Date: September 03 2018 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 4: Lets Talk About What Happened.
Nice chapter. I really hope Mimi doesn't notice Roy until after she finishes the sandwhich, and has already swallowed Roy. As well as that Roy lives but has to come out the other side. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll do my best not to dissapoint!
Date: July 25 2018 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 3: Mimi's Mini Mistake
Excellent progress
Author's Response:
And with that a break that lasted a month!
Hahaha sorry for the wait. I am going to try and speed up again. Wanna pump this out!
Date: July 25 2018 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: Small Summer Slip Up
Honestly would love to see Roy willingly be eaten by her. I think he'd truly allow her to experience what she apparently is yearning for. Another great chapter ^^
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your feedback. There is a good chance he might like being inside his friend. Haha
[Report This]Date: July 25 2018 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 3: Mimi's Mini Mistake
Well, not much happened in this chapter, but I love how Mimi is starting to get some crazy ideas. Makes me wonder what she will try next. Loved how she thought "anywhere on my body...". I'm hoping she meant someplace below her waist, haha.
Well, you answered all my doubts on Sarah having all this access. Her parents told her to check in Mimi and Sarah also has a key. I like her suspicious behaviour, but her attitude feels like a little kid than someone older than them. Kids usually tease about people starting relationships and making fun of that. I think someone older might do a slight tease and add some advice here and there. I liked how Sarah said that she would keep Roy in her bed. That's something an older person would say. Would love to see some more of that.
Gotta agree with rhino. How did Roy sleep through the boob bouncy house and also sleep through the throat tunnel of terror. One of those rides should have woken him up. Lol.
I'm hoping Mimi begins to do more naughty things to Roy and also have more confidence when she does it. She seems hesistant and I would love to see her fantasies and lust take over. We got a glimpse of that when she almost swallowed him. Perhaps there are another pair of lips further down her body that would like to swallow Roy too.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Mimi definetly gonna be *ahem* using Roy a bit more in the future. We still have 11 more days for them to play. Haha!
Also I am glad you like Sarah though. Gotta make use of her too!
[Report This]Date: July 25 2018 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 3: Mimi's Mini Mistake
Nice update, I think Roy is the heaviest sleeper in the history of mankind. I'd be kicking myself if I slept through that. Just curious if Sarah is gonna have some other roll besides the annoying nieghbor? I definitely like their alone times, doesn't seem like Mimi can resist much longer! Keep it going!
Author's Response:
Gotta say. I kinda want his heavy sleeping to be a character troupe of his now.
As for Sarah she will definetly be back no worries.
[Report This]Date: July 25 2018 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 3: Mimi's Mini Mistake
Bahaha, nice xD
Author's Response:
Hahaha! Alliteration. Love it.
Date: July 25 2018 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 3: Mimi's Mini Mistake
Thank you so much!
I have amways wanted to make likeable characters in a story.
Author's Response:
*Always
Sorry tiny screen keyboard
[Report This]Date: July 25 2018 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 3: Mimi's Mini Mistake
They are so cute together. Now let's hope that pesky Sarah doesn't ruin everything!
I think this is one of the unexpectedly very good stories on this website, thank you for writing it and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for enjoying. I am really liking them together too!
Date: July 24 2018 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Small Summer Slip Up
Really enjoy this so far ^^. Keep up the fantastic work :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
I'm aiming to pump these out every night until completion!
I'll do my best! XD
[Report This]Date: July 24 2018 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 2: Give Us Some Alone Time
Great update, I really love Mimi's excitement about Roy's condition. Sounds like she has some plans for Roy already in the making. Can't wait to see how Roy will respond to his new out look on life. Is there any plans for some panty entrapment in your story? Would love to see some of that .
I really like your writing style it's really easy to follow the story. You definitely have got me hooked to this story till the end, which hopefully isn't for a while.
Author's Response:
Wow thank you so much! That's awesome to read! I am often worried if any of this is hitting it's mark.
As for the panty scenario I would have to say that is very possible as Mimi has veen waiting for this for a while.
[Report This]Date: July 24 2018 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 2: Give Us Some Alone Time
This is a great setup to what I hope will be a great story.
First off, I love the description you provided for your story. It was sexy how you described these kids being alone for 2 weeks and how the giantess has a crush on the little guy.
The time of 2 weeks is good becuase it puts pressure on Mimi to have her fun before her parents come back. In addition, while Roy is asleep, it allows Mimi to do things to him while he can't verbally refuse.
I'm really excited to see the relationship between Mimi and Roy to blossom so the appearance of Sarah kind of ruins the moment. Personally, I think she should have been introduced later on in the story when Mimi starts to run out of ideas.
Hopefully Sarah just leaves them alone and is available for future chapters to make things interesting. Also, how did Sarah know that Mimi was staying? She walked through that front door as if it's her own house. Maybe Mimi could hide and perhaps Sarah will think Mimi is on the vacation too.
The "wish" Mimi keeps mentioning seems like she wants to have sex with Roy. She mentioned that she wants to be more than friends so this makes this opportunity much easier for her.
You mentioned that you want to make us imagine their age, but I can't help but think they are around high school age since the parents were asking if Mimi was ok staying home alone. If she was at least a college girl, I wouldn't imagine her parents being that concerned. Then again, they may has asked that because she was "sick", but the way her father asked Mimi seemed like it's the first time Mimi stayed alone at home.
I love the size of 3 inches. Perfect size for a giantess to wrap their hand around him. About the size of a finger.
I love how playful and anxious Mimi is about going to the next level with Roy. I would love to see Mimi hide Roy in the front of her underwear where Roy is awake and he is facing her crotch as her panties are at his back pressing him into her. We already see Mimi hide Roy in her cleavage and I think it's a great step in the right direction.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Wow thank you so much for your interest in my story TomSpeedy! I really appreciate this review! I mean it.
I will take your ideas into consideration! Although I have already pretty much already mapped this out in my head.
Haha I was trying to keep the age as vague as possible! Haha
Also I love 3 inches! I really think it's the perfect size for stories like this!
Date: July 24 2018 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: Small Summer Slip Up
I guess leaving some details vague lets the reader be able to have their imagination run wild and enables them to picture whatever they want the characters to be, like the age for example.
Author's Response:
Yeah exactly! Glad you get what I was going for.
Date: July 24 2018 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: Small Summer Slip Up
mmm fantastic
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: July 23 2018 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: Small Summer Slip Up
Nice start! Love the senario, can't wait to see what's gonna happen. Your pretty good for the first time.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I hope I do not dissapoint.
Date: July 23 2018 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Small Summer Slip Up
I like the story so far, but I'm confused of what their ages are. It seems they graduated high school since you mentioned Mimi's dad at their graduation or are they in high school and the graduation thing was for middle school.
Author's Response:
I was thinking of leaving some details vague so some readers wouldn't feel bad thinking about these characters.
What do you think about that idea Sereum?
[Report This]Date: July 23 2018 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: Small Summer Slip Up
Intriguing!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Date: July 23 2018 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Small Summer Slip Up
Great start. I’m a dollsize 6-12 inches fan more but sounds good
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll try not to dissapoint.
Date: July 23 2018 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: Small Summer Slip Up
please, more!
it starts to get interesting
I'm sorry, my english is bad
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll do my best!
Also don't worry about it.
Date: July 23 2018 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 1: Small Summer Slip Up
Nice chapter. With the title I wonder if Roy will end up in Mimi's mouth, and if so, is Roy going to end up swallowed. Hope so, especially if he lives through it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Iam actually really into mouthplay and vore so that is very possible! I'll try and post as iften as possible. Let me know whatcha think.