Date: March 08 2022 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Run Jack Run!
Thank you for your reply vorepop. And please I will be very happy if you use the idea I suggested.so you are not stealing anything rather take them as gift.
I understand sweet stalker was suppose to be the very fast paced vore story, but I can't help but falling for Aiata. She is very interesting. I saw her illustration in deviantart. A pink haired girl with a very Gothic dressing style going for her. You Don't see that very often.
Author's Response:
Thanks again! That's super cool of you! ;D
Also just to clear up any misconceptions I haven't actually showed any art of Aiata yet.
I believe who you saw on my page was Poppy, she is is Vorepop's mascot. I completely understand why you would think Poppy was Aiata though. I have a thing for pink haired girls lol. But if you really do like Aiata I think you may be pleased to see her design later this month on my Deviantart.
Thank you so much for liking my designs and thank you so much for the story suggestions!
[Report This]Date: February 24 2022 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: Run Jack Run!
The story was amazingly hot. Although I am not into 'digestion' I rather perfer the tiny to be invincible and being trapped in tummy and used as a energy source for a long time. It is your story but if you plan to expand it in future I can suggest u some idea.
Here's one idea i have, reveal a twist where Aiata kept Jack alive because she felt sympathy toward him. I mean he is a very gentle good boy. Maybe a relationship between Jack and Aiata.Tne story would be centered around their conflicted relationship, Aiata would face a lot of conflicted emotions, because for the first time she is feeling something for a tiny mortal! And for Jack he is still afraid of Aiata but deep down he knows he is falling for Aiata as well!
What do you say. I really believe they share a great chemistry. And creating chemistry Between characters is one of your strong suit. 'ILcayt' is one of my most favourite vore story of all time because of that reason.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the compliments! I really appreciate the feedback! I never know if people are fully enjoying these stories so thank you for telling me how you feel.
I also have to say that I have continued this series already, although I haven't uploaded the new chapter to this site yet. I will be posting two chapters of the Sweet Stalker series here at a later date. Thank you for the ideas, I hope you don't mind if I use some elements of what you suggested to me, they are very good ideas.
I originally started this series because ILCAYT was taking me so long to get to the "action" if you know what I mean. So Sweet Stalker was like an outlet so I could dish out faster vore stories, but I mean I may steal some of those ideas, thanks again!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2018 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Run Jack Run!
This is so cute!! How does this not have more attention?!
I really loved Aiata's playfulness here, wish she used that chest of hers more since you were alluding to it so much, but she sounds adorable and I'd love to hug her~
I think even if you don't like pain, there's probably some detail you can put into areas that are uncomfortable or strange for the mc, like sticky saliva or being suffocated in the ample chest or being weirdly aroused but having it overtaken with fear, describing how sticky or tight it is, stuff like that. You're a good writer, i wish we could see more of aiata doing this to different people, but until then I'll wait for your next story!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the advice! Also no worries! She is coming back for sure! ;D
Date: October 23 2018 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Run Jack Run!
Thank you! Yeah, I have never really been into the painful stuff. So I don't really feel like going into detail beyond that. I prefer soft lol.
Date: October 23 2018 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: Run Jack Run!
This was a very well written and fun story. The non painful digestion at the end was a nice touch
Author's Response: Whoops I replied in the wrong place! ;P Thank you! Yeah, I have never really been into the painful stuff. So I don't really feel like going into detail beyond that. I prefer soft lol