Date: August 25 2019 9:48 AM Title: The Proposal
All hope is lost I suppose. Damn, I couldn't WAIT for the next chapter in this. Your way of writing is unmatched by anyone else I've seen on here. I would have loved some closure on this story. I'm still holding out hope one day you'll come back and wow the socks off of us one more time
Date: March 16 2019 5:11 PM Title: The Proposal
Hey, hope you are still active on this site and check your own story every now and then. I just wanted to say this has still been my favorite story of all time on here. 4 months later and I'm still thinking about it. Please please please continue writing. I need another chapter. You are stupidly talented at this and your story is so damn unique. Hope you get this.
-Your biggest fan
Date: March 16 2019 5:11 PM Title: The Proposal
Hey, hope you are still active on this site and check your own story every now and then. I just wanted to say this has still been my favorite story of all time on here. 4 months later and I'm still thinking about it. Please please please continue writing. I need another chapter. You are stupidly talented at this and your story is so damn unique. Hope you get this.
-Your biggest fan
[Report This]Date: January 23 2019 12:36 AM Title: The Beast
I was very curious to see what it would be like inside of the machine. I love how it's its own awful, ignorant society inside, but it has to be so stark, given the enormity of the task. one has to wonder what our tiny narrator will experience as an outsider, knowing the truth, and being compelled to act along. I really loved the scenes with her careless roommate getting her to the machine. action on this scale can be hard to craft, and you've presented it all so cleanly you've written a really wonderful and powerful scenario here. that time dilation concept still really tickles the mind.
[Report This]Date: December 13 2018 8:13 PM Title: The Proposal
It's been... 20 days since an update. Food is running low. Morale, even lower. I've reread the entire story and know it word for word. Need update soon or else I fear I'll never get hard again. Help us Oops, you're our only hope to keep the population running.
[Report This]Date: December 07 2018 11:27 PM Title: The Proposal
I'm going to assume this break means you are cranking out more high quality chapters like you have been so far... This story is number 1. Please continue...
[Report This]Date: November 29 2018 7:36 PM Title: Look Out Below
Oops please please please continue to write. You're the king of erotica and I need more in my life. Every other story pales in comparison to yours. This chapter alone is the sexiest thing I've ever read. I need more Oops, don't leave your biggest fan hanging!
[Report This]Date: November 23 2018 3:57 PM Title: The Beast
It's been 5 days and I've been reading this story daily and it's truly a testament to your writing when it hasn't gotton old reading the same story. I can't get enough of your writting. Update soon?
[Report This]Date: November 23 2018 6:53 AM Title: The Proposal
Really enjoyed where you are going with this, when is the next chapter coming?
Date: November 20 2018 3:15 PM Title: The Proposal
Great story so far!
Love the idea and the characters! Cant wait to read the next part so pls keep going.
Thanks for the great story.
[Report This]Date: November 18 2018 9:39 PM Title: The Beast
Again Oops, I love it. Fantastic. I can't wait to see what Val does next, I was a little sad there was very little of her point of view in all this but I know you got something up your sleeve. I can't wait for the next chapter, you always have me chomping at the bit for more, I don't know how I will last 24 hours.
Author's Response:
Thanks! That entire sequence takes place between Val inserting the box, getting settled, and hitting the button. She'll be back!
[Report This]Date: November 17 2018 4:40 PM Title: The Proposal
Once again, you deliver in the best possible way. I can't believe not only the quality but the consistency you upload at! A chapter a day is insane for a story of this caliber.
The time dilation feature is again amazing in everyway. I love how you make the first part the confusion for the main character since she has no idea what Val is saying and then followed up by the unaware hell Val is unleashing just by talking or moving slightly.
Making Val an unsatisfiable monster of a sex addict was an amazing choice, I absolutly love her motivation that she just has to get off and she has zero care about the less then humans that help her do it.
Having her taste her own excitement in and claim how delicious it is was an incredible idea, I love every second of this story and the end of every chapter leaves me craving more like a drug addict in remision. Seriously oops, you are top cut here. I can't believe you are not getting more reviews for this. Keep up the amazing work.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2018 7:22 PM Title: The Proposal
Holy shit. Iv'e been on this site for well over 4 years. I've found great reading before but for me it's few and far inbetween. I often find myself skipping over other people chapters, but you oops, you are without a doubt, easily, the greatest writer on here I have ever seen. Every word of yours is perfect. Your style of writing is like nothing I've ever seen. The imagination behind your work is very apparent and your scenerios are amazing. The time dialation idea was PERFECT. Your details are so awe inspring I feel like I'm actually in the story. As you can tell by my username, I had to make an account just to comment on this story and plead for you to never stop writing. You are amazing and I, a lurker on here daily, someone who just had to make an account to praise your work, am now your most loyal groupie. Never stop writing. You are amazing.
[Report This]Date: November 15 2018 5:15 PM Title: The Big Reveal
really great. wonderful scale. lovely descriptions. very curious to see where you take this.
[Report This]Date: November 14 2018 3:33 PM Title: The Proposal
This is a really cool concept and start to the story. Just them talking about the situation is hot. I love how casual and playful Val is about everything. I can't wait to see what you do next for it!
[Report This]Date: November 14 2018 9:09 AM Title: The Proposal
wonderful start. love the scale, the tone of the world, the scenario. I especially love time dilation as a concept in shrinking. lovely stuff.