Reviewer: Laah Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2020 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm reading it and already LOVING it! I loved the natural way you described the vore scenes and the interactions are good to.

Reviewer: WTH I Love This Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2020 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

This is a GREAT story so far!

I personally would LOVE to see more interaction between Ryan and his mom! I would like to maybe see Ryan say something to his mom that hurts her feelings, or just talk about when he hurt her feelings before, and she would reveal how much it hurt her. This would lead to Ryan agreeing to spend more time with her, and he would be more accepting of what she wants to do with him, when she wants to do it. 

This, then, would lead to Mary slowly but surely becoming the head of the household. Maybe Mary, Emily, and Ryan would be watching TV. Emily and Ryan are sitting together as a couple, but then Mary says "Do you think I could hold Ryan for a bit?" To which Ryan would feel like he has to agree, and he gets snatched up in her smothering hands. Maybe Mary would ask her "little man" to rub her feet for her, in front of Emily! And then Mary would absentmindedly begin to play with him: rolling him under and between her soles, squeezing him with her toes. And all the while she's saying totally embarrassing mom things, cooing and "aww"ing at her "baby". 

Maybe she'd ask if Ryan can sleep in her room sometimes, and this would only increase the sexual tension of separation between Ryan and Emily as well as totally emasculate Ryan as his mother cuddles and snuggles him like he's a baby again while his beautiful, sexy girlfriend is in their bedroom by herself. Maybe Emily would start to work longer hours, making it so that Ryan sleeps with his mom more often! 

I don't really want Emily to have any affair with Rick, but IF she did, that would then be the perfect opportunity for Mary to be like "Aww, don't worry, sweetheart! Mommy will take care of her little baby from now on!" 

Sorry, I know that's a lot, but you did ask to see what kinds of things we wanted to see from Mary! In the end though, it's your story, I just hope you are inspired by at least some of my hypothetical paths the story could go down! 

Keep up the good work! 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2020 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 6

Those narcs ratted on sweet innocent Linds, monsters.

Reviewer: keithy159 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2020 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 5

loved the mom part. hope you come back to this story ,

Reviewer: Krauser Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2020 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 5

I've enjoyed the story so far and am glad to see it continue. I mainly into F/mf oral vore and wondered if there would be any more scenes of that? Scenes like small snacks where they are served with food is a my favorite. You write them in a way I really enjoy and it's the main appeal of the story along with the world building and how people seem to stop considering you as human or at least an equal when you shrink,

If you are open to suggestions I thought it might be cool if Ryan ever brought up that shrinkie Emily ate to her and ask if she saw him the same way or if she would ever do that to him in hopes of reassurance. I think it would be a reasonable fear for him to bring up. It would also be cool to see anything similar with Allison considering she seems to enjoy eating shrinkies a lot. It might also be interesting to haer some taunting to shrinkies since not many people have talked to them directly. I think it could be interesting if Ryans mom ended up catching shrinkies to eat and Ryan found out, but thats just my personal bias. Im looking forward to the confrontation between Ryan and his Mom about Steven.

Having said that do you have any estimate on the next installment?  

Reviewer: Sketchy17v2 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2020 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 5

Personally  I like the mother and would love to see more of her :)

Reviewer: redfoot Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2020 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loving this story, thank you.

The reason I love slow shrink stories is the progression from a character being an equal to being compeltely overpowered by everyone around them. Looking forward to seeing Emily moving from caring to dominant, and can't wait for Tess to go through on her threat of paying him a visit.

Would love one of the characters to become drunk with power and declare themself his religion or something.

Not bothered about the mum - I vote less of her if possible.

Reviewer: gtsfan4321 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2020 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow, I think this is my favorite chapter yet. I think definitely worth keeping the mom around for a little bit, but also want to see more interaction with the other three giantesses. Tess' threat was hopefuly forshadowig of what is to come... one way or another can't wait until she gets her hands (or feet) on him.

I was a little surprised how quickly he reached the final size, definitely a few more interactions could be done over the week he downsized, could see more of Emily changing how she treats him along the way.

Im also looking forward to she how Allison treats him... or if she convinces Emily to 'move on' from taking care of Ryan.

Can't wait, hope this story continues to be near the top of your queue!  Final takeaway: More Tess the better!

Reviewer: Badguy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2020 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Definitely keep the mom! I love those sort of inadvertant peril scenarios, especially when they're from someone who'd normally care for the tiny if they were aware. This story has me hooked. 

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2020 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 5

Amazingly written, I loved the dream part but the entire Steven ending and mid part. Finally some action haha. Poor Steven. This is an amzing idea to meet shrinkies and maybe even some very tiny ones, like ants or bugs. I liked the part of Steven mention how his sisters boyfriend totally didnt like him, or the dog part. Totally looking forward to more.