[Report This]Date: March 04 2019 6:53 AM Title: Graduation
Hey any news on a update? Love this story and cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Working on it :) Thanks for inquiring, it does let me know that people wanna see this story.
I have been working on other foot fetish stuff on non giantess sites and slowly writing this alongside them. I apologise for keeping you waiting but I shall one day finish the next chapter!
Date: February 04 2019 6:35 PM Title: Graduation
This story is amazing! Please continue! :) i am really excited to read more
Author's Response:
Thanks! I will continue this one, I promise! Been writing non giantess fetish stuff for a bit so adding to this whenever I can.
Date: January 21 2019 3:18 PM Title: Interlude - Her littlest fan
Maybe I'm just biased because we have different tastes, but anyway - hurrah for (some) interludes!
Author's Response:
I take it you don't like incest stuff? No worries my friend, they'll be plently of non-incest too especially in interludes. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: January 20 2019 12:00 PM Title: Interlude - Her littlest fan
I really love where this story is going! The interlude was great to read. Cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the interlude! I was concerned that it might detract from the rest of the story but it seems that wasn't the case haha.
Date: January 19 2019 9:52 AM Title: Graduation
Checking everyday in the hope to see an update !
You really hooked me up :)
Author's Response:
Updated my friend! Glad you're enjoying the story, hope you like the latest chapter :)
[Report This]Date: January 17 2019 7:12 AM Title: Family outing
Great story so far. Curious to see if we will get some forced ejaculations from feet some time in the future? Regardless I love the build up to what’s coming. Hope we will see chapter 4 soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
I'll have you know that forced ejaculations with giant feet is definitely included in the curriculum at Hemlock, so I think you'll be pleased.
Date: January 10 2019 2:58 PM Title: Family outing
Hey man big fan of your work and love the slow build up to his inevitable shrinking. Am really looking forward to chapter 4
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! Hopefully will have chapter 4 out soon :)
Date: January 03 2019 3:30 PM Title: Family outing
Wow, I didn't expect her to be so straightforward with her intentions, but it makes sense;
especially because while she's waiting for him to screw up she can get him in trouble with mom, and being nervous won't do him any favours.
If it doesn't spoil anything - is there a reason why their mom didn't become a SCO, or will it be revealed?
fwiw: from the previous chapter I guessed he would have to fear those socks becoming his new bedroom for a while, now I'm waiting to see if his mom can shrink him directly or needs to go through RIley, and if she can overcome that.
Not to mention who else Riley plans to involve - does he have an ex gf? :D
Author's Response:
Indeed, whether it be lingering immaturity or just her cruel nature Riley wasn't hesitant to put the pressure onto Tom, knowing that she had nothing to lose doing so. Tom's anxiety over Riley's plan will definietly have an effect and cause some serious anxiety. Although it isn't their mom that she's trying to get him in trouble with, it is the government as they are the ones who have the power to shrink people. As of yet there's no particular reason that Michelle didn't become an SCO, her life just didn't go in that direction. But if I do think of a reason interesting enough I will add it in.
Mom can't do anything to shrink Tom which he is surely quite grateful for. The only way for someone to shrink (legally) is to be sentenced to such a fate and shrunken down by the Association. Other, shadier shrinkings will be explored eventually, but as an SCO Riley isn't interested in those methods.
I have some good ideas for what Riley's overall plan is, but I don't want to spoil anything ;) Tom doesn't have an ex gf, potential girlfriends often lose interest because of Riley's habit of humiliating him in front of them, a role that Michelle took over.
Thanks for the review, hope these answers are sufficient!
Date: January 01 2019 2:40 PM Title: Graduation
Still an incredible work. Can't wait for what's to come. The build-up is great !
Author's Response:
Thanks! It feels good being able to take my time on this one. Chapters won't be frequent but with that sacrifice all should be high quality.
[Report This]Date: December 22 2018 10:15 AM Title: Graduation
First time ever actually writing a review for anything on here (shame on me), but after seeing that second chapter I felt it would be a disservice not to pass on some much deserved praise, as there's not been nearly enough so far.
I really think this story is really shaping up to be something immensely special, and I can't give you enough credit for that. I also can't imagine the amount of time and effort you've put into building this story, particularly into the implement of all the 'world building' that seems to be going on (descriptions and functionality of the technology and kit that Riley has, as well as the wider society).
