Date: June 14 2019 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow! I totally forgot to add a review for the first chapter of this which made me super sad. This story was always on my list of stories I wanted to see continue, so I it makes me very happy to see it got a new update! Your writing keeps improving the longer you write and I love it!
As far as the story goes, amazing! The first chapter was enough to grab my attention but this one just adds on to it. The way you build up Ryan's history, his interactions with Jack, his concerns for Peter, his first time and meeting Emily, and even his pure indifference (to sastifcation) to someone going through what he might be soon going thorugh at Small Snacks, you're building an excellent character narrative. I'm not going to ask you do anything different because it might throw off the story just please keep updating this and I'll keep reading (even if I don't have a chance to review it).
[Report This]Date: June 14 2019 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
Forgot to say but I also absolutely loved the school part with the bully Jack and Peter, and the burp part and how no one really cared about Peter... he was nver found haha. I didnt like that Jack shrunk though then, that totally took away the whole unfairness. I am not a fan of fair plots or fair judgement.
I loved though how Ryan never wanted to hurt any shrinkies and found it unfair, and then totally he still did it eventually, and then not even cared. That showe the entire cruel thing of this shrinkism socieity thing.
If there is anything I could wish for, I would love to see some teenage boy cruel parts like with the bully, maybe some ass, masturbating parts with tiny micros, feeding them to a bird or dog, stepping, maybe even Ryan later would end with his head inside a cruel boys asshole.
[Report This]Date: June 14 2019 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 2
That part with Tim was my favorite, so hot. Especially if you consider what will be around the corner for Ryan. Really enjoyable story.
[Report This]Date: June 14 2019 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very good and glad to see an update to this story!!
[Report This]Date: April 03 2019 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
realy good story would like to see this continued too. this totally was to my taste. I would love if the main guy shrinks and his former friends or coworkers dont even recognize him anymore or know it was him if he is now the size of a bug.
[Report This]Date: March 22 2019 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
also really interestiung story
[Report This]Date: December 31 2018 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
great story so far I am not a fan of slow shrinking but I enjoyed these coworkers totally talking shit baout the shrinkies and ignore the fact they were humans before. even someone close to them like a coworker would be fucked. I enjoy of these coworkers kinda act sureal and like a spycho that is really great. kinda like the Ashely character which I love so much.
Date: December 30 2018 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far. I'm more into feet and unaware stuff than vote, but I like your style of writing.
Date: December 30 2018 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like the start of this story. Even though I'm typically a fan of feet stories and not vore, this story is written so well that I'm really looking forward to finding out how everyone will suddenly stop treating him human. I really like the Tess character... I'm hoping she's the one who will get him at the end (maybe snatch him up and have fun with him and he dwindles his last inches).
[Report This]Date: December 30 2018 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh what a great story idea !! I really like where this is going. Especially how careless they all talked about the shrunken and how they lost their human rights after being shrunk. What horror must it be for Ryan I wonder where it goes to. Imagine he is at some point just the size of a bug and his friends eat him unaware it is him. The only mistake I found was the word incest instead of insect. I found the size of 4 inches though way to large would have been better these tinies in the boy would have been bug or ant size.