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Reviewer: WootJimbob Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 15 2018 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this story. Even with no verbal communication you easily get the feeling of friendlyness and playfulness between the girls and their surroundings. The genderless narration is also well done. Keep up the great work.



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Thanks for the review and rating; it is very encouraging.

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