Date: October 17 2018 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
ahh classic case of onset Stockholm syndrome
I love it :)
[Report This]Date: October 07 2018 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is my favorite of yours. I sure hope you continue it!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2018 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
Seems like our protagonist immediately fell for the irresistable charm of Maddie right when she bulldozed into the room. And besides him, also his subscribers.
That Maddie is virtually unstoppable. He better submit now and admit it :P
Also, thanks for writing, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: September 10 2018 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
Maddie seems quite smart. She could easily break into his appartment and she also seems a good video editor and gamer. She outmatches the protagonist in simply every way.
Also, such a sweet thing to do, edit the video and upload it to his youtube channel. She helps him to get views. I don't understand why the protagonist hasn't asked her out yet.
Also, this review section is nearly becoming my personal echo box. Maybe you should start do a callout for reviews in the chapter itself. This helps push lazy people (like me) over the edge to write a review.
Thank you for writing! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Eh, I really do like it when people review, but at the same time I'm not reviewing anyone else's stuff either. If people feel moved enough, they will say something. As long as the reads keep going up, it's all good.
[Report This]Date: September 08 2018 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
That moment where he turned and realized he stood no chance against Maddie was such a nice moment. But it still didn't deter him from trying to fight her. Sadly for him, luckily for us.
Maddie trashed him quite severely, even fhough he didn't even say such unreasonable things. He was even considerate enough not to disturb the asmr recording.h imagine what she would do if he had said something mean like: "hey maddie, the building rattles under you weight, it's time for a diet" or something like that.
Bonus points if you can get her to crush an actual (miniaturized) bulldozer
also, thanks for writing, it's good to see that you had enough motivation to write at least one other chapter.
Date: September 07 2018 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
I actually wanted to wait untill the next chapter to respond, but let's do it now while I still remember what I wanted to say.
Bulldozer, lol. Maddy is a bit of a lousy bulldozer, the building is still standing. I really hope she becomes more of a bulldozer in the next chapter.
Also, should I imagine ASMR Maddy?
I'm really looking forward to a next chapter.
[Report This]Date: September 05 2018 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
You know that asmr is about being relaxed, quiet and comfortable right? It seems Maddy has more in common with Godzilla than asmr. She should chill out. If she continues like this she'll crush the poor protagonist before she gets her problems fixed.
Also, good to see that you are writing again, thanks!
Author's Response:
Yeah I know. Lol. I liked the idea of her comforting and putting people to sleep at night, then shutting off the camera and being a bulldozer in the real world. Also thank you. We'll see how long I stay motivated.
[Report This]Date: September 04 2018 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Could use a bit of proof-reading, but I really like the idea, and I'm eager to see you develop it further.