[Report This]Date: November 26 2018 10:04 AM Title: Setting the stage
Your answer make me want to see this development even more.
The writers on The Titan Empire universe seem not ready to give us readers the big interesting story after Alliance: Intelligence.
[Report This]Date: November 25 2018 7:50 PM Title: Setting the stage
I'm less farmiliar with the Battletech storyline and characters and I started to search some info on them and in combination with the Proloque info I get an idea about the universe and characters.
The Titan Universe and Hybrid novel are very well known to me.
Putting the enormous fleet and their tech right into the middle of a full scale war around and on Tau Ceti makes for some interesting different outcomes and interactions.
In it self, I see you made some changes on some of the events in the Titan Universe like the Zeramblin Act has failed. Interesting conversation between Sorcha and CPT Jones. The contrast off how both view this war because of the size difference is very interesting.
This is high level writing and it is very detailed. Interesting starting point of the story. Middle in the battle of Tau Ceti where so much is going on.
I can't wait for chapter 02 to see where this is going.
Author's Response:
Barrowman,
Thank you for the review!
The war with the insectoids will be quite different, as Victor and his team says it will be a "War to the Knife." The way the Spheroids fight (and what they don't see when they are fighting) will bleed into the Titans assumptions when they make key decesions.
The alignments will shift a bit as the story moves, those who have the best intentions maybe heading the most rapidly toward hell.
Again thank you!