Reviewer: Stepbonk Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2018 5:36 PM Title: Introduction

Wonderful start, I love the whole premise and see how it could be expanded on with tons of characters and scenarios. I've recently checked out your other stories for the first time and I definitely dig 'em. Just like you, I'm all about beautiful chicks with shrink rays who go around in flip flops and pretty bare feet all the time, shrinking men and women down to ants, fleas and microbes.

 

I'd be really interested to see you take a shot at things on a larger scale, like 3-4 feet. If Katelyn plans on shrinking her husband, I suggest she do it nice and slowly in stages bit by bit, things like smothering his face under her growing feet as she pins him down to the floor and shrinks him a little more. She could demonstrate the scales she'll be making him explore by reducing others to various sizes and toying with them at will as he's forced to watch, make him worship her feet and beg her not to do it to him next. Despite the begging, pleading and attempts to rebel, the husband would end up shrunk over and over again as the days pass, until he's small enough to wear as a toe ring while his newlywed wife collects yet more victims, and then even smaller still.

 

Also I imagine what it would be like for someone like Katelyn to shrink a whole ship in stages, perhaps even a wedding cruise. She'd mess with the passengers and make them give her foot rubs, shrink it some more and use it as a bath toy, and in the end leave the entire ship slowly dwindling away to the size of a virus on the sole of her flip flop while she flexes and wiggles her toes and soles overhead.

 

I look forward to reading more of your works in the future and hope there's a lot more to come with this one. Go wild!