[Report This]Date: May 30 2019 7:28 PM Title: Graduation
Yes I too absolutely love the sexually charged scenes also. I think that’s when you are at your best. But I really like how you are building the world and plot in this story. Just hope you don’t abandon it! This is could be a classic in the making!
Author's Response:
Don't worry, no intention to abandon this one and I have plenty of ideas to keep the story fresh. I can just be... a bit of a slow writer sometimes haha. That's kind of you to say so as well, I certainly hope I have it within me to write a classic.
[Report This]Date: May 30 2019 12:24 AM Title: An old crush
The chapter "an old crush" is just insanely good, I love the more sexually charged scenes you write involving feet. Hope we get to see more throughout the story :)
Author's Response:
More sexually charged scenes, got it!
I was planning on having more sexual and intense scenes, much like the one you are referring to, as the story heats up.
Thanks for the feedback :)
Date: May 24 2019 3:49 AM Title: Graduation
Loved the interaction with Riley's Friends ! Hope to see again the shy one who would have liked to make him kiss her ass but didn't dare do it...
Amazing stuff as always
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it :)
Don't worry, we'll see a lot more from these two, Beth especially. I have some fun plans for her.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2019 2:45 PM Title: Practice makes perfect
You are simply the best writer on here! Cant wait for the next part!!!
Author's Response:
Wow! Considering how talented the writers on this site are, that's some high praise indeed, thank you :)
Thanks as well for your continued support!
Date: May 23 2019 11:13 AM Title: Graduation
I love this story. Can't wait to see where it goes. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you! This is probably my most ambitious project so far so I'll try and take it in interesting directions for sure.
[Report This]Date: May 18 2019 7:02 AM Title: An old crush
Any idea when the next update is gonna be? I absolutely love this story!
Author's Response:
Hey! Thanks for showing so much interest as always :)
Couple of days and next chapter should be done. Just gotta finish the damn thing off and give it a read over for errors (which I may end up missing regardless haha), then it'll be ready.
Date: May 10 2019 9:27 AM Title: An old crush
I was under the impression that nobody could possibly like a SCO's feet, so I'm as surprised as she is; she might experiment if she can get him to like them btw (idea shamelessly stolen by a series of clips by Ceara Lynch).
Re the enjoyment: you should start to use the past imperative, problem solved ;p
Other than that... romantic Riley is the best Riley!
Author's Response:
They're a rare breed, but they are out there! I believe Riley made a brief mention of people like that in chapter 2. That is a great idea, and an excellent excuse to do some 'research' hehe. Funny you should bring up Ceara Lynch on this chapter as Naomi was inspired by a foot model of the same name. Got a plan in mind for Teddy but that plan could be altered somewhat.
Indeed she is, got a knack for romance does this girl :)
[Report This]Date: May 10 2019 7:13 AM Title: An old crush
Great chapter! Things are starting to heat up. Any chance we will get to see Naomi's punishment for her prisoner? Glad to see your giving more attention to this story!
Author's Response:
Aye I'm having slow periods but getting a lot more writing done than usual on this story. Glad you liked it, I am happy it's getting to a stage where I can make events a lot more smutty haha. Oh yes, Naomi's plan shall be seen in the next interlude.
[Report This]Date: May 09 2019 6:43 PM Title: An old crush
Riley is such a wonderful bitch.
Author's Response:
Ah, if only we were in Teddy's position!
Date: May 02 2019 3:58 PM Title: Interlude - Make or break
Better than the previous interlude imho - I'm curious about the future SCOs, some part of me is rooting for Mr Locke to reunite with his mistress under his ex wife, and hopefully that is it for now.
But be careful, now you have yet more characters to handle :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! What did you prefer about this one?
Sorry, but there is no chance of Mr Locke and his mistress being reunited so long as Patricia is in charge. She despises him and never wishes to interact with him again.
Oh I know haha, it's a little intimidating but characters from the interludes will only play minor roles in future chapters if any at all. That's how I plan to manage them anyway. The interludes are mostly there to add some extra flavour and it breaks it up a bit on my end and makes the story easier to write.
As always, appreciate the review :)
[Report This]Date: May 01 2019 2:58 PM Title: Interlude - Make or break
Always great to see this back!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Gonna try and update again soon.
Date: April 01 2019 1:48 PM Title: Tom's first date
Glad to see your back on the giantess train! I’m liking this story so far so keep it up bro, maybe you can use some of this newfound motivation to take a crack at “beneath the bullies” just a thought :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you're liking it! Honestly I've opened up the story a few times intending to continue but I just feel that my writing style has changed. Maybe if I do continue I can put a disclaimer at the start explaining the change? IDK. Sorry man, I just don't wanna force it.
