i like your work. (my english isn t  much good. if is not, and i m not to good to say compliments).

but it feels somenting heavy at some place.

I not sure.

i do really like to see how a god, a king or someone powerfull finish under of feet of someone who is not.

you have a great talent, specialy for short stories.

Great chapter as always!!! Loved the trio of orcs torture.

I'm not really into F/f stuff but great chapter none the less. Overall, it seems like you've been more descriptive with your writing in this chapter which I appreciate, such as when you described the fairy's boot insole as "blackened and soggy, still retaining some warmth from Sapphire's sweating foot." or when you described the female orc's feet as "wide and meaty" and the toes as thick and strong; likewise I like how descriptive you went with the toejam as well such as you describing the orc's as "a tangy orange in color and more solid than that of the dark elf, comparable to a soft cheese. The flavor was overwhelming cheesy too, with an intense sour kick." I hope to see more toe jam eating scenes in the future. Speaking of the boot insole, I appreciate how you included both in shoe and insole stuff in this chapter, hope to see more going forward as well, such as the person forcing the tiny to lick and scrape of all the gunk and sweat from their insole with their mouth and for them to eat it. I also greatly appreciated the return of female orc feet, albeit it was somewhat brief. I sincerely hope we get to see a female orc dominate a human man again with her boots, socks, toejam, and feet again. I also appreciated the brief sexual humilation bit towards the end, with the faeries laugjing and taunting the main character about their feeting turning them on and getting them to orgasm. Hope to see that expanded in future chapters. Lastly, I really enjoyed the final part of the story where you followed up with the character to see how they were doing with their new foot torture filled life and all the other torments that they are going through. I thought it added a lot to the story and hope to see this going forward in your stories. Overall, really great chapter, it's subtle, but it really seems like you stepped up your writing with this one, eager to see more, keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

Hey thank you for the added depth to your review, it gives me some insight into what people want to see. I felt like this one flowed a lot better whilst writing it, so I am glad the quality appears to be improved! It's good to know that you like the toejam stuff, I was worried that I might be going a tad too far but apparently not haha. So sure, more of that kinda thing coming up :)

Any hint as to what your next story is gonna be about? I literally check this page every Friday to see if you have a new update. I’m your biggest fan!

Author's Response:

Next story is going to feature an alchemist who keeps a particularly nasty and vengeful fairy prisoner. When that fairy gets out, expect all kinds of trouble to break loose.

Man you werent kidding! That ending was sadistic as hell! I loved it! I hope theres some sexual torment in your future stories. Thats my favorite part!  Great work as always.

Initially, I didn't think I'd like orc feet being featured in this story, but you've convinced me otherwise. Chapter was simply amazing, the foot/sexual torturer scenes were great, especially the toe jam eating scene and how you described, hope we can see more of that. Also hope we can see more F/m orc stuff after reading this, perhaps even a check up to see how Edward is either during or after his year long denial. Great stuff, hope to see more, keep up the good work.

Not a fan of stinky feet, but I like the story nonetheless, though I wished Edward stayed with Alice as her footpet. I would like to see more stories with orcs also.