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Reviewer: femfeetlicker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story, I like to see more crushing from Rachel.

Reviewer: Crushedboywonder Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2008 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, the paragraphing and whatnot BUT I read this on another site some time ago, but never commented until now. This story is totally awesome, and Rachel is totally sexy. I'm not even into bare feet that much but this story always gets me.

Reviewer: billyevil Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2007 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

I didn't even read this or the other one because just looking at that mass of words with no spacing was just too much.

Reviewer: Stylesrj Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2007 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just a friendly note: There's a thing called paragraphing.

I know it's annoying, but you have to leave a white line whenever you want to make a new sentence or idea. 

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