Sarah gave Fi the torument to "calm' her, it having been a fiasico doubt that Fionna will 'calm' down.
Victoria is out and about, still looking for Thiea, wonder if she feels some compassion for Arianna, she was around her and considering how she gets her powers and how it makes her feel, I would gather she does.
Cessi is 'worried' about Victoria and teleported to Sarah, gather there will be some chapters about that.
Wonder if Simon's and Jacob's divine protection lasted...
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Hello again, thank you for your continuously high-star'd reviews. They're quite nice to have! Now, about your concerns; I'm sure Arianna's torment won't last for much longer. If my estimates about the in-story time progression aren't off she only has about a week or so left of her deal. As for Fiona and Alyssa, yes, they are letting themselves spiral out of control, which garners them the negative attention from the others, but I'm sure in their minds, instead of enemies they see each other more as a terrifying power couple. We should probably address the romantic aspect of that in a future chapter - letting them bond over their blood lust (although that might not really be something you'd like.)
As for Victoria, we'll explore her point of view in what is hopefully the next chapter - I'm sure she'll express her compassion for Arianna; with her faint divine powers, she should be able to feel the good nature of the leashed girl. And yep, Cassi went off to talk with Sarah about Victoria; something we've addressed in Chapter 14. It didn't quite come to a conclusion there, but I'm sure with the planned story developments that should get back to them really quickly.
As for Simon and Jacob, I'm afraid they're probably both pretty much dead. Sarah's shield dissipated, leaving them at the mercy of this burning world, which took its toll at the end, when Faith tossed them into the lava... And given how much time had passed for Sarah, she had probably already forgotten about both of them.
[Report This]Date: April 02 2019 9:39 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses
Intresting 'slice' of life chapter, unfortantly Sarah's minions are just a cruel as the rest. Arianna's angels did war her. Theia needs to either calm down or not ask questions she already knows the answer to, she's a goddess of course those she's judging are going to respond to her :-)
Would like more chapters with larger effects occuring, want Arianna and Theia froming an intelligent Good axis which hopefully snares into it over time Cessi, Sarah and Ella, leaving Finona and Aylassa weak and pherphial to the universe, maybe the five being gently overwhelmed by either Arianna and or Theia, or maybe a non-fatal highlander elimation in which there can only be ONE in which as Theia and Arianna through their goodness, kindness and compassion gain more and more worshipers and power until they subsume the goddesses power into theirs. Prehaps leading to them be sufficently power to challange any power. Though their foes are either given mortal lives (if truly evil), or become their servants over time. Just spit balling.
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Heya,
Don't worry there are more chapters coming, both me and Theia have been busy recently so posting has been slow. There are a handful of chapters already written and have been for a while just waiting for things to slide into place. The gentler sides will return soon, just need to resolve a few plot lines that I've started first. Hopefully soon there will be more Arianna. There are also plans to smooth Sarah a little more.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2019 10:06 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses
Like the concept of a Tourney, also like the concept of some one good with their own powers sees something in Sarah to give their allegence to (two reviewers ago) (or Cessi, maybe even Ella), something that engages them in mortal lives beyond them being 'snacks' something that ties them to their 'champions' and the morals and ethics of those champions slowly rekindling their humanity. Leaving at least the neutral and good goddesses with a lust beyond physical gratification. a lust to see humanity grow and prosper, maybe as with Ella's artist to create something beautiful, maybe to create something beautiful for those that 'serve' them. Slowly civilizing and making more moral those who were amoral or indifferent. Inch by inch having them care more and more for those they 'rule'.
Thank you!
Author's Response:
Hey Bigdawg! Thanks for the ideas! The Searing chapter has already been written at this point, While i was able to work in the feedback from the previous review unfortunately Theia has already done her edits so I'm reluctant to make further changes!
I hope you enjoy the chapter anyway! Should be the one after next, titled 'Searing.'
I feel I should also mention reading all the reviews desiring a gentle outcome I would say while I'm trying to bring the nice women more into the spotlight, I've been a primarily cruel gts author for..all of my previous stories, so that's my comfort zone as an author. Theia is much better at gentle stuff.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2019 7:01 PM Title: Sadist | Alyssa
Hey, thanks for the kind words earlier. Yea, I love this series so much; ever since the Charlotte story. But I especially love this series because each maid has their own style -- err, their own way of tripping on power. Alyssa and Sarah are my favorite...maybe Sarah a little more since she's the most powerful. I love how cruel and violent Alyssa can be.
