Can only hope that there is more of this story to come. As it left off on one heck of a cliff hanger. But the three chapters that I read were pretty amazing. The attention to detail of both the physical and emotional sides of things made it very easy to envision the events unfolding through Michelle's eyes. 

For whatever reason it's rare that you see sizeplay stories with shrunken women. And rarer still where there is both a male and female protagonist. So that was a heck of a pleasant suprise. Even if my heart did ache for poor Michelle and everything that she went through. There can be no denying that I found the whole thing sexy as hell too. :) 

Really hot! Keep going!

Wow this was amazing!! Hope to see more soon! There’s a severe lack of M/f stories on here and on the internet in general (and let me add, well written ones like this one). Can’t wait to see where this story goes.