Hey vorepop thanks for the reply. Great to see you are still active.  I think Aiata's smell won't suit Mimi, cause mimi is more of a tomboy figure than a hardcore feminine energy.  A smell that is slightly sweet but also elegant.  the smell should be something that evoke Roy's childhood nostalgia with Mimi and give him flashbacks.  Maybe something related to Mimi's favorite food. 

Nice chapter. The mouthplay was good but I believe it would have been better if you mentioned how Mimi's mouth smelled like.  For me smell is a huge factor. It also help strengthen  personality type. Example- Aiata's mouth smelling like candy, Sarah's mouth smelling like Lavender. But sadly Mimi Don't have any unique feature like this. She should have a smell Roy instantly will recognize.

I found those Mimi's shrimp flashback scene very hot. Mimi instinctively being a pred seems like. 

And Roy know what vore is! He is one of us seems like. 

Loved this chapter. I especially love it when the one who is suppose to protect you, lost themself to lust and pleasure and turn Against you. It's just so hot to think about. 

Mimi and Roy are practically soul mate. But will their deep bond save Roy from becoming a tiny treat? 

Awesome story so far! :3

This is incredible. I read the first 11 chapters yesterday and chapter 12 today, oh boy 20,000 was a lot but a good read. You have a full length novel here man. 

This has been a crazy ride. You've been knocking it out of the park. I don't even know which parts to talk about. Mimi has been such an interesting character. Watching her relationship with Roy has been so entertaining, the two are able to quip at each other so easily. And how she denies his taste. No wonder Sarah teases her so much about the two of them. 

I wasn't as big of a fan of Sarah at first because she seemed like more of an obstacle than a character, but Chapter 11 was HOT. Her playing with him between her boobs was so good; that method of showering a tiny is definitely one I'd love to revisit myself. And seeing how she was careful with him during the shower was satisfying. 

(Before continuing, I'd like to say that your story gave me some inspiration and motivation for my own writing. I'm working on a couple of stories myself, one I'm posting as I finish each chapter which doesn't really have a concrete plot-arc(it's definitely more on the erotica side and just continuous character interactions; if interested: https://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=11291) and another which has a plot and character arcs that I won't post until I've finished). 

Quality over quantity(although you have given both) so don't feel bad if it's not coming as quickly as you'd like. 

I am very curious that Roy didn't even talk about Punishment #2. What would the consequences of that be and how did he not want to jump at that opportunity? He really cares about those two doesn't he. 

You are the author but my own preference for every story is to be non-fatal. I never have really understood the fatal part of the fetish, in my mind it just stops all the fun with the death while non-fatal keeps the fun going forever. So usually I like the tiny to be indestructible, although not necessarily invulnerable(pain can be fun) because it allows for more opportunities. I really hope that he doesn't die from it. I know that's a very likely direction for the story that would be bittersweet, but poignant, but I really hope Roy lives. Who knows what the wish will be. (I really hope it's for him to be tiny and not die of anything but old age so the fun continues).

So far it's been amazing and I think you'll continue to astound.

Have to admit I was kind of thinking that insertion tag would show here based on how last chapter ended but instead.... the plot thickens! Still loving this story! 

Yay, another chapter <B – and you even did it before Halloween (2021 :P).

As for team Sarah or team Mimi: I don't really know... On one side, I'm a big fan of personal space, and Sarahs behaviour has been quite obnoxious in the previous chapters.

On the other side: Like Blitz19 said, Sarahs desire to eat Roy is fucking hot! And I think Mimi loves Roy very much – which means that she would be willing to play and maybe he's even in for another short stomach trip – but she would never really eat him.

As for Sarah on the other side... I think she likes Roy, but she does not really love him like Mims does. So I'd expect Sarah to be much more reckless – which is really damn hot! And since I'm still hoping for some dangerous game to go wrong or another cause for tragical digestion... so I guess I'm team Sarah?

More! Gimme moore :D

Can't wait for the next chapter :)

OMG., you're back!!!

I really love this story and I'm so happy it's not dead!!

It's been a while but good to see you back, a good chapter too. I enjoyed having a look through your DA work too.