Reviews For Good for nothing
Reviewer: LilBeni Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2018 5:15 PM Title: Introduction
Date: December 01 2018 5:15 PM Title: Introduction
Nice start. Love the Giant Couples (always), & could you make Dave essentially into an 'Incel', who's also a Trump Supporter, being tortured by SJWs? Just my thoughts, for greater Potential!
Reviewer: Frankthetank951 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2018 2:20 PM Title: Introduction
Date: October 24 2018 2:20 PM Title: Introduction
Thnaks I appreciate the feedback and I will definitely work on it.
Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2018 3:35 PM Title: Introduction
Date: October 23 2018 3:35 PM Title: Introduction
Scenario is good and perverted just the way I like it. Writing needs to be polished, you rush a bit to fast in your writing. Perhaps you should take your time introducing things instead to rush to the humiliating scenes. A good foreplay makes it even better.
To sum up this needs more meat but scenarios are reaaaly humiliating and perverted, you got my fav for that.