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Reviewer: teradonk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2018 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

very promising story! Lucas is in a predonkament. if i was him, i'd be in that hole fapping away.

Reviewer: Benja999 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2018 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really good start!

Please keep writing we have far to few stories with scat content. I cant wait for the next chapters and I am thrilled to read them. Hope this story goes on and you will write some more.

 

Thanks for the story

Reviewer: clubby88 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2018 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

terrible to read. please reformat until I wont read it. use proper spaces between parts.

Reviewer: KindaEmbarassed Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2018 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey man killer start to a hot story, one teeny suggestion is how its formatted. I would definitely reccomend chunking it into paragraphs for the sake of readability! It can get a little disorienting when the story is one big block of text, but I'm definitely looking forward to chapter 2!

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