[Report This]Date: January 06 2023 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 9: Smiling demon
Any chance we'll see more from this story? It stopped just as it was getting really good!
[Report This]Date: April 12 2021 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 9: Smiling demon
will you continue this story? i love your story, it's very detailed and showed the fear of the tiny
[Report This]Date: December 25 2019 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: The room
I just discovered this story and read it all in one go. Ann is a fantastic giantess! This was a psychological thrill ride from the very beginning. Watching her go from wanting to remain strong for the tinies to then eating them was very well written. And it was paced just right to be believable. Definitely hope you continue this one.
Author's Response:
Thanks man! I wanted to focus a lot on her psyche, and personally i really like as well how i structured the whole thing, so i'm happy that you appreciate it!
While this is my favourite story i've written, i don't really have the inspiration to continue right now. In time i'll surely update it!
Date: August 07 2019 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: The room
It's wonderful news to see this story back. I thought you just grow tired of it, longing for new chapters :)
Date: March 01 2019 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 8: Unchained Monster
Looking forward to the rest of the story, hope you finish it!
Date: January 05 2019 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: The room
Cool story!
I have to admit, I first checked out the reviews before reading the actual story and I read things like ‘poor english’ and ‘terrible writing skills’.
After that, I expected the worst, but it was far better than that!
English is also not my first language, so I feel your struggles.
But its good! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I often feel like an idiot when i speak or write in another language, i'm always assuming i'm going to mess up either the grammar or the spelling or whatever, so it's nice to hear that it's not that bad!
Thanks again, i will!
Date: January 05 2019 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: The room
26 little men the size of 5 centimeters would be like the equivalent of a thick beefsteak. She just coudn't help it! But now that she ate all those people, will she develop any complex? Will she develop a superiority complex or would she still feel bad about herself, the monster she became.
She loosened up about death, she killed her own friends in a raptus. Poor Dan offered himself like a lamb. I think she'll feel kinda bad later on and that she will switch between depression and homicidal.
How many little people are left inside the room? Do you intend to count menstruations in your story? Cuz starvation leads to period issues.
Author's Response:
I'll be frank, i have yet to decide how she is going to get over her sudden killing spree (which, mind you, was a consequence of the extreme stress on her psyche).
The two main ways i'm seeing are either she rejects her human and kind side and stops to consider the tinies as living beings in order to survive (which is interesting because only children and Rick are left in the room, even if she casts aside her feelings, is she going to be able to devour them without second thoughts?), or she starts to hate herself and refuses to eat any more people, but in the end inevitably succumbs to her hunger once again?
I've yet to decide.
The tinies left exactly 20 children and Rick. Add the first accident, the fake pedophile, Al and those 26 poor souls and you have in totality the 50 initial tinies.
I'll be honest, i was totally unaware of the issue you mentioned. The more you know i guess
Author's Response:
I'll be frank, i have yet to decide how she is going to get over her sudden killing spree (which, mind you, was a consequence of the extreme stress on her psyche).
The two main ways i'm seeing are either she rejects her human and kind side and stops to consider the tinies as living beings in order to survive (which is interesting because only children and Rick are left in the room, even if she casts aside her feelings, is she going to be able to devour them without second thoughts?), or she starts to hate herself and refuses to eat any more people, but in the end inevitably succumbs to her hunger once again?
I've yet to decide.
The tinies left exactly 20 children and Rick. Add the first accident, the fake pedophile, Al and those 26 poor souls and you have in totality the 50 initial tinies.
I'll be honest, i was totally unaware of the issue you mentioned. The more you know i guess
Date: January 04 2019 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 8: Unchained Monster
In addition,
I do like how in the pervious chapter you added a convo between Dan and Al where Dan said we forced her to kill him while Al said they couldnt force her to do anything.
She didnt have too kill him, but she did because she also wanted too, which was evident when she derived pleasure from taunting him. Perhaps its a coping mechanism, where she doesnt blame herself at all. Would of also been an interesting physcological card if Dan couldnt cheat death, to try to bring her down to "his level" of murdering an innocent.
Again, nice work.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2019 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 8: Unchained Monster
Wow, shit went from 0-100 real fast...
The Dan part was scary! Not all the memories of them together in the world could even spare him from her. Of course, she had to destroy his dignity by saying his love for her was sickening.
I was suprised Dan didnt try to talk himself out, putting it on Al scarring him, bargining that he could be her slave for life, or saying he regreted it. Not even using the fact they were friends to try to buy himself a quick death, or that he didnt want to die as enemies with her.
I guess he thought he didnt deserve Mercy... oof...
While these chapters are coming out fast, I am happy to see the quality hasnt been affected. It's only getting better.
Nice work.
[F] for Dan.
Author's Response:
Let's say her state of mind wasn't exatly clear, both the hunger and the feeling of betrayal at the sudden revelation basically transformed her in a wild beast.
I thought that (consciously or not") "lowering" the tinies to a grade that was beneath her, so "food" or "playthings", would have a lesser effect on her psyche, which was already messed up for he feelings of guilt. It's meant to be a self-preservation mechanism, or at least that's what i meant it to be. Well i'm no psychologist but i'm pretty satisfied by this explanation.
From Dan's point of view, he was as well hurt by guilt, so when he let himself be eaten, it was probably a form of final punishment he had to take, in order to wash the sin of hurting his friend/crush.
I'm happy you're liking it!
Author's Response:
Let's say her state of mind wasn't exatly clear, both the hunger and the feeling of betrayal at the sudden revelation basically transformed her in a wild beast.
I thought that (consciously or not") "lowering" the tinies to a grade that was beneath her, so "food" or "playthings", would have a lesser effect on her psyche, which was already messed up for he feelings of guilt. It's meant to be a self-preservation mechanism, or at least that's what i meant it to be. Well i'm no psychologist but i'm pretty satisfied by this explanation.