I've been a fan of your writing for a while, and I must say it's far more intricate and meaningful than a lot of stuff on here. You really seem to have a great grasp of how important it is to tease out the main focus (suffering/torment/scent/sweat all that stuff), whilst also never forgetting how vital it is to build up the tension to something so the payoff is really something.
Personally I'm not the biggest fan of the more maternal based foot-stuff, although I certainly can't disparage those who do, however the prospect of Riley being the focal point of the torment of Tom or others, particularly with the inclusion of size manipulation, is infinitely compelling.
Really looking forward to what's in store next, especially once Riley or size enters the main picture (maybe both at once, who knows), and full credit to you man.
Keep up the fantastic work and can't wait to see what comes next!
Author's Response:
Thank you for putting so much thought into your review!
It's nice to write a longer story but I find it difficult somtimes knowing if I've overloaded on build up or fetish content (the latter is more of a worry in short stories), feedback like this reassures me that I'm on the right track haha. Like I've said in response to the previous, also helpful, review, I think I'll include specifications of what content shall be featured in a particular chapter so any fans of the story know what to skim and what to actually read, ensuring that all readers get the most enjoyment without actually changing the main focus of the story. Although for folks like yourself looking forward to Riley based content, there will be snippets and I intend for the ending chapters (when I eventually write them) to be based almost entirely aorund her and Tom.
Very excited to use some of the SCO kit in future chapters, so I hope you look forward to seeing it!
No idea how to properly end this response currently so Merry Christmas!
Date: December 19 2018 8:27 AM Title: Show and tell
Not a fan of getting into your family's underwear, so expect me to skip those chapters.
DO WRITE THEM! You would never get anything written if you listened to every "I don't like xyz", not to mention at times it's not binary - I'd rather the giantess not to be a relative and I dislike descriptions of footsweat toejam etc, yet many of my favorite authors involve family scenarios and when it comes to foot-heavy stuff I replace it in my mind with "blah blah blah".
With that out of the way... I love that she basically needs to have others torment him, I guess she will find it a more interesting game as well (unless she's looking to frame him, but where's the fun in that? oh wait...), and also he might become nervous enough to do something seriously stupid and screw himself.
The only criticism so far is that (unless I missed it of course - hey, a chance to reread this!) there's no mention of the socks in his mouth - he complains about dirt&sweat but goes out to eat with his mouth full?
(also, if the socks are still in, Riley understands him perfectly :)
PS
"Don't overestimate them mom" - "underestimate"? otherwise I really don't understand what she means.
PPS
Is there any chance of any shrinking in 2018? If not, np and happy xmas/new year/you name it!
Author's Response:
Hi and thanks for leaving another review!
Firstly, I appreciate the mistakes being pointed out I'm not a great proof-reader haha and tend to miss things, they should be fixed now. Totally slipped my mind to actually show Tom taking the socks out of his mouth.
Understandable about not liking the sound of everything promised, so in that case I think I'l start giving warnings at the beginnings of chapters, hopefully that shall make the story more enjoyable for youself and others who aren't interested in particular themes. In terms of incestuous giantess content theres gonna be a good amount of non relative giantess action in this story, most of the incest stuff will be when Tom inevitably shrinks and in one or two interludes.
There is some actual shrinking in the upcoming chapter when it is finished but it is quite minimal (trying not to rush it although I am fully aware of what site i'm posting on hahaha), but in the planned 4th chapter, the first interlude, you'll see quite a lot of big/little action and the same is true for the chapters after that with a few non-shrinking chapters so that the story isn't always at 100%. It will be a while until Riley finally has the opportunity to shrink her big brother but I aim to make the pay off worth it.
Date: November 30 2018 9:31 AM Title: Graduation
Rileys's mom should play the adult and teach her that while improvising can be fun it's good HABITS that actually matter, even when it comes to shrinking...
Anyway, this looks promising :D
Author's Response:
Aye, perhaps Michelle can teach her daughter the kind of things that she would have missed out on at the academy, who knows? ;)
Thank you! It's nice to put a little more effort into setting things up rather than trying to reach the action quickly to try and keep readers interested. I hope I can make the pay offs worth it!
[Report This]Date: November 29 2018 5:45 PM Title: Graduation
Riley's are the most evil, I've seen it first hand.
Author's Response:
This girl definitely fits the bill, I assure you haha
Thanks for the review, hope you enjoyed what you have seen!