[Report This]Date: March 29 2019 9:53 PM Title: Tom's first date
*is a veteren of smelly Riley feet*
Stay the course tom.
Author's Response:
He's in it for the long haul ;)
[Report This]Date: March 29 2019 7:46 PM Title: Tom's first date
Amazing chapter as always! I dont think you write too many words. your detail to each chapter is amazing. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Phew, I look at the rapidly rising word count and worry sometimes, good to know!
As always, thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: March 27 2019 2:18 PM Title: Riley's first shrinkee
I love the story so far. I love the idea of a society built around genuine foot slavery. I hope a few things happen. I hope that the enslavement techniques used by Candy J are adopted by all Shrink Officers, and Tom one day truly, unequivocally, and unabashedly falls in love with either his mother or sister's demanding soles. I also hope that we focus more on the stomping nature of these women's soles. These women have beautiful feet, smelly feet, but we also need to look at what it feels like to be cooked underneath a relentlessly stomping foot. The painful, continuous, remorseless steps and stomps as the beautiful sole above the shrinkee just steps and steps and steps and steps down upon the living-insole thousands of times per day.
Author's Response:
Happy to hear!
Actual (unwilling) foot slavery is still illegal in this society, but that doesn't mean that women with connections (for example Candy J) can't bend the rules. Not a terrible idea, not entirely sure yet what path I shall follow regarding Tom and his mom/sister when and if he gets shrunk.
Don't worry, I shall get more detailed with the experiences of shrinkees, however in this chapter I didn't want to give the shrinkee too much of a perspective. In a chapter where the main perspective belongs to the shrinkee you'll see how bad they have it.
Date: March 27 2019 8:00 AM Title: Riley's first shrinkee
First of all if I was in Tom's situation I'd look up the regulations. You'd think they'd prevent SCOs from being assigned to family members...
Author's Response:
That... is a really good idea. Not sure how Tom (or I for that matter) have never thought of that.
Also, SCOs are sometimes assigned to family members if the circumstances permit. I'll be sure to elaborate in future chapters. If the issue is that you think relatives might show too much mercy to their assigned shrinkee, remember that these women spent a year learning to be an SCO and that the Association is very thorough when reviewing such cases. But who knows, maybe Tom won't be assigned to a family member ;)
[Report This]Date: March 26 2019 4:53 PM Title: Graduation
The long foot of the law always wins in the end!
Author's Response:
Indeed it does! Hope you're enjoying the story.
Date: March 26 2019 3:02 PM Title: Riley's first shrinkee
Wait, you're still alive? and we get to the shrinking? unbelievable! ;=)
Since extending the terms of punishment (or toying with the idea) happens to be something I love, I'll give Riley an unrequested suggestion: cut him some slack.
Plenty, actually.
And make sure that Michelle knows about it, so that when you finally strike, she'll be the one to point out how lenient you've been all those other times, and maybe she could even be the one to suggest an extension, or decide some changes in routine to prevent future misbehaviors etc.
Author's Response:
I can confirm that I am indeed still kicking :)
I like the idea of Riley easing up on her brother a bit and building herself up in the eyes of others as a saint. Will try to work it into her character. With what I have in mind, an extension might not be necessary for Tom so it'll be out of the hands of his family. Although without spoiling anything, sentence extensions will play a big part.
Thanks for yet another helpful review, glad you're continuing to follow the story!
Date: March 19 2019 5:28 PM Title: Graduation
Can't wait :). Your stories inspire me a lot. I've been meaning to ask you, would it be ok if I borrowed your hypnosis idea (with credit of course). I have an idea which is a twist on one of the chapters in Tales of the tiny (volume 1) - The Dangers of Hypnosis.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I think I've said so before but your stories are part of the reason I tried writing this kinda stuff so that means a lot :)
Honestly, go right ahead! That goes for anyone really, I write stuff into my stories that I myself am interesting in so it is always enjoyable to see such ideas in the work of other writers. Can't wait to see what you do with it.
Date: March 10 2019 5:51 PM Title: Graduation
Finish the fuckin story, man! (Fear and loathing)
Author's Response:
I'll do it! Just don't hurt me!
All joking aside, I do intend to finish this (eventually). Having a bit of a slow patch and writing non gts foot stuff in the meantime but soon enough the next chapter will be ready. Sorry for the wait! I do appreciate the enthusiasm though haha :)