[Report This]Date: December 08 2019 4:57 PM Title: Ch1: Encountering The Lady of the Plains (Preview)
I know this is one of your older stories, but it’s still probably my favorite of yours!
Fire Emblem giantess isn’t that uncommon, but ones featuring old characters are super rare. So seeing someone make such a long story about it is incredible. I could go on about this for a while, but I’ll keep it short.
I love the unique relationship the protagonist with everyone. You really let each of the character’s personalities shine through with their interactions. The story was a nice adjustment of the prologue from the game, which was pretty cool.
I loved all of the inshoe action, and the ending was sort of sweet. And I’m pleasantly surprised that you included Florina on some of the action, that was a real pleasant surprise. Overall, amazing work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I'm a big fan of Fire Emblem 7, so I felt like I had to write a story about it. And Lyn was just such a cool protagonist that it made writing her, and the rest of her gang to be even more fun.
I really tried to nail all of their personalities, and I'm glad that I succeeded on that front.
And Florina is great, so of course she had to play a big role.
It's always nice to hear about which stories people enjoy the most.
Take care!
[Report This]Date: November 13 2018 1:25 PM Title: Ch1: Encountering The Lady of the Plains (Preview)
Yes! Best girl has arrived! (Personal bias) beyond that your writing continues to be excellent. I like the character writing bits that make the foot stuff even better when it arrives.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I'm pretty surprised by how many people love Serra on here. Not that I'm complaining! You'll probably enjoy the next chapter then.
And I'm glad you like how I try to mix the character stuff with everything else. While I love to go into detail, moving the plot and developing the characters is pretty important too.
Take care!
[Report This]Date: July 15 2018 1:08 PM Title: Ch1: Encountering The Lady of the Plains (Preview)
This is starting out great! Based on your past works I'm sure this will be great for foot interaction fans. Plus this game is the one with Serra, who in canon really wants people to be her servants and rub her feet.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I took a while to respond to this one, so sorry about that. But by now, you can see that Serra will be making her named appearance by the next chapter. And she'd definitely be an interesting one to do interactions for, even if she's not my fave.
Take care!