[Report This]Date: October 24 2018 10:10 PM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
Really enjoyed it once again. I look forward to seeing interactions with all 3 of them.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2018 3:41 PM Title: Facing her Fears
I really hope the ladies are going shoe shopping!
:))))
Author's Response: They might be, only time will see :)
[Report This]Date: October 23 2018 6:42 PM Title: Facing her Fears
Just more.
Author's Response: I will hope to have the next chapter out sooner rather than later, glad to see that you're itching for more!
Date: October 09 2018 3:07 AM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
Really like this kind of setting and the characters involved in this story, and also where the plot is going.
The whole bus thing also reminds me of a smiliar idea I had so long ago that I forgot about it. I really appreciate you writing down this concept into a story, so thank you :)
I'll be checking this story for updates. In the mean time I whish you good work.
[Report This]Date: September 27 2018 5:26 PM Title: "Fond" Memories
A wonderful chapter, rare to see a giant type get a redemption arc.
Author's Response: Right? Even if they’ve done terrible things like Carissa has, doesn’t mean they can’t at least try to fix things.
Date: September 19 2018 8:05 AM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
Just popped in to say that I'm looking forward to reading the new chapter. And it looks like the story isn't over yet? That's great news! When I can take a break from writing my own stories, this will be the first story I read. I think I'll re-read it from the very beginning.
Author's Response: I look forward to see how you think the story is evolving! Hope your stories go well, maybe I’ll take a look over there and see how they’re doing ;)
Date: September 19 2018 12:26 AM Title: Some Fun
i'm glad this is not the last. things are about to get interesting :)
Date: September 18 2018 3:11 AM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
Fantastic addition. Would have loved to see more of the foot massage. Hopefully next time. Curious to see where it goes as well
Date: September 03 2018 8:14 AM Title: The Date
Nice story.
I liked the foot relates part.
I hope to see more feet in the story
[Report This]Date: August 24 2018 11:52 AM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
Well, Chapter 4 was great, but you say that there is only one more chapter. I can't help but be disappointed. It felt like the story was just getting started. I guess I'm curious to see if the ending will be happy or tragic. The story seems like it is getting cut short rather abruptly, which leans more toward something unfortunate happening.
Date: August 23 2018 11:43 AM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
A new chapter! Yessss! I was getting nervous. Can't wait to read more.
Date: August 23 2018 12:38 AM Title: The Date
you really got me curious about the asian market now. nice story so far, quite original to say the least
Date: August 13 2018 2:08 PM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
Hope I didn't scare you off because of a tiny bit of constructive criticism. Seems like this story is already dying off. That's fairly typical for this site. No judgement here.
Author's Response: Oh no, I’ve just been busy lately. I had to rewrite the next chapter as it felt a little too rushed into what I’m hopefully planning. I hope to have the next chapter out before the end of the week. Hopefully.
Date: August 10 2018 3:28 PM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
It would be really interesting if it turned out that Zavannah knows Marleigh, like they're friendly coworkers or something like that. Zavannah drops Jackie at Marleigh's place, and is surprised that Marleigh is hanging out with micro people. That could be a fun scenario.
I guess some readers are hoping it will turn into some kind of lesbian sex triangle insertion fest, but honestly that would detract from the story, especially this early in the story. Again, best criticism I can offer is don't rush it. I noticed more grammar mistakes in this chapter than the first two. Some of the wording was awkward and hard to understand.
Date: August 07 2018 3:32 PM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
I need to reread this latest chapter once more before I can post a full review, but I like the potential possibilities it brings to the table.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2018 2:57 AM Title: Another Girl
Ooooh this was a fun chapter, Zavannah seems really cool as well and would be interesting to see her interact with fellow giantess Marleigh, imagine two humongous giantesses interacting with cute itty bitty Jackie, the possibilities are endless.
The anthology series idea sounds amazing. I love to be surprised so can't wait to see what ideas you have for it. I love this story and I hope Zavannah plays a good sized part in it, I absolutely love gentle giantesses who are friendly and playful with cute tinies. I hope Jackie has a LOT of fun in the next chapter.
Date: August 06 2018 11:11 PM Title: Another Girl
Another great chapter :)
Nice work introducing another Micro-transport service woman, that was unexpected. And it's cool seeing other forms of 'transport' aside from boots, platform sandals are a nice touch.
Jackie seems to be a magnet for big friendly ladies XD
Hope to see more Jackie (and Marleigh ) soon
(jackie and Marleigh are my OTP at this point, even though it's not even at that stage yet XD)
[Report This]Date: August 04 2018 5:17 PM Title: The Second Ride
Another solid chapter! Honestly, I just want to read more. Don't even care if we have to wait a while for the "good stuff" to start. There's a serious lack of good stories on this site lately, but your story is good.
Date: August 03 2018 9:42 AM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
Another good chapter, I enjoyed the one on one interaction. I hope to see some physical interaction eventually, but I really like this so far