From Dan's point of view, he was as well hurt by guilt, so when he let himself be eaten, it was probably a form of final punishment he had to take, in order to wash the sin of hurting his friend/crush.
I'm happy you're liking it!
Date: January 04 2019 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 7: Sinners and Lovers
I like how she gets turned on by thinking about the little men digesting in her gigantic stomach!!!
Date: January 02 2019 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 6: Judge and Executioner
"Ann! Ann! That chubby man ate all our supplies!"
Date: January 01 2019 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 6: Judge and Executioner
I really like this concept. I'm curious about the people who kidnapped Ann, her friends, and the other people. Who are they? What's their motives behind shrinking everyone but Ann? Who was that particular girl in chapter 2 who seemed to be watching Ann and the shrinkees? You already got your readers expecting something in future chapters which is a good thing and now with two people in her stomach, we see Ann is on her way to possibly losing herself to hunger and perhaps, goddesshood?
A genius concept. I look forward to more. By the way, I couldn't help but notice the round-robin icon on your story. Do you plan on letting other people take over your story or is that just a mistake? Just curious.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll be frank, i didn't think much about the captors, i simply used them to build the scenario i had in mind. I thought that the girl watching them was basically the reader, but if you want i can try to expand on them.
Oh no, it was just a stupid mistake, i already edited it, thank you for pointing it out!
Date: December 29 2018 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: The room
This:
"Their voice doesn’t get squeaky..."
I believe is incorrect.
From Wikipedia:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Voice_frequency
The voiced speech of a typical adult male will have a fundamental frequency from 85 to 180 Hz, and that of a typical adult female from 165 to 255 Hz.
So, if we take a 5 foot 10 inch man, he'd be about 178 cm tall. Shrink him to 5 cm tall, then he is now 0.0281 of his original height. That means that the wavelengths involved in making his voice will all be reduced by that same factor. The frequency is the inverse of that factor so, his frequencies will go up by a factor of 35.56.
If we take the low end of his normal voice as 85 Hz and multiply that by 35.56, we get 3022.6 Hz which is rather squeaky.
This video puts out a tone of 3022 Hz.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d08SmFKhO7Q
For comparison, this is 6000 Hz which would be the frequency near the upper end of speech (180 * 35.56 = 6400.8)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nyZhQj0k7-s
So, in the end, his voice would be quite a bit higher in pitch.
Author's Response: Yes, i’m aware of the issue. If we keep on thinking that way, a tiny human wouldn’t even be able to survive for more than a few second, for a hundred different reasons. My point was that since 100% scientific accuracy is not possible, i explained how those phenomena worked (or didn’t work) in this specific, fictional world. In particular, i don’t like the idea of the tinies having such a ridiculous voice, it feels comical and definitely not necessary. But don’t mind me, it’a just my autistic self rambling about something minir
Date: December 28 2018 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 5: First Blood
I like the first vore part, an accident and she logically concludes that eating him is probably the best solution. She got her feet wet in vore and now it will definitely be with her.
Althought, I admire how she was thinking about making it painless. I was anticipating she would consider the pain her stomach acids would inflict but it seemed to rather skip over her. Perhaps she would of still done the same, unable to kill physically but allowing her body to do it.
I love how you update your stories quickly, I hate waiting. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you very much, i’m happy you’re enjoying it this much! Yes, in my head Ann was well aware of how painful her stomach acids would be, that’s one of the reasons she tried to kill him before eating him in the first place. But in the end she couldn’t bring herself to kill him directly. Unfortunately i won’t be able to add any chapters for a few days, sorry about that!
Date: December 28 2018 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: The room
Yo I love this. It's like a time bomb to Ann's conscience, waiting for her morale to break, and everything going downhill from there. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks! I just love the concept of a gentle giantess who is forced to hurt or murder little people, and the psychological implications of it.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2018 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: The room
"...fear". Oh I love it! That moment when the seemingly maternal giantess realizes she has so much power over the tinies and the idea of "vore" pops into her head. It will be entertainning to see who brings up vore first, the tinies amoungst themselves or if she points it out. Do people start to mysteriously disappear and the tinies take notice when they sleep? It's always exciting to see how a caring and humane figure is pushed to the edge with hunger and how she can bring herself to do something like this (hunger will drive anyone insane!).
Then the last ones are alive are perhaps her closest friends and Al... competing for life...
I am really excited to see where you will take this. I am hooked!
Date: December 27 2018 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 3: First supply
Oh. Yep, ok, I see were the vore will be coming in lol. I wonder how she’s gonna decide who to eat. Will she just choose, or will all the tinies form their own lottery system to decide random people to sacrifice to the giantess each day?
Author's Response:
Well, sit tight, enjoy the tour and you'll eventually find out ;)
Thanks for the kind words of your first review
Author's Response:
Well, sit tight, enjoy the tour and you'll eventually find out ;)
Thanks for the kind words of your first review
Date: December 27 2018 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: The room
Here I see a sort of Stanford prison experiment! Finally someone came up with this idea :D
Author's Response:
Thanks! It has been a while since i came up with the idea and wondered why there were so few stories with a similar concept, so i tried to give it a shot with my terrible english and poor writing skills.
My aim is to take a realistic approach for the character developement, to make the story feel plausible
[Report This]Date: December 26 2018 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 2: Settling in
I like how this story is coming along so far. I wasn't expecting there to be other people in here besides the 4 main characters, so that's gonna be interesting. Anyway, I've fantasized about a scenario like this a number of times, not exactly this, but just being locked in an area with a giantess (or giantesses). It's a cool scenario with a lot of possibilities. I'm excited to see how this story will go.