Date: November 26 2018 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
I would think Jones meets all sorts of people in his line of work, some overcome by greif who would like a way out {e.g. survivors who lost loved ones, clinically ill}, others overcome by guilt who want redemption {e.g. criminals who either changed their ways or are scared of karma / hell}, and still others who lack purpose or direction {e.g. drug addicts, run aways, homeless}
Anyone of these groups Jones is sure to come in contact with through the course of being a private investigtor, anyone of which may volunteer to Bethany's calling.
Regardless, great story.
Author's Response: I kept your review in mind when I was working on the sequel, though I still have many ideas regarding the strange relationship between Bethany and Jones to explore. Thank you for both of your reviews on this one. I hope you liked where I decided to take the story so far!
Date: November 25 2018 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice story. I hope you can develope it more. Perhaps Jones and Bethany can cometo an arrangement in which Jones can send some bad people who escaped justice over to Bethany for her to eat, maybe for his viewing pleasure.
Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to tell me you liked it! And that’s a really interesting idea. I couldn’t decide exactly how I wanted Jones to be impacted by what he’d witnessed. My original idea was that he’d maybe come to the conclusion that he was actually into the idea himself, but that just doesn’t seem realistic or likely for someone who had never arrived at the idea of vore independently. Then again, it’s not unheard of! Maybe your suggestion could provide some gradual build-up, at first, just satisfying a curiosity, while he eventually wants to experience it first hand. In any case, I too like the idea of voyeristic vore, wherein someone gets to watch, but doesn’t want to get too close! But I’d like to show a voluntary scenario as well, because that’s actually my favorite. I just really liked the idea of this story playing out this way. Thanks for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: November 24 2018 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, fantastic story! I liked the way Jones dealt with his 'partner', and actually the blondie wasn't that bad girl at all... very nice story, with a nice flow of events!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked it! It was actually while writing a review for your story that I realized that I really needed to break out of this writer's block I've had going on, and I've been toying with the general concept of this story for a while. It wasn't going to write itself! And I'm glad you think that Bethany isn't actually such a bad person. I might do more with her in the future, as I meant to imply heavily that she quite frequently partakes in the consumption of little men, even though it's usually under much more ideal circumstances.