Reviews For The Sandwich
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Reviewer: Viper5by5 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2018 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Omg 😮 this is gold.

Please continue, its great 👍

Reviewer: dalespale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2018 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Enjoying this so far! I'm a big fan of micro stuff. Plus I love a cruel yet playful woman.

Reviewer: GTSBob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2018 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 2

I'm loving this story so far. Really enjoying your writing style! Can't wait to see what you have in store for our tiny protagonist. Will he be saved or tortured like that ant? Will he be recognized or mistaken for a bug? 



Author's Response:

Thanks Bob, I'm really trying to do a good job of the setup so people can get Suzanne, the Goddess of the story, firmly embedded in their minds so that they know her attitude towards the insignificant creatures at her feet. I also have been researching a believable yet imaginative way a person can be shrunk and the feelings of awe and terror when he realizes he is the size of an ant. I love ants as a subject as even the most timid of women don't have a problem crushing them without too much remorse, I mean, after all, it's only an ant, right? 

Please be patient, it will be worth the wait!

The Mant

 

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2018 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

So far so good. Gotta see the next chapter :)

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