Date: September 22 2018 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
Gentle giantess, medieval world -- you're speaking my language! While I'm not particularly into feet focused stories, this is pretty good. I'm a bit puzzled by Elise. Is her demeanor as queen all an act since that's how the other giants expect her to behave?
Author's Response: I won't lie to you, it's a very feet-centric story. However, I was planning to work in some other material here and there. Don't tell anyone. I'll deny it. As for your question about Elise, that will be covered in the next chapter. I had always planned the next chapter that way, swear I'm not making it up as I go along. Well, not all the time...
[Report This]Date: September 02 2018 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Smart play from Elise to acquire a new servant. Also a great way to impress her subjects.
Thanks for writing a new chapter!
Author's Response: It will be interesting to see who comes out on top in the end. I have not decided the ending yet, could swing either way.
Date: September 01 2018 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't know how I didn't stumble upon this sooner! Love the little twist with her ending up being the Queen, and I am interested to see how their relationship plays out! Great story so far and I look forward to more.
Author's Response: I am working on the next chapter. I fear I may have gotten a little carried away with this one! It will really be something. I had intended for it to be a short interlude type of chapter, but it may end up being the longest chapter in the story.
[Report This]Date: September 01 2018 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
This whole time I've been suspecting she was the Queen's daughter, then after the reveal I was second guessing. Wondering if maybe she's the Queen's twin and he hadn't realized it. Wondering if she is the Queen's twin, does the Queen have the same reservations about squashing humans? Gotta say, that was a clevar way for him to get him into the casle. As always, looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: That was a good guess. You weren't too far off. I had considered making Elise's mother part of the plot, but I have a tendency to make things too complex if I don't watch myself. There's always a very real possibility of creating a story that is so complex that it becomes impossible to write. I was planning to let this story sit for a while, but I had a great idea for the next chapter. I've never written anything quite like what I have planned. Should be interesting.
[Report This]Date: August 28 2018 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
Lol it only just occured to me that the two stories that I've been most watching out for on the Most Recent page are both yours. Like you said "Come for the feet, stay for the story" I guess. As always, I look forward to the next chapter and where things go
Author's Response: There's an option in account preferences to be notified by email when your favorite stories are updated. I think many people are unaware of that option. I only discovered it when a reader pointed it out to me. I know it can be easy to miss things in the Most Recent section. New stories often get buried as soon as they're uploaded.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2018 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
Seems Marcus is quite powerful. Easily more powerful than Elise, I'm starting to wonder who is helping who in this story.
But at least we have some more feet this chapter!
Also, thank you for writing!
Author's Response: Come for the foot stuff, stay for the story! :D Keep reading, it will only get more interesting. I mean, unless I manage to mess it up.
Date: August 20 2018 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'd force the bandits to suck out every drop of poison from her feet using magic
Author's Response: I like the way you think!
[Report This]Date: August 19 2018 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
Such a cute story!
And how nice of our protagonist to offer a foot rub.
Can't wait for the foot stuff to drop.
Also thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'll try to make it interesting.
Date: August 18 2018 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Really looking forward to seeing more of this one. Can’t wait to where things go between Elise and Marcus.
Author's Response: If I somehow manage to do it properly, things will hopefully go in ways you never expected!
Date: August 18 2018 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Again a nice chapter keep it up.
Author's Response: I'm having fun with this story. The last chapter was basically free form writing. I have some future chapters already planned. Can't say how long this story will be yet, but I'll probably continue until I run out of ideas.
Date: August 17 2018 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
A good Start!
Author's Response: You better keep reading if you liked the beginning. It should only get better from here.
Date: August 15 2018 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice first chapter i hope the two will be a nice couple.
Author's Response: I believe they will have an interesting relationship, perhaps a bit strained at times.
[Report This]Date: August 15 2018 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wanna read more!
Author's Response: There will be lots more to read. I can guarantee that much.
Date: August 14 2018 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really looking forward to a more substantive addition to this, I like the start.
Author's Response: Buckle up! It's gonna get weird.