Date: September 05 2021 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
I really enjoyed reading this. Any chance that you will write a sequel to it?
Date: September 03 2021 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Chapter 4 is perfect. Ticks so many boxes for me. So many good moments. Being shrunk even further and the eye at the window?? Gaaah~ d84;a039; Being smaller than small is crazy hot. Having to tiptoe just to reach the tabletops in an already tiny dollhouse sounds ridiculously comfy. I'd love to be in that situation. She didn't even need to go in that hard but sure, half his size. Why not. 😋 Came out of nowhere too I love it. I was hoping she'd make him an inch towards the end but being carried around by a young girl even taller EVEN when shrunk is size and scale goals. So much love. I don't really like dwelling on the sadness and violent vibes G/t has to offer but the description of scale alone in this sets my mind off wild imagining all kinds of amazing daydreams. Trying to comprehend their impossible scales at that size beyond the walls while they're out makes my head spin I love it. d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;
Date: March 16 2019 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
Dream: useful for foreshadowing the real ending or for adding an alternate ending.
Author's Response:
Always
Date: March 15 2019 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
Don't Asukafan and Littletoy have an intellectual property claim on this title?
[Report This]Date: March 15 2019 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wait a second, does Paul not actually speak once during this entire story? Seems a bit odd that he never tries to defend himself. I mean, there's not much to defend on the trying on dresses and getting aroused front, but I would be telling the mom that the sisters have literally been creating dust out of thin air.
Otherwise, I really like the story. The descriptions are all really good. I'm really able to picture every scene perfectly. I presume Paul will be condemned to be this size forever. I wonder if when Zoe gets a bit older and loses her childlike niavete whether she'll realize what she's taken part in doing to her brother and taking his humanity away instead of seeing it like a fun game for all invovled like she does now. Or by the time she gains that understanding, will she have gained an equal level of disdain for her brother as Tory has and see him a deserving of his punishment, nothinng more than an insignificant toy?
Man, this kinda story makes me sad. I'm the kinda person that likes being dominated as part of the whole giantess thing, but I'm not a masochist.
This story definitely falls into the misery-porn category in some ways, with regard to the changing relationships and the logic of Paul not really fighting back, which I realize isn't for everyone. Glad you're liking it all the same.
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Date: March 08 2019 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
His is a lot of fun to read. What does it for me is the masterful description of all the details of what's really a very simple premise.
Author's Response:
Thanks much; the style here is certainly aimed to savor slower, more intricate types of actions.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2019 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent chapter! I like the dynamics of the 3 participants: Zoey the innocent, Tory the wise, and Paul the mortified. Interested in seeing where things go from here!
Author's Response:
Those are definitely fair designations for them. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2019 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love your range on stories Jacksmith, you can write almost anything fetish related which is a true creative writing talent. I should know I've commissioned you myself a lot :)
Author's Response:
Thanks much
Date: January 25 2019 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Nice setup on the story so far. Quick question though: do you have approximate ages for the three siblings? I had for some reason both sisters were older than Paul, but it appears Zoey may actually be younger.
Author's Response:
Zoey is younger than Paul, though the siblings don't have particular ages, especially because the story doesn't specify whether magical beings age differently, etc.
Date: January 05 2019 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a great premise! He doesn't even need to be in a dollhouse to already feel caught and trapped.
Author's Response:
There will be a lot of that feeling in this one.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2019 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving the build up here, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Glad to hear. More will be up soon.