Reviews For Tears of Thar
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Reviewer: AtlasXII Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2019 9:01 PM Title: Chapter I - Grywood

I love your story and I am absolutely in Love with Deva. I can´t wait to read more of it, please go on writing

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Date: January 15 2019 8:08 AM Title: Chapter I - Grywood

I hope you continue to update this. Deva is insanely cute and I really want to see how her relationship with her new partner evolves. Definitely keeping watch for this!

 

btw how tall is Deva? From the description of her size, I can assume she's massive.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the review. The story will absolutely be updated soon. I am glad you liked it so far. To answer your question : Deva is 170 feet tall, so yes, she's pretty massive. 

Reviewer: chainorchid Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2019 2:43 AM Title: Chapter I - Grywood

This is good but the formatting makes it hard to read. The big paragraphs need to be broken up into smaller ones, particularly where there is dialog.

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