I'm trying to think of a suggestion, but I don't really have any. You guys are doing a great job on this series. If anything, I'd like to see a little more about that city under the Pantheon. I think you described it as a micro city under a glass floor, if I remember correctly. I'd like to see the littles perspective more. Great job! Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
Hello!
Thanks again for coming in with your support :)
There is -alot- coming for Sarah, she has become one of my main focuses recently. You may also be interested to know that there is a Sarah / Alyssa chapter planned after we wrap a few other ends up.
Sasha was set in one of the tribute cities in High Garden, although I've not needed to go to the mentioned undercity. There is a possibility you will see it in the chapter 'Saviour' although I'm not sure how far out that is at this point.
[Report This]Date: March 25 2019 10:03 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses
Alyassa seems remarkably petty and in her way pathetic. All that power and she uses it for crude pleasure.
The tourment should be intresting, would like to see some 'non-aligned' players. Maybe a Paladin or Ranger(Good can serve Neutral dieties) who Sarah finds attrative, and would like to litterally rock his world. Only to have them sware featly to the goddess of life, and then let her know that with their loyality comes an oath of chasty. That a 'lesser' being show such loyality without reward shocks her, as much as she wants to 'indulge' with him (and protect him while doing so). That he denies himself for her makes her couirous and that he encourages he to play (while keeping alive and not torturing) with her tributes, that his love for her is pure and can only be experessed by service to her and to life (he doesn't kill his foes and heals them).
Sarah though touched is increasingly 'physically' furstrated as his every act on her behalf makes her want to act on "him'. She begins to pleasure herself with his image in her mind, having a 'devine effect' on him. As she moves closer to his vaules, the more she wants him in all possible ways with her...
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Hi Ugly one,
I have been able to work some your feedback into the tournament chapter although it maybe worth noting I am primarily writing the more petty selfish power abusing goddesses, Theia is much better at gentle, the tournament arc is mine however and there is a fair amount of petty coming.
Trying to bring the nicer goddesses forward, once Arianna is free of Fiona there should be more with her as a focus.
JFT
[Report This]Date: March 19 2019 9:00 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses
Wish Victoria didn't need to torment those poor folks for her powers. Hope she meets Theia soon and she grants her the ablity to have her powers without hurting people. Good Chapter!
[Report This]Date: March 18 2019 10:09 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses
Like Victoria's tale, was a nice little romp with in the universe, didn't like how she tortured those she shrunk even if it was for the right reasons and that she regreted it. Think Theia would like to to explain why she used the power she had like that, and why it was ok for people to suffer. After those questions Theia being who she is would be forgiving and likely find a way to give her those powers without having to torture others to maintain them. However as a penance she would likely have Victoria work tirelessly to bring peace and prosperity to her worlds. Something I believe Victoria would relish and would actaully look forward to redeeming herself from her sins (even if they were for all the right reasons). Thank you!
Author's Response:
Usually the Goddesses passively power the abilities of the Priestesses, but since Theia isn't aware of the "Priestess" she inadvertantly created, Tori has to find other ways to power herself. It pains her that she has to syphon away the remaining time of mortals (similar to how Theia absorbs the spent time of dead mortals), but in her mind there's no other way to "rescue" her Goddess.
Either way, don't worry; if nothing changes in our plans, Tori will meet the Goddess of Destiny soon™ ... in about 3 to 4 chapters, I'd wager.
[Report This]Date: March 13 2019 1:53 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses
I just wanted to say, I'm enjoying these stories immensely. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Oh gosh oh gosh oh gosh! I know this sounds like a cliché, but JustForTribute and I are sincerely honoured that you like our story! We both love your work, and so it's difficult for us to accept that you like the crummy stuff we're making! Still! Thank you! Thank you very much for your review! It had a very motivating effect on both of us.
I'm so excited, I won't be able to stop thinking about this for at least a good week! Ahhhh!
[Report This]Date: March 12 2019 9:27 PM Title: Sasha | Sarah/Alyssa
Would love the Irony of Ella being the one who show Sarah how wrong she has been with the two times she has given into the evil goddesses.
Ella with her artist are enjoying new eden as are all the 'goddesses' she runs into Alyassa sniffs and notes three dead planets where there was once life. A notices and chuckles evily and dismissively of E, oh Sarah will give you planets with billions all you have to do is ask.
Ella looks with contempt at Sarah (being nature) and begins to cry over the lost tinies, Theia, Arannia and even Cessi consol the goddess of the Wild, while Sarah already having had the discussion with T, Ar and Ce stating she is the Matricarch she does what she damn well pleases (though already shifting slightly if only for logical reasons, you can give Alyassa 23 billion every day, or every decade or let Fionna rape a new world) is shamed by Ella and begins to rethink, then Fionna brings her tributes she took from Theia's world and begins killing them, Ella strikes her and secures a bag smells it and give it back to it's "owner" Theia while glaring at Sarah.
