Date: October 23 2018 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
I think this is the part where he attempts suicide, but Camilla just barely stops him
Date: October 23 2018 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great, I'm done, no point in reading further, just because Mark is Mark he can be burtalized, I doubt he did anything like that to Camilla, and that he used that level of strength, this is just men getting shafted cause they are men, no redeeming attrubites to the women.
I may as well throw myself into a volient crimals cell or see if I can't use a hammer to break my hand into meat. It started with some potentail it's a shame that all the author can do is write an ever darker universe, I fear for his sanity and well-being.
Date: October 08 2018 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
What's with the voliance in chapters 3 and 4. Yeah I get defending yourself against and aggressor (3), but three women just letting Lynn do that to Phil for what 45 minutes and over what her daughter being a touch distressed that daddy raised his voice at her darling. I mean how would males react today if one of their "side" did that at the least police would of been called. You know injuries were inflected or Phil would of been at the send off.
Hoping Camilla listens to her conscience, she knows what Lynn did was wrong, to blithley state "that's the way things are' isn't how decent people regardless of thier power should act. Maybe she calms down and realizes she overreacted with her dad (wanting to hurt him and enjoying the prospect), and that maybe her, Carly and Hannah should check on Phil. Maybe confront Lynn on it, perhaps start thinking how they would like if the shoe was on the other foot (Camilla keeps stating it's for the 'men's' benefit would like her to place herself in Phil and her father's shoes before accepting things as they are and maybe try adjusting things so that even if the world is female dominant Males would get some protection-and not like the MOB 'protection' they are currently getting and more then pet awards for learning how to cook from ground start! (college level effort but men are 'simple')Would like for Phil to be her canary in the coal mine and know if he is being abused then it is wrong for her to do it.
80-90% of men through out history have been decent, hard working and kind to their suposes, it's the 1 to 2% that ruin it for the rest. It seems that at least 25% of women in your world (perhaps 90%) just want to play wack a male for petty reasons.
Finally after 'disciplining' Phil for 45 minutes for one sentence out of line what does Lynn think Mia's going to do to him and others even though she disobeyed her as well maybe Camilla could bring that up. As with other reviewers we'll see were this goes...
Date: October 07 2018 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
Not many stories with "changing times" theme liking this one. wonder how big the women will get. Having a tiny petite woman now tower over the men was nice.
Will have to agree with Bigdawg K about Camilla, hoping she won't turn full villain and be brainwashed by the ladies. Seems Camilla still has a decent conscience but feeling good about hurting her Dad is a slippery slope. Will Mark kick her out of HIS house if she hurts him then what will she do. What will happen if Camilla makes Mark submissive will she then take care of him and her siblings having to drop out of school and find a better paying job?
I see this in many size stories women treating their husbands/brothers like pets or toys just throwing away all the time/love they shared in a heart beat. Guessing the statement power tends to corrupt is true in many stories. I know its a story I'm just thinking out loud.
Keep up the good work can't wait for more.
Date: October 07 2018 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
This is getting to be an large bit on the dark side for me, the first two chapters were good if not very good, but at the end of the fourth you are starting to lose me. From implication Phil at best had his head yelled off by Lynn and at worst was beaten within an inch of his life for what raising his voice to his own child? Did Lynn the disciplatary punish her wonderful Mia for not follow her instructions? Does she care that her actions will lead to Mia hurting, raping and/or killing poeple cause nothing happens to her, but she makes the least sound and mommy beats the living Sh!t out of daddy so it's ok!
Camilla knows Lynn is wrong, next chapter or one after I would like for her to see what her go along to get along attitude created and see Phil as hurt as he is, perhaps even take him as a morality center on how far to go while estiblishing domanince. It's too easy to say men are meat targets without rights and any assult wouldn't be followed up by the police, if men did that there would be no civilization.
I am hoping in the next few Chapters Camilla at least gets to grey anti-hero status, in that yes she's moving her father to reality, but she also sees things she can change (such as Phil's status) and works to help men at least land on a pillow rather then spikes you seem to have set up for them. That she moves Carly and Hannah her way and possibly moves Lynn to a redemation arc.
It stared great and I will withhold judgement for the next couple of chapters, but if I want burtality and humans being treated worse then slaves and/or stray animals I will watch cows being butchered...
[Report This]Date: September 24 2018 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love that continue :p And don't shrink dad please :O
[Report This]Date: August 28 2018 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hmm, it seems it is time for Mark to simply submit to Camilla, but that wouldn't be fun right?
Your stories always describe this slowly falling in to submission and loosing all power thing very well!
Also, thank you for writing!
Date: August 28 2018 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Aww man, you're back. I've been waiting for this for a long time
[Report This]Date: August 27 2018 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm really digging this. Is Camilla getting bigger while she grows into her role, or is her confidence making the other men, or at least her dad, shrink? I'm really looking forward to seeing more of this and finding out!
Date: August 27 2018 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
Absolutely amazing the slow play is awesome
Date: August 21 2018 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. Is the dad gonna start shrinking? I like the idea of him having to look up to his younger kids too, maybe even treat him like a doll, while camilla towers over him.
[Report This]Date: August 20 2018 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Though the background introduce is a little bit long and slow I am still so happy to see you come back. Your story will be brilliant in no doubt. Thank you for coming back with a new one.