Date: September 04 2018 2:20 PM Title: Volleyball
You have such a great attention to sensory details in all your stories that I've read so far. I loved the bit about how awful the screech of the sneakers on the hardwood sounded from that size.
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I feel it helps immerse the reader more fully in the tiny person's POV, and portrays their weakness and vulnerability when compared to gigantic (normal-sized) people.
Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: September 02 2018 4:00 AM Title: Volleyball
Somehow nobody notices Fulda's murders. It almost seems like they are distracted by something. Maybe Fulda should become some secret agent with those stealthy crushes.
This tiny didn't even have the option of getting away. Its like fulda is increasingly making it harder for tiny's.
Also, thank you for writing!
Author's Response:
Who would pay attention to a little dot, just a blemish in the wood, when they came to see a game?
If he hadn't been getting high on glue she wouldn't have had anything to hold him down. Maybe he even could've escaped. Really, it's his own fault.
Thanks for reading! And when you write reviews it lets me know people are enjoying my stories, so I really do appreciate them.
Date: September 02 2018 2:12 AM Title: Volleyball
I always love your stories. Fulda's playful and casual cruelty is incredible. I also love the way you write about sneakers.
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying them! Please keep reading, and leaving reviews so I know people are interested.