Date: June 25 2019 2:51 AM Title: Hopes Crushed 'Flat'
I know this story has started already 7 months ago but I really like the shoes focus and the originals chapters title.
The concept of 1 chapter = 1 different shoe seem to be awesome.
Hopefully you will come back one day ^^
Date: December 07 2018 2:06 AM Title: Trying to 'Converse'
Hope you continue the story soon :) it is getting really good!
[Report This]Date: November 17 2018 11:38 AM Title: Trying to 'Converse'
Wow, thanks for the shoutout!
You've done a great job so far. The level of detail is really good and I like the characters. I also really liked how you split up the perspectives. You get some plot/character interaction and then some of the action, before switching back and forth.
I'm looking forward to what happens next!
Author's Response:
I actually feel really honored that you've read my work. As I may have mentioned, I'm a fan. I don't normally leave reviews, since I normally lurk and not log in. Since I was logged in though, and I was writing a story, I thought it was only right to shout out one of my inspirations.
I try to give good detail, although sometimes I struggle with finding the right words, without sounding overly repetitive. I'm not sure where I picked up split perspectives, but I'm glad to see that you think they're a good choice.
Hoping to have another chapter soon, maybe even tonight! :D
Date: November 17 2018 6:40 AM Title: Trying to 'Converse'
Good stuff, i especially like him being ensnared and mired in toejam. I hope it continues!!
Author's Response:
I plan on continuing it, and hopefully writing another chapter soon. Thank you for reading!