Sarah with Rich, and others has began to regert her previous actions, she want to go along to get along, but increasingly realizes that isn't going to work. The poor treatment of tributes and worlds isnt' going to work either. like Battlemaster-3D says there are greater things at work and the old model and cruetly will end them she senses. So, Sarah begins to assert herself to Fionna and Alyassa if not protecting tributes yet, at least not wasting the resources and since it takes so little effort she begins to make life a bit more comfortable for them as her guilt and remorse slowly grow.
Author's Response:
Hello again, we really appreciate your reviews, and again, both JustForTribute and I actively want to write towards a gentler universe, however we're trying to keep this a slow process. (I admit, that's mostly my fault, I want to make that transition from centuries of cruelty to kindness feel vaguely natural. [Whether I'm successful is up for debate.])
The same also goes for Ella's broken mind. After years of torture she isn't just yet in a place where she'd care enough for humans to do what you suggested. But I'll see about speeding up her recovery through her time with her artist friend Simon. Though please be aware that this might take a while too. JustForTribute and I are kinda drafting several ideas at once, that all line up and build on one another, so it might take a couple of chapters before we can address this. But yes, I promise that things are definitely changing.
[Report This]Date: March 12 2019 8:40 PM Title: Sasha | Sarah/Alyssa
Kind of disappointed in Sarah's caulousness, for a second she seemed to be understanding the pain she had inflected on those who under different circumstances of bee like her in power. Give 23 billion for Alyassa to play with as 'goddess of life' is just DUMB! Life is her focus to just go blah take all the life you want is contray to her purpose, yes balance, yes circle of life, but she just let people die cause 'her sister' on a whim thinks they go well with her nail polish.
Would love for Arannia, Thiea and using logic bringing Cessi on board to confront her on this. Basically you have twice just let your purpose be over whelmed by those who couldn't care less about you, and would take your power in a heart beat if they could. If Sasha doesn't want to 'rule' and be life maybe Cessi or Thiea would be better at least they can count after what Fonnia did to a devolping world and what Alyassa did to three heavily populated worlds, it wont matter how many new worlds are created it will never be enough for those two and as long it takes to develop a world you "matricarh' have on a whim of your 'sister' whose purpose is diameterically opposed to yours set back efforts by centeries if they can ever be set right as you seem more then willing to just allow worlds to be destoryed for the least of reasons.
Would also like a larger plot to be uncovered by Theia, that Charlotte deliberately left, she couldn't destory the universe without killing herself, and all her cruelity and evil caused a Karmic backlash that would of ended her (even with all her power a single virus can take the mighty of us down) so she has her maids set up as scapegoats and will take the fall for her acts if they don't learn and set things right. of course there is resistatance to Theia and later Arannia, but Cessi begins to see it and Ella begins to feel it ect.
That their has to be blance, maybe Rich is visted by either Theia or Arannia and finds not all goddess are Bs like Alyassa and Sarah. Sarah over time slowly remembers her humanity and finds a way for one of the other goddess to 'free' him, she 'captures' him threatens him, emotionally tortures him a bit, but he becomes her north star as she slowly works to re-blancing things.
Good chapter, thank you.
Author's Response:
Hello there, thank you for your in-depth review - this gives us a good amount of points to work with. First off, I want to reassure you that we're actively working towards giving the gentle Goddesses a more prominent role, and yes, we also believe that "it'll never be enough" for Alyssa and Fiona - a point we plan on addressing in the future.
Though as for Sarah, please understand that she has been living for eons in an environment where life was regarded as disposable. This is a belief that can't be shaken easily. So while yes, at the moment she is the Goddess of Life, in her eyes that just means that she can create life from nothing - lives that she still sees as entirely disposable. In her eyes this is just an ability that allows her to summon the equivalent of snacks. But I'm sure that over the course of future chapters, her sisters might help her understand their value better.
And while I don't want to give away too much, we do have an overarching plot planned, that also touches on the event's of Ascension in the last story.
As for Rich, I'm currently not sure if he'd be interesting enough to be reintroduced, as we've already got a few other candidates lined up for Sarah. But I'll see if we can find a good reason for him to come back.
Date: March 09 2019 3:17 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses
When you say request do u mean we can request a story?
Author's Response:
Yes, definitely. Please feel free to toss any ideas you want to see realised into our direction!