[Report This]Date: September 13 2018 4:33 PM Title: Lesson #2: Butt Munching
amazing story. totally no more feet plots, I would love more ass. scat would also be great. maybe make her shrink more and she becomes an ass parasite, lost forever.
Date: September 01 2018 2:14 AM Title: Lesson #0: Prologue
I like this. Good writing, so good action. I do like that she feels a bit bad, and that she still cares about her sister. I'd like to actually see that played up a bit more, like giving her a nice meal, nicer than what she would normally give a tiny
[Report This]Date: August 27 2018 7:14 PM Title: Lesson #2: Butt Munching
I like how she feel bad alittle but can’t help it. Let’s continue down that path, molly doesn’t want to go fast with her sister or be cuel but because she’s so turned on she can’t help it and wants to feel her inside her. The ultimate humiliation, force her sister inside her ass, since her tongues too tired anyway molly wants to feel her wiggle inside her. Lets have it where Anna can breath and live in there. After molly has orgasms she keeps Anna in there for safe keeping til later. Be even better as the story progresses Anna becomes super submissive and can’t help starting to like being used and smother in between molly giant cheeks hugging her and considers the inside of molly ass and her home and bed. Favourite place to sleep
[Report This]Date: August 27 2018 3:55 PM Title: Lesson #2: Butt Munching
Well, you could always go the way of inception and have her go Deeper.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2018 5:20 PM Title: Lesson #1: Initiation
Molly is the best sister ever.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2018 4:56 PM Title: Lesson #1: Initiation
Anna....you already kissed her feet. How was licking it any worse. You blew it Anna. Molly was actually being nice, not very nice mind you what with the slavery, but nicer than she had to be.
I like Molly's dynamic with Anna. Seeming slightly unsure about her power over her sis and still caring just a little. I kind of feel bad for all the begging Anna did though. She really thinks her life's in danger! Whether it is remains to be seen.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2018 10:15 AM Title: Lesson #0: Prologue
I really hope Molly becomes a Shrinkee too, after she tortured her sister a bit more, then the mother can have fun with both of them.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I had that idea some time ago too, but that's a bit far into the future so I haven't given it much thought yet.
Date: August 26 2018 9:23 AM Title: Lesson #1: Initiation
awesome! i hope she gets the chance to make up for not licking her feet.
Author's Response:
Don't worry there will a lot of feet content after a chapter or two
Date: August 25 2018 11:46 PM Title: Lesson #0: Prologue
very interesting start!
Date: August 25 2018 4:50 PM Title: Lesson #0: Prologue
Thanks for replying! I can't really remember what I'd commented, but I'll just say I'm sure Molly will be a kind and benevolent master to her....pfffft! Probably not. Anna also doesn't seem very tough so she may be in for a difficult time. I'm sure it'll end well for both of them...eventually....maybe.
[Report This]Date: August 25 2018 4:39 PM Title: Lesson #0: Prologue
Long live Molly.
Date: August 25 2018 3:42 PM Title: Lesson #0: Prologue
Great start so far. Can't wait to read the nexts parts. I am especially excited about the scat part!
I really hope her sister is going to do some really nasty stuff to her.
Thanks for the story an keep going
Author's Response:
Haha thanks, I'll try to give consistent updates.
Date: August 25 2018 1:50 PM Title: Lesson #0: Prologue
Thanks, I'll keep updating it.
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Okay, so mistake on my part, I accidently deleted "NotSirk's review so I'll reply to it over here.
1. Firstly, I was trying to keep the prologue as short as possible so yes it did seem a bit fast, I'll write more in the next chapters so don't worry.
2. True, there was a lack of emotional depth since they were sisters, so I'll try to cover for that in the oncoming chapters.
3. And as for your question about the hate for shrinkers? Well, they are tiny and deprived of their rights, being tiny makes them a burden and having no rights.... well you can see where that's going. And this is the environment these people have grown in so yeah, the indifference or uncaring attitude for them is pretty much ingrained?
Date: August 25 2018 11:05 AM Title: Lesson #0: Prologue
Love sibling rivalries, looking forward to this
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'll try to get the next chapter done in the next 2 or 3 days.