[Report This]Date: June 21 2023 12:52 PM Title: The Accident
Nice, I like to see the mother getting bigger and sexier while her son shrink, giant moms are awesome.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2023 9:33 AM Title: The Accident
I know it's been a while, but if you're still here, would you consider continue this? Loved the premise! The characters are so well written, and the relationship between bro and sis are just adorable!
Hope to see more of this in the future 🙏
Date: October 10 2020 8:41 AM Title: Physical Therapy
Great chapter. Im a big fan of BBL too so I love the reference and the style.
Also, I hope that was some foreshadowing at the end of where his sister is gonna carry him
Author's Response:
Hehe, it could be, we'll see, you just never know, with those that are tiny. ^_^
Date: October 10 2020 8:33 AM Title: The Accident
My favorite story is Parllels 2 by BBL, and I absolutely loved your references and inspiration from that story. When I saw the name Corina my heart skipped a beat! Hopefully we'll see more of her soon!
great story, and I look forward to more chapters!
Author's Response:
I always favoried Parallels one, personally, and I am glad that you got the easter egg! As for if we'll see more of Corina, I haven't decided yet if she's going to be a reoccuring character for this arc, or if I'm going to just make her a one-off. We'll see. ^_^
Date: September 17 2020 4:27 PM Title: A Movie Nightmare.
Great stuff ! Big slow shrink fan n big fan of busty babes ...Hope sis n friend keep seeing him in awe of those big breasts....love to see it get sexual soon. Thanks for writing
Author's Response:
Thank you kindly for the review!
It's still not going to get too sexual for a while, but there will be some light stuff down the pipe.
Date: September 17 2020 11:31 AM Title: A Movie Nightmare.
Great chapter! I loved the interactions with his sister and Jasmine. I'm guessing that vitacorp is gonna make some more alterations to our protagonist before he gets out. Glad to see you're back, can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the kind review!
I don't think VitaCorp is going to do any alterations to him, at this point he's pretty much on the road to tiny town, but there is going to be some nice interactions in the works.
Date: April 28 2019 5:10 AM Title: The Accident
Am I missing something, or is there a reason VitaCorp believes they could sell the main character on the idea an antibiotic could cure a virus? Antibiotics are designed for bacteria; the way a virus functions and replicates is so different that antibiotics are next to useless and could do more harm than good. You need an antiviral drug for viruses.
I've been playing Pheonix Wright and my brain is currently set to nitpicky 'Objection' mode to spot the falsehood in the nefarious plot of Vitacorp to shrink the main character teeny-tiny enough his younger sister's nipple is like a mountain to him.
Author's Response: They were banking on a mixture of him not being in the right state of mind and possibly being irrational enough to either do it on his own, or hoping that peer pressure from his family would cause him to cave. It’s also safe to assume that they wouldn’t actually know that he was conducting his own research.
[Report This]Date: April 25 2019 5:37 AM Title: An Antibiotic Secret
A bit late to the party, but let me start off by saying you have a very nice story going here. I really appreciate the pace your taking the story at and I hope that continues when the real action starts. Too many slow shrink tales skip ahead too fast. I like the relationship he has with Gwen, it should prove interesting once he is smaller than her. I hope some of those senarios that Gwen hinted too become a reality. I personally am waiting for the 2-3in range. I really like your writing, it's easy to read and follow the story. I like the characters you've created, they are really believable. You have another dedicated follower to your take here, and I am looking forward to the next installments.
Author's Response:
Well, thank you very much for the kind review, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story, as well as the characters that I've worked hard to create, and don't worry the shrinking won't be anything too rappid. I hope to have the new chapter up soon, but I'm not making any promises on when.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2019 11:53 PM Title: The Shrinking Feeling
Great story! I hope there are still more chapters to come! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, and I just updated it, hope you enjoy the new chapter. ^_^
Date: December 21 2018 12:25 PM Title: The Shrinking Feeling
Great new chapter. I love all the teasing/foreshadowing. Cant wait for that dollhouse to become a reality
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked what had been writen up to that point and I hope you like the latest edition.
Date: December 06 2018 4:48 AM Title: The Shrinking Feeling
I think that a natural progression would be to go to a more advanced doctor if he goes to a doctor at all. A female doctor is much more exciting. You can feel very small in her hands as she examines you. Just an opinion of what your readers might enjoy if he goes to the doctor again.
Author's Response: In order, there isn’t any “advanced” doctor to give him treatment, remember the research was done for illegal bioeeapons. As for “what my readers might enjoy”, don’t you mean what you might enjoy? ;) Anyway, the story is still young and I’m still trying to feel things out myself as with most things in life the story is all about the journy not the destinatiom. He’s still got a longbway to go before he is able to fit in anyone’s hands.
Date: December 05 2018 8:20 PM Title: The Accident
I always love more realistic takes on the shrinking fantasy, developing the kinds of relationships and reactions that you'd expect, while still playing within the fantasy that we all love so very much about shrinking! So thank you for starting and continuing this story. I personally can't wait until he gets down below 1' (ideally 1"), but its your story and you'll get there (or maybe you won't, I don't know!) eventually. I'll keep reading and waiting for new installments in the meantime.
Thank you! :)
Author's Response: First off you’re welcome, and THANK YOU! For the kind revie, yes he will be below and inch tall before the story is done.
[Report This]Date: December 05 2018 4:34 PM Title: The Shrinking Feeling
Really good story ! I think u gonna write other chapter ! :)
Love this continue <3
Author's Response:
Hahaha, yes I'm going to write a new chapter. And it will continue.
Date: December 05 2018 4:29 AM Title: The Shrinking Feeling
I like that you are taking things slowly. Gwen wearing wedges is cute. I wonder if he will literally look directly at the side of her wedges? Will his next doctor be a female doctor? A doctor more advanced in knowledge about his shrinking? I like the studying of the blood cells. Very scientific.
Great story,
Diesel
Author's Response:
I don't want to give anything in the future away, as for the doctor it's going to pretty much be the male for the duration.
Date: November 02 2018 12:12 AM Title: The Accident
Great story so far. Very well written. Please continue writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind reviw!
Date: October 31 2018 3:32 PM Title: The Accident
Great chapter. Love the teasing/foreshadowing of the sister saying shes gonna run with him in her shoe, or put him between her cheeks
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying the story, and thank you for the review!
Date: October 31 2018 1:27 AM Title: Exercising Openness
Nice chapter. I liked the kneeling in the tub to see what it was like to be smaller. So his dad also shrunk. I assume he will make an appearance? Does he live in a dollhouse? Will he eventually go to a female doctor? I like the slow shrinking. I also much prefer the real life aggrevations than any smutty stuff. Enjoying your story.
Author's Response: No, dad wasn’t shrunk, the VitaCorp people are the first known cases of shrinking. Dad is, gone, thought that I wrote that in the first chapter that his passing is why Dave studied vaccinations.
Date: October 27 2018 7:52 AM Title: Good News and Bad News
So the shrinking begins. I'm interested in where you will go with this.
Author's Response:
Yes it does, but it shall be a very slow decent into tiny. ^_^
[Report This]Date: October 26 2018 4:20 AM Title: The Accident
Nice Story ! :) Love Slow shrink ... Continue :3
Author's Response:
Thank you, and I hope to have the new chapter up soon.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2018 4:53 PM Title: The Accident
great story well written unaware is my favorite
Author's Response: It’s not going to be a completely unaware setting, just little spots here and there.