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Reviewer: C107galaxytachyon Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2019 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 8: Magic In The Air

Just brilliant! One suggestion I’d make for the sequel would be to have an anti-digestion spell to keep him safe from Vanessa’s stomach acids, in the likely event of her being pissed off enough to subject him to a full-tour of her gastrointestinal tract.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2019 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

I loved this and await the sequel! For suggestions, maybe Vanessa could turn him into his sisters workout socks before she goes to the gym or something but doesn’t tell his sister so she’s unawarely sweating and squishing him for a little while as he’s a sock wrapped around her foot? Basically anything magical and unaware is my suggestions, preferably feet related. Will read whatever you right tho you guys rock!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I really like that suggestion, we will probably use something similar to it. Thank you so much, we love hearing from everyone!  

--- Gentle Giantess

Reviewer: WTH I Love This Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2019 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 7: No Cure

I really like this so far! It’s a little like “A Happy Accident,” because Andrew still has a distant hope of maybe returning to normal, but for now he’s stuck. I can’t wait to see how he and Vanessa’s new situation turns out!

Author's Response:

We are happy to hear you liked it! Their new situation will definitely be an adventure!

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2019 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

Ok, I was not saying thet the characters are bad I was just debating that they might not be as good "morally" as the person they are trying to change.  This is a good story and I hope you keep it up.  As for Andrew not liking magic, I bet he really does not like it now.  The characters are good I was just debating morality.  Keep up the good story telling.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2019 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 7: No Cure

Aww. I was hoping Rose would make a return since she was ready to let loose and be horny with Andrew.

While Vanessa seems like the nicer giantess, Rose was the most fun. She was more sexual, not just with her panties, but she also pinned Andrew against her nipple as well.

Good news is that Rose left Vanessa her spell book, so hopefully she finds some interesting spells to use. Personally, I think Vanesssa may be a bit too nice and perhaps these spells will make her more sinister.

Hmm. I never thought “chick” was that insulting. I thought it was just another name for a girl. Such as “dude” for a guy. Well, I guess Vanessa could be saying that just for respect.

She is wearing a thong and leggings. Would have been perfect to slide him down her pants as a punishment. The small thong and the tight leggings would trap him and keep him snug against her. One day Vanessa....I hope you feel kinky.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2019 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

Maybe, it's just being rude is nowhere near as bad as kidnapping him, dehumanizing him, and then torturing him in my opinion, expecially sense she is torturing him over a misunderstanding.



Author's Response:

He's both rude to most people and is against all magic and people using magic, we purposely were trying to make him an annoying/rude character, but he slowly realizes how bad he is. There are many other stories on this site that dehumanize or torture for no reason, this story is nothing compared to them. Vanessa tortured him over a misunderstanding but that mentally slightly changes over time as you will see. Rose is another personality but many people on this site love those personalities so we try to give a little bit of everything for everyone. 

--- Gentle Giantess and Tiny

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2019 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

I wonder now what Rose is gonna do when Vanessa bring him there. Rose has all the magic. She could still make Andrew and Vanessa’s life very entertaining using her magic to curse them or create mayhem. Memory play, etc everything all the cards are in roses hands

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2019 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

I feel bad for Andrew, yes he can have an ego and maybe he is a jerk about it sometimes but at least he is not kidnapping women and torturing them or dehumaniziing them untill their personality changes into something he likes.  I hope they realize thay are the real jerks with huge egos.  Love your stories please keep it up.



Author's Response:

Don't feel too bad for him, he's pretty rude and being tiny isn't all that bad especially with Vanessa. Everyone has moments of a big ego when they are large and in change of a tiny person ;)  I'm glad to see you love the story though haha

--- Gentle Giantess

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2019 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 5: Help From A Giantess

Vanessa could tie him up. Even though Andrew is already helpless at 3 inches, keeping him tied up will humiliate him even more. Could be a great punishment. Can use string, rubberbands, floss, or tape.

In chapter 4, I loved how Rose pinned his mouth against her nipple, and then used the bra cup to prevent him from letting it go. Basically, she forced him to suck on her nipple hands free. Amazing.

I like how realistic Vanessa was when she found Andrew. She is aware of magic so I’m glad she wasn’t so confused like your typical giantess in other stories.

