Reviewer: Laah Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2020 12:09 AM Title: General Commentary

Well... where's the story? To read in the last chapter about Emily the eater made me wonder if the story is about her voracious behavior... I'll wait, as I'm interested in knowing how she made it.

Author's Response:

The meat of the story is all in Chapter 3, which (to be fair) was added after this review.