[Report This]Date: January 13 2020 8:59 PM Title: Going Out Tonight
Absolutely adore the tiny giantess scene, shrunken smaller than small, helpless to the toys. Fantastic arc on Gina's side.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Would you believe that I was held up for months trying to figure out how to describe that?
Date: December 12 2019 9:34 AM Title: Going Out Tonight
Can't say Gina didn't get what she had coming in this entire trilogy.
Author's Response:
Gina has no chill, and as a result she has to spend the rest of her life in the same state she made fun of the protagonist for.
[Report This]Date: December 09 2019 5:13 PM Title: In the Aftermath
was a very good story to read
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: December 09 2019 3:44 PM Title: Epilogue
They're so cute together.
The tiny protagonist now has the best bodyguard ever. And if seems fulda has a really nice boss that lets her play around with the buildings.
Doesn't Akane want a shrunken boyfriend too? Or is she still busy talking some sense into Gina?
Still a strange world that they think there is no proof for Gina. On the other hand, if they did, some government agency would surely steal Gina and grow her because they hope she can crush their enemies.
Maybe I should go back to the beginning and read the first chapters again to remind myself where it all began.
Thank you for writing and taking us on one hell of a ride!
Until next time?
Author's Response:
They are, aren't they? It's a good thing Fulda's boss doesn't really care what they do with the old models once they're done. If they get stomped apart before going in the trash, what's the difference?
Aside from taking care of Gina, Akane wants nothing to do with all the size-changing shenanigans. Maybe she'll get a normal-sized boyfriend, or a nice tiny one, she doesn't discriminate.
There's lots of proof! It was just ill-timed, and without there being more of it people start to doubt it. That's how the internet goes though, whoever yells the loudest comes out on top.
I absolutely suggest going back and reading everything before this, and reviewing all those chapters too, and recommending them to anyone who might be interested.
"Next time" will come very soon!
Date: December 06 2019 7:52 PM Title: Going Out Tonight
Honestly... I dunno how to feel about the ending here.
Roni really didn't SHOW any outward remorse or feelings for anything she had been doing up until this point and certainly didn't seem... unhappy with her circumstances overall. I mean she straight up killed someone she had been in the tank with like they were nothing at all without a second thought when she was restored originally... she stayed in Gina's house and seemed very content overall to be just like Gina in every way it seemed. She also straight up merc'd her old teacher for feeling slighted that no one came to her rescue. She was even eager to stomp out the rest of the people in the tank as well. It just doesn't seem logical she would have suddenly done a heal face turn the way she did against Gina.
It was definitely an unexpected end to the story... but I dunno if I can truly call it satisfying really given how.. abrupt it was overall. The buildup just didn't equal out to the conclusion really to me this time. I mean, given your history of story telling, I half expected Gina to possibly win in the end, but if she didn't I was honestly wondering HOW she would lose given the circumstances so far.
I'm still a huge fan of your stories still, so I look forward to anything you put out lol, but you really do put out some VERY abrupt endings to longer stories.
I wonder if you had an alternate ending perhaps to this one. Either way, looking forward to future stories and epilogue!
Author's Response:
I can get how it seems abrupt, but stay with me.
Roni was indeed happy to follow along with Gina's cruelty, so long as she got some of her own. She was incredibly mad at her former teammates for apparently forgetting about her and leaving her with Gina for years, even though she ended up on the top of the tiny pile. Earlier she just wanted to have fun being big, playing around and jumping over things, it wasn't until Gina broached the idea of revenge that she got excited to shrink people.
But Roni had a full ride to college on a track scholarship, and Gina took it away from her, drastically altering what she expected for herself. Despite being "equals," being dragged along and having to give up the game to ruin Fulda's wedding showed her that Gina would always have what she wanted to do take precedence. When they had visitors, she stayed upstairs because only Gina was interested in it. Her betrayal was a slow, subtle burn, but Gina actually going through with her plan was the straw that broke the camel's back, as it were. As far as that goes, that was the only ending I had planned.
I won't deny it though, I'm much more comfortable when the ending is a variation of "and all the tinies die."
[Report This]Date: December 06 2019 4:02 PM Title: In the Aftermath
Im surprised Roni stepped in you're right in that I didn't see that coming. Nice that Fulda has a bit of equal size time with her tiny husband. But I must say that I did secretly hope we saw Gina demolishing some more stuff.
And Akane got me. I almost thought Fulda would stay tiny forever. I'm glad to see that thats not the case.
I'm almost starting to feel sorry for Gina. If she wasn't so insane, she would easily have a nice life, a boyfriend and a school that was nicely built for her 50ft stature. But no, she just had to bully basically everyone in her life.
Thank you for writing and I'm looking forward to that epilogue.
Author's Response:
I thought it would be poetic justice to have Gina done in by the friend she was trying to mold in her own image before she could go on too much of a rampage.
