Reviews For Hit Squad
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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2019 3:26 PM Title: Hit Squad

First thing I have to say is: well written.

Those hit squad people don't seem very nice. Luckily there is a girly willing to wipe these bullies of the map.

Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  You might say she's the bully though and they're supposed to be the band of intrepid heroes, but who can be sure?  Not them, and she'll go on to have other adventures.

 

And thank YOU for reviewing, since comments from satisfied readers are the only thing I get out of this :)

Reviewer: Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2019 4:00 AM Title: Hit Squad

I really enjoyed this story! A good, diverse series of endings for our woeful party, great descrptions and a cruel, sexy villainess all made this for a great time. I especially adored all of the D&D references sprinkled about; in particular Agatha's Crushing Fist actually had me giggling. Thank you so much for the lovely story!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!  It was kind of a challenge to put in the D&D references without making it look like it was just lifted from a campaign or being unintelligible to people unfamiliar with the system.  If it gets good responses though I might write more with the villainess, I think she has a lot of potential.

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