[Report This]Date: April 21 2020 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved the shop and all the ideas in it, hope to see a lot of that
Author's Response:
Talking with someone about the idea of the sex shop, I was going to throw like a chapter in here or some of the toys in the shop later, but we were talking about maybe doing like a side story/chapter with just the shop and other shrinkies as like a spin off thing.
[Report This]Date: April 21 2020 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
Amazingly written, I loved the dream part but the entire Steven ending and mid part. Finally some action haha. Poor Steven. This is an amzing idea to meet shrinkies and maybe even some very tiny ones, like ants or bugs. I liked the part of Steven mention how his sisters boyfriend totally didnt like him, or the dog part. Totally looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: April 21 2020 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm in this strange situation where I think that this story is impeccably written and that the world it's set in has a lot of possibilities, but that the violence and the callousness of some of the characters just isn't for me, despite my efforts to like it.
I'm still giving this story full marks though, since you deserve it and I'm sure other people that are into this stuff will love your writing.
Author's Response:
Sorry about the violence but I kind of wanted something on the side of like horrible and like cruel a world to help bring some of Ryan and other people's real personalities. I understand if it's not for you, but I'm happy you enjoyed it up till now.
[Report This]Date: April 14 2020 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really hope you continue this story. It was beginning to get really interesting. Also hope you show the pov of the people taken by Allison.
[Report This]Date: April 13 2020 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really hope you continue this story. It was beginning to get really interesting. Also hope you show the pov of the people taken by Allison.
Date: February 26 2020 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
you may shink him more
[Report This]Date: February 26 2020 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
You used this supermarkets idea with the shrink r us that was awesome! with all these stuff you can buy for shrinkies and how awekward it was for Ryan especially the detector ideas was brilliant. loved it.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2020 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
good chapter and telling as usual
[Report This]Date: February 25 2020 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great new plot chapter. Didnt notice any big mistakes one I remember was your only 21 haha thats all. I loved the Shrinkies R Us idea!
Date: February 05 2020 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh man! What a way to start off the new decade, an update to Shrinkism! This is still a current favorite to watch be updated. Everything about this story has my attention and I love it! It's reflective in a way you don't usually see in giantess media and I really appreciate that quality. The setting is very well fleshed out adthe character writing is remarkable. No other criticisms at this time.
[Report This]Date: February 02 2020 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
Even I am not that much info giantess plots I still enjoy this story a lot, and I am looing forward into it. The dream part was fun to read though I was like no thats a bit weird acting by these girls but then I was oh... a dream, awesome idea! I cant wait to read when he shrunk and how all his friends his gf react, maybe even not knowing about he shrunk.
Date: January 30 2020 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
First, I have to confess I am not into vore but I really enjoyed this story. I keep thinking about it and how the story could develop. I'd love to see you go deeper into the Tess character. I think there could be a lot more to her motivation and how she interacts with Ryan that could be interesting to explore. I have a lot of ideas along these lines that I would love to share with you if you are interested.
Author's Response:
Sure, I'd love to hear them. I'm always open to ideas of how the story can develop. I only have like 2 or 3 key points that I'm going to lead up to so it's very easy to add stuff in between.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2020 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
Thank you for the update even you have not much time. The length was again so good as usual. I would like maybe to find out more about how the tinies are consdiered just objects or bugs, maybe showing some people using them in a very cruel way. What about boys using them too that would be interesting, not just girls. Like even in schools, I could see some boy keeping tinies as bugs in glass in his room when he masturbates using them in cruel ways. I also had the idea of maybe there are chemicals you can buy in supermarkets for tinies shrinking them more, like an accelerator liquid you poor on them, as a fun article you can buy.
[Report This]Date: January 27 2020 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
the story totally got better and better and you are so good in writing out the enviroment and all, characters, in general you are such a great writer. oneof the best on here. totally would like to see maybe ryran being cought by some company who sells tinys, and because of him being so small smaller than usual tinies, his former friends wouldn recognize him at all.didnt see any mistakes reading.
[Report This]Date: January 27 2020 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
Really great new chapter! I love this story. The intro to this chapter was so surreal and then haha, it was all a dream! I kind was omg yes finally he shrunk. I loved the idea with the new boyfriend. I totally would like to see him shrink instantly very tiny, not slowly shrink so he wakes and is very tiny. I wouldnt like a thumb size maybe ant size would be sweat and him maybe even shrink more. Butt vore would be great too.
Date: January 27 2020 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
Good story, as always. I'm really hoping for butt stuff in the future :D Especially something like long-term intrapment or something like keeping a shrinky as an ass pet. (or competing to see who can keep an ass pet alive the longest.)
Date: January 26 2020 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
This story remains one of my favorites, please keep it up! As I said in my prior review, this story is great as its so realistic. Even though I'm never interested in vote stories, this one is too good to not follow. To answer your question, it would be amazing to have some feet focused portions of the story. Maybe Tess gets ahold on him when he's only a few inches tall and is into making him serve her feet: a deal she made with him to avoid being eaten by Emily or Allison.
[Report This]Date: July 01 2019 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far, I love the world building along with the interaction of characters. Especially, that one character who wanted that tiny man (the one getting his last paycheck ), bad, towards the end of chapter 2. Hard to imagine a world that you really couldn't live till your 21. It must suck to shrink and know that society sees less of you as a human being. Overall, I find the conflict with the main character and society to be very interesting.
[Report This]Date: June 19 2019 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
Totally deserve a good rating because of how an incredbiel autor you are. The story has some parts I totally enjoy and love not sure where you will drive it to. But it was fantastic written so far, as usual all your stories.
Date: June 16 2019 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
chapt2 was even better now already. looking forward for next to come in the future and whats about to hapen with ryan. maybe even ad some random peoples perspetive ending realy small and kiled in a cruel way of some boys like this school part was realy hot. the burger part I didnt like the chew part would be way better if he swalowd the micro whole. how small can they also shrink? would lke to see them become really small to like bugs or ants not just toys.