I'm expecting a bit of blowback on Fulda not spending enough time tiny, and if so it'll be reasonable. Akane does have a point in that she's done a lot of damage and that'd be an appropriate punishment. But then, one of the people who's suffered most has forgiven her and wants her to be big. I was torn between the two, but I'm not going to make all my readers happy, so I went with what I thought was best.
Maybe Gina is to be pitied. It's not her fault she was given the ability to shrink people at a young age and let the power go to her head. But she could've used it for good too, and instead chose to do what she did.
And thank you for reviewing! I hope the epilogue is as satisfying as I expect it'll be.
Date: December 04 2019 2:50 PM Title: Going Out Tonight
Loving the story, can't wait to see the end.
Are we going to see what happened to shelby? Presumably she grew with gina and would be a lot larger now
Author's Response:
Thank you! The ending is coming very soon now. And we will find out what happened to Shelby and the others.
[Report This]Date: December 04 2019 2:15 PM Title: Bonds of Matrimony
Wow, I didn't expect the marriage to actually go through normally. Ooh, and by the fact that Gina hasn't simply crushed the entire thing out of pure jealousy, makes me think Gina still cares about the entire wedding party as people. I'm wondering what kind of plan Gina has to actually have a one inch tall boyfriend at her size. That would be completely impractical.
On the other hand I think that it's not nice for Gina to ruin a wedding like that. Couldn't she have let the wedding continue peacefully and ruined everything a bit later? And where is Akane?
At least it's a relief Anni didn't try to steal the groom. I thought that would maybe be the suprise you were talking about.
Thx for writing and until next time. Friday?
Author's Response:
Yeah, Fulda and her tiny man are married now! Gina wanted to demonstrate her absolute power to them before doing anything, she's all about showmanship. She's basically a giant villain gloating, she knows she's in control. Maybe she wants her tiny boyfriend just to have him? Even though she's millions of times his size, she still has strong feelings for him!
And pass up chance to show up her big sister? No way! Unfortunately, Akane didn't get to ride with Gina and Veronica and had to stay home.
Anni would never! Aside from that one moment of weakness she's always been fine with him and Fulda.
Thank you for reviewing! Friday for the big finale.
[Report This]Date: November 30 2019 5:03 PM Title: Going Out Tonight
Here's to hoping the Stein-protags have a plan to deal with Gina. Being in the same house as the one that wishes Ill will on you and your husband to be isn't the best laid plans.
Author's Response:
I think their plan for dealing with Gina here will shock a lot of people, as will their long-term solution.
[Report This]Date: November 30 2019 4:41 PM Title: Worlds Are Colliding
Nice to see that Janine accepts Fuldas fiancee. They do have quite a bit of guts entering the house. I would have called in the big guns as soon as I saw that huge house.
Janine and Fulda seem awfully calm for the impending dooom. It looks like Gina can simply steal "her" boyfriend back and simply crush the rest. I hope Fulda has a plan.
I bet that highschool is really glad Gina didn't turn up for classes. Now they still have most of a school left.
I'm eagerly waiting to see how this one turns out. Thank you for writing and see you next time!
Author's Response:
It's a family of giant women so they end up being more accepting of dating shorter men, whether they're an inch shorter or an inch tall.
They're brave people! Janine wasn't privy to Gina's threats, but Fulda isn't scared of her. You'll be surprised by their plan, I think.
Can you imagine a school trying to accomodate a 50 foot tall student? They'd go broke just expanding the doorways!
And thank you for reviewing! It's coming down to the wire now, and I'm having to make myself space out uploading them.
[Report This]Date: November 28 2019 3:00 PM Title: Setting a Trap
Aww, the poor neighbours houses got removed and we didn't get to see any of it :(
And now they can't even live to tell the tale.
And indeed they recognize that they should be terrorizing the city by now. They should definetely do that instead of lure Fulda and her tiny fiancee into a trap. Or hurt Akane.
Gina should know Akane is right and she is one of the good girls. At least they didn't trash her like the terrarium. I didn't think they would do that after putting so much effort into making it a nice place to live.
As always, thank you for writing! And I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
With the neighbors gone, nothing's standing in their way. Maybe they'll go for the whole block next if they have time. They're bigger than the houses now, so they shouldn't have much trouble clearing them out.
Is Akane right, though? It seems like Gina has the upper hand here, and hse's moving on to bigger and better things.
Thank you for reviewing! The next chapter's going to be a doozie, I've been working on it for several days.
[Report This]Date: November 27 2019 12:12 AM Title: Going Out Tonight
It tries to autocorrect to that because my phone keyboard has multiple languages set and it tries to guess which one it is by the first few words. It guessed wrong this time.
I'm looking forward to reading the ending. Knowing you it will at least be interesting.
Author's Response:
What languages???
Also as my most consistent and polite reviewer I'd like to specifically offer you a request, so please hit me up if you want me to write something for you!
