Reviewer: meereten01 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2019 3:17 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens

I have tried resisting to read this story. I didn't really like the title, but I also saw it was by you, so it must be good.

I finally caved in to the pressure to read it, and my god its a good story.

Jenny is perfectly overpowered, like giantess should be. At the same time, she is also nice and evil/mischievous at the same time. Secretly and dominantly bullying the school while also appearing as the nicest angel...

And as for the pacing, I didn't really notice it because I just started reading now that multiple chapters were already released and your writing is so good that it just reads away like nothing.

And yeah good point at the end, Jenny missed her lunch.

Also, thanks for writing and I'm looking forward to many more chapters!

Author's Response:

If you're wondering what the title means, it's to signify that literally any kind of scenario can happen in this story, and John will have to go along with it. (dropping a hint here that things are going to get creative in later chapters). But I'm glad to hear that you like it. I always appreciate comments from those who enjoyed other stories I've written. 

As for Jenny, I don't know if I'd call her a bully. Maybe she walks a fine line, but she only takes enjoyment from being a giantess, not so much hurting other people.

Reviewer: Saturn Knight Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2018 1:28 PM Title: Anatomy 101

This is a really interesting story been reading for the last few updates. I have to say, the last chapter (8) really pushed things into a direction that might change the dynamic between the two leads. I'm thinking that this event, depending on how you want to play it, could really mess up the dynamic they've been building up and could cause a bit of a wedge. She can't just make him forget like other people and might make her realize that she can go too far with things.

But this is all supposition on my part. He might end up liking it. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Normally in a story that would be a pivitol dynamic. In this case, however, when all situations can be easily amended, so to can the dynamic between the characters. If anything were to drive a wedge between John and Jenny, then it wouldn't be her actions so much but her character. There would have to be something in her character that would turn him away from her. Can that still happen? Possibly.

Thank you for the insightful comment, and for reading

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2018 7:32 AM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens

Oh man this ia an awesome story, please continue it!!!  Thank you.

Reviewer: chainorchid Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2018 8:16 AM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens

This is great stuff. I like how you've been able to make a scenario where just about anything can happen while still keeping it focused on relatable characters, so that it feels grounded. Also how most of the chapters have included hints or foreshadowing that there are other shoes yet to drop, which is important to keep it from getting stale. (I didn't care for the gym class chapter as much as the others, partly because the scenario wasn't really my thing and also because it lacked that feeling of unfolding mystery.)

The off-handed mention that she's held the Earth in her hands "a few times" is a nice demonstration that sometimes telling is more effective than showing.

Author's Response:

I really appreciate the compliment, thank you. This story was born out of just a bunch of random giantess scenarios that I couldn't figure out how to fit together. Now, just as you've said, anything is free range in this story, and I've got some ideas still brewing. Relateable characters are my favorite part, too. I need the characters to feel unique and real, or else things get stale early on. So I hope I can keep up with that

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07 2018 1:53 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens

Another awesome chapter!  Looks like Jenny is 'liking' John (John don't fall for the friends with benefits, if she's already there she DIGS you!  Monica, she and her folks maybe moving to the other side of the country soon...  Jenny won't hurt or kill her, but dad being promoted to clear her playingfield...) yeah Mr. Loya needs to be careful about Jenny's heart or he maybe working in a Mike Rowe job...(I can see Jenny being nice, gentle and playful while playing dirty...)

Again great chapter, can't have too many great gentle giantess!!!

Author's Response:

You make some cool speculations, and it's entirely possible that the story could go that way, or another. I'll get working on it so you won't have to wait long. Till then, thanks for the comments, they keep me motivated. 

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2018 5:45 PM Title: Where's This Story Going? Literally

Some of the rules Jenny can't break remind me of something, I wonder if you've heard it:

Alchemy: the science of understanding, deconstructing, and reconstructing matter. However, it is not an all-powerful art. It is impossible to create something out of nothing. If one wishes to obtain something, something of equal value must be given. This is the law of equivalent exchange, the basis of all alchemy. In accordance with this law, there is a taboo amonng alchemists: human transmutation is strictly forbidden. For what could equal the value of a human soul?

So I guess what I'm asking is have you seen Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood? lol.

Anyway, good chapter. I like the friends with benefits angle their relationship is heading for. They get to do some kinkiy stuff even if they aren't dating. Though I wouldn't be surprised if one of them accidentally developes feeling for the other.

Author's Response:

Thank you for checking out my story foreignkanto. No I'm afraid I've never seen Fullmetal Alchemist before, though I've heard a bit about it. I gave Jenny the ability to warp reality but based her limits off of the rules of reality. Kind of like, she can mold the universe around her like clay, but she can't make the clay itself. Law of Conservation of Matter and Energy. Her inability to affect time is based off of us being three dimensional beings, whereas time is a different dimension which we are beholdent to, therefore she can't control it. And lastly the soul aspect came from my own personal beliefs that, if there is a spiritual world around us, it's also of a dimension beyond us, and beyond her control.

 

Thanks for the good rating, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2018 7:53 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens

Oh my God that was an awesome chapter, I would love to spend a gym peroid having Jenny rule it with understated grace and charm, all the while letting me climb on her...  Keep her cute, smart, gentle and running things!  Thank you!

Author's Response:

Thank you my friend. Yeah I really enjoy playful giantesses as well. Too many people on this site seem to like cruel dominatrixes. Give me a gentle, but playful, giantess any day

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2018 8:20 PM Title: I Signed Up For This . . .

Awesome chapter!!!  Like Jenny as giantess made compartively larger by shrinking them all.  Also drawing our protaginist closer by moving him into her 'mountains' maybe she knows about Monica?  Maybe she might want him as more then a friend later (no one to relate to her, no one knows her, but he is beginning to, even a popular goddess get loney...(since those that 'worship her' don't know her)).  Do love that she was encouraging them and being gentle, you don't have to crush, and slam to be domoniate, even her encouraging them shows them just how superior she is to them in stature, you can be nice and in-charge at the same time and Jenny was owning it!

Again Thank you for an awesome chapter!

Author's Response:

You make some insightful observations, which I'll refrain from confirming or denying. I appreciate your eye for detail, as well, in regards to Jenny's personality. It's always really cool to read about how you guys pick up on certain things that I'm trying to reveal in as natural a manner as possible. Thank you for the comment

Reviewer: Rise8 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2018 8:04 AM Title: Introduction to the Goddess

I like the premise of the story. The characters are interesting and I don’t see gentle stories too often. I definitely see Jenny having a gentle yet mischievous personality and now she has someone to live out those fantasies with. Curious to know what the butt tag of the story will be about. Hope we get to see her dwarf the planet like John said earlier. Also wouldn’t mind her shrinking him to micro size to let him explore her since she teased him. Can’t wait for more.

Author's Response:

glad the characters are interesting, that's always what I work hard at. Nothing worse than a story with bland characters, so I hope I'm able to keep avoiding that in future chapters. As for the tags, the reason I decided to give her god-like reality warping powers is because I wanted to make a story that could involve almost any scenario I could think of. This is more just a story to push the boundaries of my imagination, and have fun with it. So you'll get to see a lot of different giantess scenes. As always, thanks for reading and for the comment

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27 2018 5:16 AM Title: Introduction to the Goddess

A nice development, I look forward to their future games. You have the vore tag so... yay!

Author's Response:

Thank you. I have no idea when the vore part will come into play. I'll have bits of it in a few chapters, but one in general will be dedicated to swallowing people whole. Need to figure out what chapter that'll be