Date: June 17 2022 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love seeing another chapter of this. Cant wait to see what happens next. I hope the giant ladies from his past find him soon, especially Allison
[Report This]Date: April 09 2022 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Happy to see the story is still going strong. I'm guessing Ryan will make his way back to Emily one way or another through this kid.
[Report This]Date: April 08 2022 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter. Poor Willow can't catch a break. Willow is too kind even going against her instincts which will now have a few consequences. Just want her to be happy with the other shrinkies shes been taking care of.
Ryan for every step he takes he takes three back in this new evironment. Ryan just cant comprehend Willows actions after everything he has seen and been through. Wonder if he will ever learn even if it costs him an arm or leg.
Feeling Emily might get her mind blown by Shawn after they talk more, something she didnt do with Ryan. Instead of accusing Ryan of changing we might see a normal person come to understand they are the ones that change for the worse by acting like they care but really just ignore or hurt tinies. Cant wait to see what Mom will do by seeing Shawn and Emily's reaction. At least we can see Emily giving a pause to think or semi-reflect on her actions, hope she grows from the experience.
Keep up the great writing.
Date: April 08 2022 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 13
Aw man, is Ryan going to somehow find his way back only to see Emily with another shrinky she’s taken in? Not only making him feel inadequate, but also confused as his thoughts about her may have been wrong to begin with.
[Report This]Date: April 08 2022 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
I really really hope that the next chapter is up soon, because that’s one hell of a cliffhanger
Date: March 26 2021 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 10
No! Please let Willow's competent friends or even the useless Ryan rescue her. Even if it's after she gets taken away, abused, and traumatized, someone's gotta want to try and help her by hitching a ride to this next house. Don't kill off our best girl in this cruel world :(
Date: March 22 2021 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
Thanks for another great chapter in Ryan's saga. I like that you advanced the story on two fronts with both Emily and Ryan. I have to say I'd like to see Ryan lead the others to mount a rescue of Willow. She will of course berate him for risking everyone but she'll appreciate what he did for her and he earns her respect and loyalty. I would hate to see this be the end of Willow and us not finding out where she was leading the group. Thanks for you hard work on this.
[Report This]Date: March 19 2021 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter showing how people act towards shrinkies even if they are acquaintances. Emily acting surprised how people treat shrinkies when she does the same just not as much to Ryan. Both Emily and Mary being indenial about their own attitudes and actions towards Ryan and shrinkies. Not paying attention to Ryan, watching their step, checking if its Ryan who they are about to squish or even bothering to wear the earpiece. Ryan not able to grasp the situation he is in by being a shrikie not understanding how the world truly sees shrinkies and not considering the dangers of his size even though he has had a few mishaps inside his own home.
Glad to see Willow has become such a strong person but letting Ryan get to her was not good. Now we will see the consequences of the group losing their leader.
Keep up the great work.
Date: February 21 2021 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Woo! Another chapter! Willow is back and the poor girl toughend up! At least she's alive. As for Ryan, good on him for saying enough is enough and getting out of there, now he has new friends and some fast learning to do if he wants to stay alive. As for Emily and Mary, it felt good seeing them realize how careless and neglectful they've been, to the point they drove Ryan away even though they genuinely cared about him. It will be interesting to see them deal with these realizations, including Emily in regards to her students 'playing'.
Another little plot point I hope escelates is the fact that older people like Ryan can now shrink. There would be an interesting shift in this society if it turns out this dreaded shrinkism disease has mutated and can shrink adults now. Anyway, Keep up the good work!
Date: February 19 2021 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad to see you added more to the story, i can't wait to see what happens next as they try to get some supplies especially if it involves Ryan's mom and her carelessness for "bugs" :)
[Report This]Date: February 19 2021 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great seeing this story updated again.
Ryan seriously can't seem to catch a break.
I still feel like Emily needs to have some consequences with what happened with her students and not believing him, but I still hate Mary. (I mean she needs to be confronted with her action, the communicator, squashing the other tiny right in front of her son, she needs to go XD)
But I do hope Ryan gets home to Emily, he's not in a good situation here at all.
Date: November 05 2020 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ok, so Emily and his mother need to be confronted with their shit.
I think Emily should definitely feel horrible for what she's done, but there could be some reconciliation.
But I still think Ryan's mother should fuck off XD (She's crazy!)
This chapter was definitely a whirlwind, so much interaction and situations Ryan was put through and I am excited for more.
But yeah, his mom and Emily need to be confronted with their actions and behavious.
Date: October 10 2020 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really loving your story here KickYou!
The conflicts feel natural, and the scenes keep me guessing. :)
Ryan is a bit annoying in that he has a neverending well of self-doubt but drama comes from the faults in a character, so I'm hooked! :)
Thank you for this!
Khal
Date: October 09 2020 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 8
First, you do a phenominal job of conveying the terror and despiration of shrinkies in an apathetic, dangerous world. Honestly I'm amazed these shrinkies have this much energy, or that they aren't extinct yet. The duality of Ryan's loved ones too, how much they (supposedly) care about him but so casually dismiss other shrinkies as bugs or snacks.
Second, Ryan's position is understandable but I'm also interally yelling at him for being such a coward when it comes to telling Emily and his mother what's going on and what they almost did. Just tell them man! Given his decision at the end, to simply leave, that came as a surprise. I'm interested to see what Ryan will do out in the world. Surely, he will encounter plenty other dangers but after surviving all that he has so far, he should know caution by now.
And props to Emily for still thinking of Ryan as a person. She may not be as considerate as she should be, but her heart's in the right place.
I'm also interested to see how Emily and Ryan's mother will react to his disappearance. Maybe Emily will find some dried up nacho cheese on her purse pocket and remember that shrinky she tried to gulp down claiming to be Ryan. I find a certain joy nowadays in seeing giants realize what they've done and being all guilty about it.
Keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: October 09 2020 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
Really liked this chapter and where this is going now. Not sure if you could make him even shrink way more and I cant wait to find out what cruel ending this story might get too
Date: September 06 2020 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really love this story. Especialy this unaware part on chapter 7.
I hope this will have happy ending like Big proposal which was also a great story.
Date: August 17 2020 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow. Just wow. You have a talent fo casual cruelty, terror, and sexiness in your stories. Part of me wants to scream at Ryan to just tell his mom and Emily the truth but man the survival, the casual destructive power and cruelty of unaware giantesses. His mom is a force of nature and it's clear she's and oblivious air head who only cares about Ryan. Other shrinkies are just bugs and vermin to her. Emily is trying to be a supportive but she is totatly ignorant to just how bad shrinkies have it. She also seems like the type who only cares when it's someone she knows, otherwise...
Your stories get my heart racing and I keep coming back for more. Reading about cruel acts by giants nowadays makes me want to fight back but i'd be lying if i said I wasn't reading with rapt attention. This story, like many of yours, is great. Will poor Ryan finally tell the giant women how he really feels? I eagerly await what happens next.
Date: August 06 2020 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love the battle between Ryan and Lindsey's foot in chapter 6, very well written story all around and looking forward to each addition as they come!
[Report This]Date: July 23 2020 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good as always 😊 I am not a fan of the entire mother and milf plot honestly, but thats just a personal thing.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2020 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
I would love to see more of the mom in the next chapter :)