[Report This]Date: November 26 2019 11:21 AM Title: Going Out Tonight
* poor design firm
Ugh, autocorrect
Author's Response:
Not sure why it would've autocorrected TO that, but I understood it anyway :)
[Report This]Date: November 25 2019 4:33 PM Title: Setting the Stage
Poot design doen, Fulda probably has the entire company under her thumb by now.
Nice to see that the clerk was so willing to help them. But I don't think she really had a choice. I know Fulda is not Gina, but I think Fulda still woudltn appreciate the clerk not wanting to marry her.
Now let's hope everything goes smoothly with the wedding and Gina doesn't ruin it for everybody.
Thank you for writing and until next time!
Author's Response:
Professionally, Fulda knows the best way to wow people is through good work and a positive attitude. She saves her nastiness for people who deserve it, like that clerk almost did.
Yeah, things always work out for the best when I'm writing. :P I just hope people like the saga's ending.
You're welcome, and thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: November 23 2019 4:22 PM Title: Back to Basics
Somebody has to notice a huge gymnasium is missing right? At some point, bureaucracy should catch up to Gina and lead to her arrest right?
It surprises me that Akane didn't leave to house to get help either. Does Gina have everyone under a spell or something?
Thank you for writing, and I'm looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response:
Sure, they'll notice, but what'll they do about it? No one would believe that it got shrunken and carried away by hand, and Veronica got all the witnesses.
Don't underestimate fear as a motivator for Akane, if she escaped Gina could find her and then her life would get dramatically worse.
You're welcome! I intend to have the whole story wrapped by the end of the year.
[Report This]Date: November 23 2019 2:47 PM Title: Back to Basics
Gina is so great! I'm always rooting for her.
Author's Response:
Things certainly seem to be going her way now, don't they?
[Report This]Date: November 06 2019 3:58 PM Title: Nasty Old Habits
I'm away for a bit and there are already two new chapters waiting. Thank you!
The first chapter was pretty hot. And it seems Fulda is expanding her shrink service. Let's hope Mia doesn't accidentally waltz poor Jesse flat.
And how Nice they got engaged. Rightfully so, they are perfect for each other.
Author's Response:
Fulda's just getting back to what she does best and trying to be better about it, but Mia may not be the most responsible giantess out there.
Of course they're engaged! It's not like he'll be out seeing other people, and explaining the tiny man who lives in your apartment would be an awkward conversation to have with a partner.
Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: November 04 2019 5:48 AM Title: Going Out Tonight
I must admit that I was indeed a bit surprised Gina was being so considerate of her neighbors and didn't simply waltz everything flat. And zoning laws? Maybe bureaucracy will be the key to defeating Gina. Either that, or simply talking some sense into her.
Author's Response:
Gina just doesn't want the authorities to get involved yet, and having the cops called on her over something as silly as zoning laws would really steam her. It's only a temporary setback until she can figure out how to do it without the neighbors complaining.
[Report This]Date: November 03 2019 5:49 AM Title: Best Served Cold
I didn't expect this one. I was pretty sure the house would collapse and already had the "Gina needs to go on a diet" jokes ready but oh well, this is even better. A full blown rampage. I think somebody really regrets making a building with doors that are too small for Gina.
Seems like Gina really does want revenge, and this time she is really thorough. I hope certain people moved far far away from that city. But I ku at admit that I'm not sure that moving away is enough to escape Gina's world conquering attitude. Where did the times go when she was satisfied when just making short jokes about Fuldas boyfriend?
It's a pity Akane is small now. I wished she was the biggest of all.
Thank you for writing!
Author's Response:
Gina's rampage is yet to come. You think she'll be satisfied at 20 feet? 50? She and Roni are going to keep going, damn the zoning laws.
Revenge is, appropriately enough, the main theme of this, and after months as a temporarily embarrassed giantess Gina wants to get hers. Fulda lives far enough away that she's safe for now, but who can say what the future holds? Akane at least just just back to her regular size, which compared to Gina is quite small, admittedly.
And thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: October 06 2019 3:16 PM Title: Back on Top
This was inevitable. Gina wants to be a giantess so badly. And maybe she is right in that she should be a giantess. She has been a giantess for minutes and she has already opressed everything around her including the poor house. It
seems like exactly nothing Akane ever said for through to her. I predict that an unhealthy time for the people in Gina's town will arrive now that she needs to establish who is boss again.
But maybe this time Gina will cause enough trouble to blow her cover and finally gets arrested, but I hope it happens before she realizes she wants to steal her tiny boyfriend back from Fulda.
Also, thank you for writing and I see the next chapter is also already up... I'm getting behind with my reading... I'm looking forward to reading that
Author's Response:
If nothing Akane said sanke in, the Gina would have smashed her without reservation. Maybe she's a little gentler, or just ascertaining about her reach?
For sure Gina is going to stir some trouble up, but whether that's enough to draw people in remains to be seen. She's very crafty, and operates onj a time scale outside fo what we normally consider.
I appreciate you reading! And if you want to review the next chapter too I sure won't fight you.,