Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2021 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Anna's Reconciliation

Really love this story! Please continue! Its been so long!

Reviewer: Sheograth Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2018 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Emily's Place

This is a great series overall, and it's cool that you're writing a sequel.

For this chapter specifically, I like how you introduced the new characters. And you do a great job at weaving together the action and the plot progression.

One thing that wasn't super clear to me was whoever was first in their truth or dare game. I think that it was Emily but I wasn't entirely sure. The others were clear though, so I have a good idea based on who was left.

But I'm looking forward to what happens next. Nice job and keep up the good work!

Reviewer: sp180 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2018 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Anna's Reconciliation

Hey jnbt,

I like the world you've built. I see a lot of potential. I think one aspect that could use more emphasis would be more physical interaction, such as body/parts exploration.

Looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

Good point. Will keep that in mind.

Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2018 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Back to Anna

By any chance, can you have Elana swallow the pill?  I know that you haven't done stuff like that in the past, but i just feel that would be a really neat plot twist.

Reviewer: Stepbonk Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2018 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Anna's Reconciliation

Nice to see you continuing your USSPS story, it's definitely taking an interesting and unexpected turn. I would so love to read about Grace or someone like her hosting a party just like the one she suggested in the previous installment, slowly making the male guests smaller and smaller and smaller and smaller throughout the night as they try to resist the girls' humiliations as midgets, mice and ultimately microbes. Doesn't look like anything of the sort will happen on this occasion, but maybe keep it on the backburner?

Author's Response:

Nice. I had an old story idea I was going to put in my "Scenarios" stories, but I stopped bc no one seemed that interested in the idea of random short stories. In the story, a group of college kids meet in a dorm room, guys and girls. They drink and play a board game where everyone starts off one foot tall. If you get a question right, you double in size; if you get a question wrong, you shrink by half. Of course, the girls end up 6 feet, 3 feet, a few are shrunk tiny too. The guys are bad at the game, and you can guess the rest, especially after they drink a lot. On the backburner, definitely.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2018 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Anna's Reconciliation

Do it! One little shrunken play time is no reason to break up!

I'm looking forward to what is coming, and thank you for writing!