Date: November 08 2021 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great story, too bad it ended like this, but it is better that it ends here to what it lasts and has many unnecessary chapters, 10/10 (it is one of the first stories I read)
[Report This]Date: May 05 2020 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Kind of curious if the company keeps sending him to his family on purpose. Lol. Maybe the have an incest kink and trick all their clients.
Date: July 28 2019 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ok I was completely wrong this was the most disturbing chapter. Being used by your brother, being forced to keep a job that literally destroyed you and then being sent to your family again for worse activates. I wish you'd just sent him somewhere else as a nice change of pace but I guess it's your story
Date: July 28 2019 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
I really feel sorry for Kyle. This is literally one of the worst things that could happen to a person and I'm now kinda afraid to read what you think is worse in the third chapter. Anyways great story and wish me like reading the ending.
Date: June 15 2019 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
Sad to see this is done, was excited to see what more the mom had in store.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2019 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
did not read this before much because the previous plot was not really interested in but this brother part was amazing
[Report This]Date: May 18 2019 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
really liked this chapter totally to my liking
[Report This]Date: May 16 2019 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
This story wasnt much for me in most parts but this last chapter totally made up for it. Liked it really a lot for most parts!!!
[Report This]Date: May 15 2019 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
That was something I was hoping for hehe. So glad you finished it with a little brother accidetent. Too bad it is over, I would literally read on and on and on with other chapters like this one. I could see the brother now stealing his moms phone again and trying something out, and he could be like mh could this thing maybe produce two of the same objects, lets find out. And then the concousness of the older brother stays with the object the kid brother keeps, and he puts the fake one back to the moms place. This chapter was HOT.
[Report This]Date: May 15 2019 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
wasnt a fan of chapter 2 but this one... was fantastic!! is this story finished or will there be more? I would love to see the brother use his moms phone again and then something horrible happens, I just loved the ass part a lot in this chapter.
Date: May 15 2019 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
more moms farting on sons stories! where are more like this?
[Report This]Date: May 14 2019 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
To quote the avengers "We could use a little worse"
Date: May 08 2019 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
When does the final chapter come out?
Date: April 23 2019 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
Rather enjoying this story. Specifically I enjoy how cruel the mother is to what she thinks is a random pervert but is actually her own son. Like, she'd be nice and caring to him and cruel and evil to everyone else and right now she thinks he is someone in the "everyone else" category. I really want to see what will happen after he returns to normal (if he does at all) and how he will react after. If he is disposed of and his mother wonders why her son never came home, she might research into where he went for his job, and learn the horrible truth.
Good work, I home this story continues.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I had 2 ideas of how it should end but commission picked the one he liked (I hope you enjoy it too). I enjoy reading reviews/remarks. I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Date: April 09 2019 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh man. great chapter! I cant wait to see the fate of Kyle. Will his mother realize who he is? If so, will she send him back to the company so he can be changed back to normal, or will she decide to keep him forever?
[Report This]Date: March 22 2019 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
Read both of your last chapters this and the a shitty job over the past hour. You are such a great writer just wow. Plot of this chapter wasnt much for me but maybe with the brother in another chapter somehow. Keep it up. Looking forward for the Ashely story to continue.
Date: March 19 2019 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing story, cant wait for the conclusion!
Date: March 16 2019 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
YAY your back loved the whole of chapter 2 one if not the best stroy ive ready even if not everything is my cup of tea I love all of it because you do it so well
[Report This]Date: March 14 2019 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
Really good written. I am not a fan of mommy and daddy kinks so that wasnt really a thing for me, but I am glad youre writing again more, missed your stories. I am not much interested in other stories on here youre the reason I come on here on a regular base.