Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2020 1:14 AM Title: Alright I'll Go With This

Well this story was a nice find.  Jenny is the best friend/wingwoman.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2020 7:20 PM Title: Alright I'll Go With This

Is it another game, Jenny and Monica spent a fair bit of time together, both are quite fond of John.  What is the download rate of a greater demi-goddess to a rather bright mortal?  How much of Jenny personality and knowledge could she of left in Monica and could she of left her 'shell' out of complete knowledge (hence the 'shell' being scared of what Monica was capable of, though Monica/Jenny could of had on full safeties all along).  The Shell and John could be set up for the biggest game of all, the one in which if they win Monica will be won over beyond any other way by John.  If they lose, no one is hurt though Jenny may lose most of her powers?

Would like a merger of Monica and Jenny, it would be in many ways John's dream (and in a few instances his nightmare, though it would still be a beautiful one :-) ).

Can't wait for the next chapter, great job!!!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2020 2:54 PM Title: The Doctor Will See You Now

I can't remember if I have said it before, but I think this story is amazing. Everytime I'm done reading a chapter, I'm sad there is not more of it.

The interaction between Jenny and Ben is so seamless. They really do seem like best friends. It somehow feels a bit like a realt story (even though the ridiculousness of it).

Thank you for writing, and I'm looking forward to the next one a lot!

Author's Response:

I really appreciate that meereten01, thank you for enjoying my stories. I hope you like the latest chapter. I'll be getting right to work on the next one so hopefully you're not left waiting for too long again

Reviewer: MatrixSimon Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2020 3:04 AM Title: The Doctor Will See You Now

Wow didn’t thought that. I hope Jenny didn’t lost her Power.
I Love it!!!
Very excited for the upcoming Chapters!
Amazing Work, thanks a lot

Author's Response:

I appreciate the kind words. Thank you. I'll try and have the next chapter out as soon as possible

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2020 9:05 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens

Awesome Chapter!

I think the ball is in Jenny's court, I think she has feeling of at least friendship for both John and Monica.  That she allowed her 'friends' to do what they did to John, well I doubt she had that planned, and it likely made her uncomfortable my guess is she thought is was 'normal' high school behavior.  She should of cut it off when they were cornering him on the 'house party', I think even though she's a reality warper and has strong feelings for John she likely did what other popular girls do when their nerd friends are picked on by their popular friends, clam up and hope that each can see the good in the other.

Zoe and her clique baring Jenny's influnce are going to stay 'mean girls'.  As bad as the situation with Monica is, it's important that Jenny makes a choice, is her true friend John worth all her easy popularity? Are her 'friends' like Zoe going to make her happy? satisify her needs, actually challange her and in their own way make her better?  I would like to see her confront them without tricks and if need be have an actual break with those 'friends'.  Better she has one true friend then dozens of 'hangers-on' who can't comprehend her.

Which gets to Monica, I think she is being to know what is going on, that her memories are come through.  Maybe she can't believe John allows all the things that happened to happen and that he stopped trying to 'help' her remember.

I think Jenny has the most to lose, she can return to things as they were before John.  She can try to force things which overtime will be even worse as it will be Jenny and everyone else, which will leave her loney and guilty, possilby barely able to live with herself depending on how much harm she does in forcing things.  She needs to show John that she's willing to sacrifice, not merely reset, that her friends were so cold and went out from the start to humilate John while she sat back (though she was uncomfortable for him and felt for him, she still didn't act until after he was completely destoried and humilated by Monica's actions).

Jenny has a lot to choose, as does John and Monica, but Jenny is the one who has to move things and make decisions on what is vauable to her and what she can live with.  She may only have John as a friend, she may not be able to have him and Monica beyond that, and if she is going to stay with John she is likely going to have to cut lose her 'friends' like Zoe, and to be a friend to John actual endure their scron and loss of 'popularity' in order to show him that she is actaully his friend.  He knows what she is capable of and if she just blocks her group from harming him or wipes their memory then he's just a toy for her.  If she chooses him over them and endures being outside of the 'popular' girls for him then he knows it is real and if she is willing to step aside for Monica then again he knows she truly vaules and cares for him, that he's not just an amusing toy.

Again great chapter, can't wait for the next, thank you!

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2019 8:21 AM Title: World of Warfare

Now this is a great story I've stumbled onto.  Gentle yet playful, teasing, and lewd.  With powers like Jenny's, the sky the limit in what sort of games she can play.  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2019 8:39 PM Title: World of Warfare

Another great chapter. Really love this story and I get super excited every time I see it in most recent. It's interesting that this scenario is continuing into next chapter. What will Jenny do with him and Monica I wonder. And I'm wondering if Monica's headaches are something important. We'll have to see how that develops.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2019 1:17 AM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens

Great Chapter, Jenny is still match-making with Monica, would like the ideal a Throuple!  Don't think Jenny is shy and could slowly bring Monica into the 'know' and I don't think the giantess goddess wants to give up her little one (john).  I think Jenny would be best with it (if it goes wrong she can at least 'partially' reset), John maybe confused (likely happy but confused), Monica I think wants John as her friend if not more to be happy...  So, would like John and Jenny, but a Throuple with Monica would be cute as well.  Thank you for your awesome work, can't wait until the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Shrunkenman94 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2019 12:00 AM Title: World of Warfare

Great work on this chapter! Like all the ones before it was entertaining, comical and the interactions of the characters is very well done! I'm looking forward to what you have planned next!

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2019 7:40 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens

Please continue, love Jenny's way of thinking, or maybe movement on John's Flank, please write more!  Thank you!