[Report This]Date: August 05 2024 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 16: Rajasi and Anand Bond as the World Changes
The premise was good, but in my opinion, trying to make it so "realistic" and with a feminist mentality makes it difficult for it to be digestible for a large part of the community.
Date: April 12 2020 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: Setting the Stage
A great story!! and it's also the new world that you will probably tell on next stories
Date: June 21 2019 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 17: Humanity in Transition
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[Report This]Date: December 08 2018 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 16: Rajasi and Anand Bond as the World Changes
just can say.. Amazing..
Author's Response: Thanks - glad you like it.
Date: December 06 2018 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Setting the Stage
Really enjoying this story, and love that you’re striving to make it seem possible. The little glimpses into other women’s lives is great and I hope to keep seeing that. Im not sure how much time will pass over the course of this story, but I would also love to hear how men might change over the years/decades/centuries. Like perhaps men lose the ability to regulate their body temperature and rely on the warmth from between the ass cheeks of his owner..or “unfiltered” oxygen is too sharp and crisp..resulting in lung irritation. Anyway, love the story and can’t wait to see more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review and the ideas. I did touch on the body temperature issue in chapter 9 but I didn’t really develop that aspect much as drafted. But I like your idea. Yet another dependency factor and it’s one that might be used in the narrative to compel the little males to remain in their lovers’ panties most of the time. Room temperature would be too chilly! Like it. I may even go back and edit a bit to work that issue in a bit more since I sort of left that hanging.... thanks for reminding me!!!
[Report This]Date: December 01 2018 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: Setting the Stage
Oopps, forgot to rate it. 10 out of 10 of course. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks. ;)
Date: November 25 2018 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Setting the Stage
I also remember the story. Really hope that there will be further chapters soon.
What I liked besides the shrinking of mankind, was the interracial aspect. Two white boys completely enslaved by an Arab and Indian Godesses. Maybe that part could be more emphasized in future chapters? Also having spin off chapters, which would show how certain parts off the world would change? For example Muslim women being more violent towards men after these changes and having need to import tiny men/slaves.
The Chinese cloning tiny men as supplier to these demands. Maybe Adam could be even used as one of the DNA sources for this? Then have several chapters with different kinds of women around the world who would use Adam as their little sex toy.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and ideas. I expect to add to the story as I am able to.
[Report This]Date: November 24 2018 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 14: It Begins
Very imaginitive story - well reasoned.
In a weird way, it makes sense.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review - glad you like it!
Date: November 24 2018 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 14: It Begins
Well u I have a good imagination however if all the males decrease to size how will woman conceive kids cuz I don't think it is possible for such tiny men to have kids with titan sized woman . explain the to me
Author's Response: Well - I am not a biologist and of course this all fantasy. With those caveats aside, the most extreme examples of sexual dimorphism in the real world are tiny males mating with comparatively huge females. It can and does work at least in certain species of insects and fish. Google it or look on Wikipedia. There is even a type of fish where the male is so small it basically attached itself to its mate and becomes a tiny appendage to her providing sperm. Certain angler fish species are like that. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anglerfish
Date: November 22 2018 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 13: Humanity Will Never Be The Same
Nice idea sir hope to see more of Ur work .keep going
Date: November 20 2018 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: Setting the Stage
Brilliant sir it is just remarkable
PLZ CONTINUE THE STORY
Date: November 15 2018 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Next Generation
there was another chapter after this
where its ??
Date: October 20 2018 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Setting the Stage
great story
i want u to make another series of a story like that pls
[Report This]Date: October 19 2018 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Next Generation
i read this story many years ago, 'aria new world' if i am not mistaken. an amazing story. genetic modify technology to make minimen are more posible in near future than shrinking machine.
<p>just like my dream come true.. tiny men.. new world order.. woman supremacy.. soft and genle..
<p>but in my dream Aria and Devi (or others woman in alternatif chapter) have intimate relation.. relation beetween Queens.., they need their litle slaves.. but they need same size relation too.. to touch.. to love and great sex.. just beetween woman have same size.
in my other dream, some womans still use their hijab(jilbab).. to hide their litle slaves.. their hijab are great palace.. inside their cloth are hiden beauty paradise, the slaves can go(climb) to many place.. toes.. legs.. thighs.. vagina.. butt.. armpit.. etc
i just mention my dreams, you have your own great dream..
since i read the story, i always wait the next chapter, or your other stories.. long time not hear from you..
thank you for back again..
thaks lot for share the story..