Also, I think I like angry Vanessa. It means that she will take control of this relationship and use Andrew to her benefit. She won’t really hurt him since they are best friends. So to punish him, she can use him sensually and sexually. It’s about her pleasure now, not his.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Well in this world magic is very much the norm of society so finding a shrunken person is definitely uncommon but it isn't rare. You'll definitely enjoy chapter 5 we had a lot of fun writing it. Thank you so much for giving your reviews man its appreciated

----Tiny

Reviewer: WTH I Love This Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2019 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 5: Help From A Giantess

This is a fun one so far. I like it!

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Date: February 02 2019 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 3: New Toy

My favorite thing she did was easily when she used him as a little loofa for her feet and toes with all that warm, soapy water... fantastic!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed that part! Hope you are enjoying the story so far! 

--- Gentle Giantess

Reviewer: WTH I Love This Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2019 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

Great concept so far guys! Love it!

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2019 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

Chapter 4 was great. Magic allows so many fun things to happens like the snap stuck to her boob for example. I still hope since Vanessa will be back at some point Rose has fun with Andrew at her expense. Maybe unawarely turning him into Vanessa’s insole, or into her sock so she can “walk all over him” like he does to people. The fact she’s tormenting him unawarely and she’s his friend will make it that more fun :)

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it! Vanessa will return very soon. Rose will help Vanessa in a strange way, not how you are thinking though, but something unaware will occur that is completely between Vanessa and Andrew.

--- Gentle Giantess

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2019 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 3: New Toy

Wow! So much has happened in this chapter, it’s incredible!

While the panty scene in chapter 2 was my favorite, I think I loved the teasing dialogue that Rose and Andrew has between each other in this chapter.

“Harsh words for a guy who just got in a girls pants”

“Oops, you’re not pasta”

“Hey, where’d crazy go?”

All, I got to say is brilliant writing!

This girl is such a teasing, playful giantess so you can’t really hate her for toying with Andrew. Also, everything she does is somewhat sexual, so to me, this makes it more enjoyable.

With the whole spell theme going on, you could get very creative about how to toy with Andrew. He doesn’t have to be a regular tiny human. He could stretch, be more durable, and contort to the shape of Rose’s body.

So far, from reading your stories, I think what stands out the most to me, are the conversations between the tiny and the giantess. I know I mentioned the dialogue already, but honestly, I would love to be a tiny myself and have a giantess that is sexy and playful such as Rose. Personally, I would have her a bit horny and naughtier, but that’s just me. Otherwise, this story is an enjoyable read regardless of the specifics of each chapter.

I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Thank you for review and thanks we are able to get some good dialogue cause we treat it like a role play. And thats good tgat you don't hate rose the idea we were going for was that its Andrew's fault he's in this situation in the first place do to his giant ego.



Author's Response:

Thank you for review and thanks we are able to get some good dialogue cause we treat it like a role play. And thats good tgat you don't hate rose the idea we were going for was that its Andrew's fault he's in this situation in the first place do to his giant ego.

---Tiny

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2019 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

Second chapter was epic! I love how Rose is teasing him, and can’t wait to see some foot humiliation/belittling later in the story. Based on your description I wonder even after he gets back to Vanessa if Rose can use her magic to force her to squish his ego even more against her will, maybe forcing her to keep him underfoot, and she can’t stop herself due to the magic so he gets humiliated under his best friends stinky sweaty dirty feet :)

Author's Response:

Well I will say thats not necessarily the direction we're going in but she definitely will not need Rose's influence to squish his ego haha

----Tiny

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2019 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 2: Bewitched

First off, I want to thank you on how fast you upload chapters. I have been following your Happy Accident story, yet I never actually reviewed because I was unsure what body parts you were interested in including.

Yes, I know it’s a bit selfish to review only when a certain fantasy element comes up, but it excites me as well as others who see what they like in their stories. Nonetheless, I’m a big fan of panty entrapment and I didn’t see any of it in A Happy Accident until the end. The story was great, love Lauren’s flirtationship. I was just wondering when she would get turned on.

In this story, I love you just go straight for it. Rose is turned on and clearly demonstrates that by keeping Andrew in her panties. It was at this moment, that I knew I had to make a review.

I couldn’t ask for a better start. It was funny, smart, and definitely erotic. I would love to see Rose keep him down there for a while.

This is a great start and I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the nice review, I completely understand only reviewing material that excites you. I personally love having our story tinies in panty entrapments so I hope to include that in future stories and sequels. Hopefully you stick with the story despite not being focused purely around that and make sure to check out our stories down the road ;) 

--- Gentle Giantess 

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2019 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

I for one can’t wait to see where this goes!!!

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